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AJ-

01-13-2005, 06:12 PM

Hi, im starting to get into color and I was wondering if anyone can help me out with critiquing my work.. any advise at all is more then welcome... also note I didn't draw this line art I only did the color..

http://img91.exs.cx/img91/4128/oldman0vg.png

if you wanna see the line art...
http://img76.exs.cx/img76/6461/gentheoldgeezer8sq.jpg

AJ-

01-17-2005, 10:26 AM

sorry to bug everyone by bumping up my own topic.. it's just that i have a hard time finding people to critique my work.. i noticed that there were alot of really great artist on this forum and i just wanted a little advise...

Eternally Mine

01-18-2005, 04:28 AM

I assume the line art means the actual outline of the character?

I can see nothing wrong with the colors but I have found a few problems with the line art?

The man's fingers look to bulbous and the ground below his feet looks like parchment from a scroll instead of ground. Anyway that is my opinion and I did my best, hope it helped in some way.

Take care:thumbsup:

powerACE

01-18-2005, 08:27 AM

well it looks nice and i like the style of your drawing skills in terms of cartoon 2d cleanup animation but is it that the graphics is a bit pixilated and i am unconvinced about the rain effect

AJ-

01-18-2005, 10:52 AM

yeah by line art i ment the drawing itself i only did the color... as for the rain i wasn't very happy with the way it turned out.. i just couldn't get it to look right.... this was my first time adding a backound to a drawing with no real backround.. it was harder then i thought it would be...

lulaassassina

01-19-2005, 12:51 AM

Painting rain must be really fckd up!
By the way, the drop splatter doesn't seem convincing, looks like glare, instead.
Keep going m8!

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