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Hi , everyone. i am a new guy come from china. this is my first post. she spent my two month to creat. all texture had been painted in photoshop. please give me some advice, thanks!
09-08-2002, 11:49 AM
09-08-2002, 11:49 AM
looks good to me! anything specific you want to improve? what program did you use?
well maybe i have one thing to say. looks like olden day chinese enviroment but the character looks Caucasian except the hair is black, but if you intended that way its fine.
well i like it pretty sweet i might say
keep up the good work
09-08-2002, 11:49 AM
Hi bins welcome to the forum, I didn't realize the gallery rules that our other admin Leonard had set was covered by the Zbrush announcement... I reposted it here http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=20257 please make sure to read them..
With that out of the way I must say I'm quite impressed with this piece, it's very squaresoft to the point that I believe it could be professional work :) The quality attention to detail, everything is superb!!
I have absolutely no crits on this masterpiece, can you give us some info on the 3D program used to create this? and what renderer was used...
very nicely done... [plugged]
Paul L. Ming
09-08-2002, 11:57 AM
I agree; most excellent work there! I particularily like the lighting for some reason. It's so...soft. :)
The only critique I might have is the collar bones. They seem a little to "flat and long" to me. But then again, I have seen people that have really pronounced collar bones. :)
09-08-2002, 12:18 PM
love that feather ornament she has in her hair, looks so very FinalFantasy :)
thank you for your encourage. i use LightWAVE to do my work.
modleing, textureing&rendering. in this picture, i no use GI because my computer is so........... i think LightWave is a powerful 3d programe.easy to use. i like to use it expect his animation part.
maybe she is not fit for her background, but i think she should be mystical and classical. probably it not effect as i think
sorry for my chinese english......:surprised
i like squaresoft very much. i wish one day i can working with them. :D their work are so Fantasy.
09-08-2002, 01:00 PM
Is this a fully set up shot, or can you show us a couple more angles? I love it, so I want to see the full extent of the scene!:D
09-08-2002, 01:15 PM
Great still! I realy like the mood given through the lighting. And the sweet and dreamy expression on her face creates a special ambience here. Besides I like the brilliant detail of the pattern on her dress. Nice Work
But I`am bothered by two little things here. The border of the mirror in the back seems to be too low Poly. Which is ok in a short scene, where the movement of the camera can cover this. However in a still were people can take more than a short glance on it, you have to be careful with lowPoly geometry.
Second thing concerns the backlight on the right shoulder. Considering the direction of the Keylight, the Highlight on this shoulder might be a little too strong. Even to seperate her from the background. So in my opinion it would be better to reduce the Backlight on that side and maybe put a little more of the backgroundcolor into the light on that shoulder. I think it will integrate the women a bit more into the scenery.
But hey, realy awesome work!
Hope to see more stuff from you
09-08-2002, 03:28 PM
I like it alot! I think it's great but I can see where Hugh is coming from with the backlight. However, Hugh, I don't think that's a mirror back there...looks like a classical Chinese/Japanese painting (unless I'm not seeing the whole image). Excellent work.
BOAH! Excellent! I love the lighting in the scene and her pose. I think maybe she could have had a but more poignant expression. Her eyes look dreamy or maybe bored, her mouth is in a half smile...it's almost as if she's in the middle of an expression. Not that I'm complaining, it still looks great :)
She's got a really beautiful face. I aggree that she doesn't look asian like the surroundings but ah well...
I just wish you'd upload a better JPG...those artefacts are horrible!!!
09-08-2002, 03:33 PM
beautiful modeling and render.
09-08-2002, 03:55 PM
Awesome work fellow!
Nothing, that I see could be improved!
Carry on the great work!
09-08-2002, 04:00 PM
Very nice. Feature quality work. Can't wait to see more.
09-08-2002, 04:04 PM
Please send this image in to the LightWave Gallery....I'd love to see it there...
09-08-2002, 04:21 PM
thumbs up for this pic, its great, no crits from me here.:beer: :beer:
09-08-2002, 05:56 PM
good stuff. i like the lighting (although it looks more like 3ds max as it isnt a GI render), and the modeling job is superb.
one thing tho: her teeth seem a little too big, but that's just an excuse for a crit.;)
keep it up.:cool:
09-08-2002, 06:51 PM
09-08-2002, 06:52 PM
Good modeling, sweet girl, nice scene! :thumbsup:
I also love the hair pin thing. Looks beautiful.
For a critique, I also think the window is low polygon. It looks like a mistake - like it should be round.
