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aamirpatni

01-14-2005, 10:38 PM

http://www.cgnetworks.com/gallerycrits/98017/98017_1105745935_medium.jpg

Title: Artist Living Room
Name: Aamir Patni
Country: Pakistan
Software: 3ds max

Finaly it is done on my though i use Vray for final render
use three lights and per frame render time is approx 1 hour
plz do comments on it
this is an Artist Living room not a artist Studio
all painting i paint in artrage for using references

Thanks

Rod Seffen

01-15-2005, 09:30 AM

THe first thinhg that strikes be about this is the blur. IT doesn't look like proper DOF, it looks like different layers have had blur applied to them in a paint program, and there is too much of it as well.
If you fixed that, I think this would be an excellent render, the lighting is great.

aliasali

01-15-2005, 09:42 AM

looks cool.but i dont like the ground texture.its not on right proportions.and i think weird map.lighting is so goood.and dont u think that atistic rooms are not that cold?:)

B3AND1P

01-15-2005, 12:34 PM

I agree, everything looks too blury. The carpet also has some problems, it just doesn't look like carpet, maybe it is too bright and smooth? If it isn't carpet maybe it should have some reflections.

aamirpatni

01-15-2005, 12:54 PM

Upload image is there plz see and coments

http://img87.exs.cx/img87/3425/roomfinal22tz.jpg

http://img32.exs.cx/img32/7616/roomfinal31cr.jpg

Rod Seffen

01-15-2005, 02:17 PM

Yes, that's much better. Only very minor details like the shoes don't seem to be casting any shadow so they look painted in, you could proabably do with better wood textures on the legs of the table and chair, it's too bright and orange. Also, where the sunlight strikes the floor, there should be much more reflective light coming from that area onto surrounding objects, you probably need a light source there, or make the current one brighter/larger radius.
It's a very well constructed scene otherwise, I love the paintings also.

aamirpatni

01-15-2005, 02:24 PM

Thanks Every one to give me a very detailed comments Thanks

aliasali

01-15-2005, 02:57 PM

Loox so much better.!
keep it up!

aamirpatni

01-15-2005, 11:25 PM

Thanks for coments here is second texturing

http://img117.exs.cx/img117/8833/roomfinal25cg24il.jpg

http://img141.exs.cx/img141/6366/roomfinal250ku.jpg

dixit13

01-16-2005, 09:53 AM

Liked Da first image.lighting is fair too.:thumbsup: Can be improved further!

DodoPAN

01-16-2005, 11:36 AM

Good work, man ! Still, try to look more into "blur" issue. The lastest images are more better but still I "suspect" a strange kinda blur.

Keep up ! :thumbsup:

aamirpatni

01-16-2005, 01:04 PM

Good work, man ! Still, try to look more into "blur" issue. The lastest images are more better but still I "suspect" a strange kinda blur.

Keep up ! :thumbsup:what type of blur are u taking about

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