Kobin (wip)

[Raul-Reznek]

The head does not fit the body.And try to change his color, it looks....NOT SO GOOD.

Pretty good modeling.

[Error323]

I think it's very nice actually... the modelling is very good... only the blue is something i have to get used to i think :)

Like to see the textured version :)!! Nice!

[Spirit2029]

Thanx to the above replies, but im looking for some more criticism. So some more replies would be nice..

Thanx
Spirit

[Matt_Forcum]

ok, you want some crit? there is not much to say about the acual work. Its pretty solid. its a bit low poly around the ear. some of that area is a bit thin, and its mising that little curl into the inside part that the top piece does, also the nose seems a bit thin.

Your guy is real buff, and thick, and the thinner areas of the ears and the nose dont fit. I also think that you may have overdone it with the neck.

The design is clean. there isnt much to crit there, You may want to think about some jewlery or tattoos or something. I like the earrings and I think that is a good step in the right direction.

Keep going with it! i wanna see more! great start!

[Gilgamesh]

I agree with much of the above reply, so alot of this might be redundant. I think he certainly needs a little bit of a neck. It isn't that buff is bad, but if you notice in the head on and 3 quarter views, the guys head doesn't seem attached to his body. It needs something to connect it. Blue is a fun color for skin, but be careful. Do a good job on your textures or he will look really fake. Otherwise I would say very nice modelling, it makes me anxious to see the rest of the body. Good luck.

[Reo]

chris you need to make the ear peircings bigger dude I'm talking thumb size............and lots of rings along the top of the ear too...... oh yah and while your at it .....could you solve that word hunger problem...........alright buddy see you in class



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[xynaria]

Apart from what has already been said about the neck etc, there's a couple of things that seem slightly askew to me.
Ears seem like they can't decide whether they are trying to be 'realistic' or some sort of elven type thing. I'd say they need to pull further in one direction or the other.
The area where the cheeks and lower eye meets the nose seems slightly too high and too far forward to me. Possibly the eyes are a tad too far apart too. Not an awful lot in all cases, but I think playing around in that area may strenghten the character.
The rear of the jowls seems overdone almost like the neck and seem to contradict the boniness of the rest of the head.
Otherwise, modelling wise it's pretty much there. :)

[Spirit2029]

Thanxx to all for the comments. Ill be updating soon with some small changes as suggested. Had a bit of the flu last few days and havent been working on it. So ill hopefully have something by late tonight for you all. thanx again

Spirit 2029

[Spirit2029]

Sorry for the wait, if anyone was waiting. So heres a small update, lighting sucks. Top image is a final gathered render, it looks desent but lots to tweek. I tried to address as many suggestions as I could without losing what I liked in Kobin. So critique away again, ill have the body up later today with a few extras too. thanx




http://the3d.ws/artists/spirit/kobin-new.jpg

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