Also, for a still image, maybe you might tweak the gamma.
Lastly, I think she needs expression - a little. A little happy or sad or curious. Maybe? :shrug:
In any case, great job and I want to see more!
09-08-2002, 07:35 PM
It's great but...am I the only one that thinks it looks like she's drooling?
Duhreetoh: at first I thought you must be crazy...then I looked at the pic again and...ohno!!! It DOES actually look like she is, LOL! In fact it gives her expression (the dreamy stare and half open mouth) a new meaning, ahaha!
Sorry...I don't really mean like laughing about the pic...I still think it's wonderful but Duhreetoh's comment just made me laugh :D
I like this style!!
very nice work & very beautiful chinese girl^_^
09-08-2002, 09:08 PM
China production is stronger than HK production now. Sweet, nice stuff. thx for sharing
09-08-2002, 09:55 PM
very nice work
09-08-2002, 10:48 PM
Very nice, but I think the "drool" is part of the jewelry.
09-08-2002, 10:58 PM
Is the background a 3D element or a 2D painting?
09-09-2002, 12:20 AM
I love this piece, and the way it doesn't imediately make me think 'CG'. There's an homogeneity to it overall that I think is really successful and doesn't look like it's aspiring to photorealsim but seems to have found it's own very subtle stylisation. MORE!!!!!! :)
That's beautiful. Great work!:bounce:
09-09-2002, 01:26 AM
...piece of work! Very dreamy looking sorta piece. Quality of work is top notch. You said you were from China....Shanghai? Do you work for a studio? If so, which one?
Anyways, congrats of a fine piece of work! :beer:
09-09-2002, 02:21 AM
(btw, welcome fellow LightWaver! :thumbsup: )
09-09-2002, 04:11 AM
Well done, i love to see many images gets some Chinese style.
09-09-2002, 05:38 AM
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09-09-2002, 07:28 AM
09-09-2002, 07:32 AM
Five beers cheers for that one!!!
:beer: :beer: :beer: :beer: :beer:
Good job man, but can u post another pose...it will being more detail to us to watch it....however, good job and onli 1 comment that it the lady seen not like a asians but like a european wearing the chinese cloth.....keep working:applause: :love: :thumbsup: :beer:
09-09-2002, 01:27 PM
It's so great.:applause:
But I think this girl not like chinese,....more like foreigner....If you change the girl's look that was really a chinese style.
However you did a great job:thumbsup:
thank you for your encourage again. This is my first complitly personal work, so , she is not perfect(or good ? :p ) enough. Thank you for your good advice. i'll improve my work in next days.
Now i am working in her next picture. I hope i can show you soon.
and does anybody can give me some advice for skin? i am not satisfied with her skin, i think it's not tender & soft enough.
yes , i came from Shanghai.working in SFS Digi-Media.
the background hand been done in Lightwave and i paint somewhere in photoshop. Because i don't want it looks like CG too much.
09-09-2002, 02:30 PM
wow.....loooking very nice......but i have right now a problem wiith my card so i am not able to c blue and green color.......so i can't comment too much....But still this is a great piece...........
and yeah five stars and more if possible:airguitar :airguitar :airguitar :airguitar :airguitar
09-09-2002, 05:28 PM
Wow, she?s very beauty!!! :D
give us more
please please please
09-09-2002, 06:43 PM
Very nice texturing, Shes looking realy nice, maybe some "touche", in the hairs because it look "plane and alpha, map", bup the rest of the body is great:thumbsup: :applause:
09-11-2002, 09:20 PM
we have to have this in teh LW gallery!
i am waiting for the new post....keep working:beer:
09-13-2002, 03:45 PM
looks good over all..maybe the frount bang looks a little stange..thats a nitpick thoe
09-13-2002, 05:53 PM
Please do a full-length motion picture of this character. I'd find an excuse to see it about once a week or more...
Gonzo The Great
09-14-2002, 02:14 AM
I haven't read all the posts so sorry if its been mentioned before.
COMPOSITION: Perhaps try raising her head upwards as this is where the light is coming from.
RENDERING: Although the Character glow on the Specular shading is done well, you need to use a HDR map in the background instead of glow... the light from the background needs to penetrate the window's round wood frames more like how you've done in the vertical and horizontal wood beems in the centre.
I think Global Illumination was used here, but the controls are a little out. GI or not, her left arm-pit is too grey.
Very hot lips. Yum!
01-13-2006, 04:00 PM
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