Vehicle: mack truck NYC

[killcat]

It is very good, beauty done!

[wgreenlee1]

You might want to use a newer photo.
There are two buildings in the sky line that are not there any more.


Just a thought.

[DXtreme]

hi ..and welcome..
i think you had a good start..
but in my opinion you should add some more details to the truck
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the exhaust pipes could have some hole and some stuff like that..
and the tires.....the tires looks like from a lego ... don't get me wrong, it's just my opinion, but they look not like Truck tires!
maybe you can try a bumb on the tires...
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but go on really good good work!
hope to see some updates!

[j9k_80]

Looks good. One thing i would say is maybe turn down the filter on the dmap shadows. Sunlight casts a more defined shadow than the ones in the image. I like all the texture work though. Do you go to FS? if so maybe a boston background instead of NY would have been better....j/k.

[igor popovic]

concerning the model, i have no complaints, its good for like gaming standards....while the background, is another story, i donno why the tops of those buildings are black, its like forshadowing the future....i also thought of an actual shadow from maybe a passing cloud, but it just doesn't look like that....

[Matt Parker]

looks pretty good, my only crits is what the other doods said..plus don't take out the buildings...just because they're not there doesn't mean they shouldn't be remembered, imho.

Matt

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