Character: Female Head

[Raytrace_Man]

I think it's a fantastic start. I don't now a heck of a lot about edge-loops, and I think you followed the general edge-loop design idea, but something is different...it doesn't matter--what ever you did, the technique works well for you.

The ears look a bit awkward...but hey, a lot of people have awkward ears in real life. We shouldn't always have to follow the standard shape of things...right?

Keep it up.

--Ray

[reedomatic01]

Hey, good work so far. The topology seems pretty well done. I have a few comments. Her nostrels need more volume at the bottom. they seem a little flat in areas. The nose in general could use a little more overall detail. The lips are well done, but some cheeky fat around the outer lips would work well here. The ear needs some more work. The structure is a little off. Nice start, keep up the good work.

[maxmanjake]

thanks for the useful comments so far. Keep em coming!

[maxmanjake]

here are some updates. please feel free to crit.

http://www.geocities.com/jasonparuta/images/front_side_wire02.jpg

http://www.geocities.com/jasonparuta/images/wire_smooth_iso01.jpg

[ariaamir]

nice start you got there. i agree with the others, that the ears need more work, maybe you should rotate the angle a little bit. keep up the good work :thumbsup:

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