Miss June 2053 (nudity), Zdenek Jirku (3D)

[olivS]

I really love the skin, so realistic, as if "she" feels a little cold. The sin texture is a bit weird to my taste on the breast, though.
Modeling is very goodn I love the folds on the feet, and the fact that the skin has some sort of thickness around the bio-mechanical area. Lighting and composition are very good IMHO. The texture of the wall and floor are very good, but the background is too simple. I don't know what, but I think the composition lacks some object out-of-focus.
I hope this isn't too much critics for sucha and outstandingwork. 5 stars from me! :)
Cheers,

[valentine]

very nice work !

some crits:
first of all i think the quality of the body is absolutely incommensurate to the face ! especially the breasts and the legs are great while the face istn really beautyful... (imho)

too long and to knobby nose, flat and copped lips... chin should be rounder. but thats just my opinion :)

other than that (espeacially the breasts are wonderful) awesome work !


b(r)e(a)st regards ;)
jannis

[AndyH]

Wow! The natural elements look utterly real, and the mechanical parts are well designed and subtle enough not to ruin or cheapen it.

The only thing that lets it down a little for me is her head. The indent by her eyes and temple is too deep and is creating a distracting shadow, and her skull profile seems a little too square. I think the rest of the face is perfect though - the expression on her face tells a story, and her features are kind of european and old-fashioned. As mentioned before, i love the cold, lonely feel to it.

The legs and the lower back look amazing - the skin tones, goosebumps and just the whole fleshiness is really something - are you suuure its all 3d?! Id love to see some wires to amaze me!

Fantastic work!

[B3AND1P]

AMAZING. I think the problem with the left breast is the bump. Breasts are usually smoother than most skin. i think the bump makes them look a little stone. The texturing is amazing! Her skin except for the breast really feels "alive".

Great job again, I love this picture.

[ThePhotographer]

I like this a lot ! Very original !

[MoMaZa]

Amazing Work and nice body
upload other pictures

[Mr Blue]

My comments are a little bit different from the others...If you weren't trying to mimic actual human musculature but were using artistic license, just skip down to the second paragraph that begins with 'And finally'.

I can clearly see the Teres major, teres minor, Latissimus dorsi, deltoid, and Triseps, and they all look great to me! And, I think I see the infra/supra spinatus muscles (along with the spine of the scapula) going underneath the deltoid, but shouldn't the location of the scapula be more apparent (especially since the lower half of the trapezius is missing)? I dunno... it just seems that in that pose, it should be obvious that she has a scapula but it isn't to me. Maybe the deltoid is too large... dunno... Also, I'd like to see a view from the back as the musculature on the right doesn't seem to mirror that on the left side of her back. Is her tummy in the right place, or is it just a little bit too far forward for that pose(especially for a 'playmate')?

And finally, I'd like to see some wires too... It just looks too awesome to me. Especially the feet! If it is pure 3d, then :eek: OMG! :thumbsup:

[blueput]

Great work!~~~~~~~

[gpepper]

Excellent work ! Great render and texture ! I love her ! :eek:

[Predator]

Miss looks really naturally , envirnonament looks fine too , Brilant work :) I ussually I please to post the wire :) thanks and greet

[S-m-i-l-e]

Awesome work... specially the skin :eek: it's so good... When do we get to see "miss july"? :D

* Tell us more about this project...

[AndyH]

dammit - why isnt this on frontpage yet? Its held the 5 stars rating for a few days now!

[sacrefredo]

xcellent work !

i really like ur pic, maybe should retake shape of skull but ...anyway...whahoo !
great job !

[Segmoria]

this is amazing! and so few comments on it? and still not in the frontpage?
anyway it's absolutely great
the ammount of realism and detail you have put is definatelly amazing

what strikes me a bit as odd, is the arm. I dont know it might be the lightning in that certain angle, but the shoulder and elbow need some tweaking.

you really cant tell if the front side of the model is real or cg!
welldone again! an another 5 stars from me

[Neverwhere]

That's simpy fantabulous :applause: ... I do agree with others, considering the body You really scr...d up the head... that's why I give only 5*... otherwise it would have been 6 ;)
I'd be grateful if You shared the secret of that beautiful skin shader and perhaps revealed some other production details... Don't be selfish :)

[MoMaZa]

dammit - why isnt this on frontpage yet? Its held the 5 stars rating for a few days now!of course andy

[Zdino]

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http://img157.exs.cx/img157/6435/screen38ju.jpg
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[j3st3r]

Hi

I`d like to tell you that

SHE ROCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Honestly. It`s really good. I`d change the face although to a nicer, more female face, that could be really Miss June...

Great work five stars

[-LPS-]

Amazing!! Amazing!! Love ths skin shder, the best I have seen yet. This should be front page and you should win an award for this!! Fantastic give us some tips on your shader techniques, screen shots etc!!!

:thumbsup:

[CuTnPaste]

W O W

you kick, man!!!

:banghead:

[blueglitchman]

great piece! 5 stars

[koncz]

I really like the concept of this creation, modelling and texturing are impressives.
Thanks for the screeshoots of the WIP:thumbsup: . You really desserve the fives stars for this work:thumbsup:.

Georges.:)

[AndyH]

Absoloutley frickin ace! Thanks a lot for all the pics - im gonna mail a moderator - you must get a choice award and frontpage for this! You deserve it!!

[3dmiao]

wow！ just love this piece！ 5 stars！

[alexki]

Youre work was worth all the effort, it looks great. I especially like that it´s not like the "traditional femail beauty" nowadays. That´s why I wouldn´t change the face to make it more pretty, because she´s perfect as she is now. And I wouldn´t make it either skinnyer, she would loose much of the naturalism she has now. Just one remarque, where the arm attaches to the body, the fromt part, it looks a little unnatural. Maybe you could follow more the shape of the muscles, and not use such straight lines (for the whole arm). Other than that, congratulations!

[gagiu]

Congratulations. Impressive work and anatomy knowledge alhough some glitches can be improoved. The frontal is a bit too high for the caucasian femaile standards and probably this is what bothers people here about her facial beautyness. I agree about the breast reaction to the light setup, it is a bit bluesh...I know it is about the high vascularisation of that area especially because of the size of the breast who tend to stretch the skin. But I just hope you will take this as constructive criticism because it was ment that way. I am verry impresed and I would like to congratulate you for the entire project.

tschus
gagiu

[smooth]

im just wondering why this isnt in the front page yet :D

5.

[martind]

Not only is the work excellent, but I believe the statement is right on the money.

[JA-forreal]

Wow! This is very detailed 3d character work. Good job!

[XYZRGB]

Front page for sure !

I love the details, and especially the SSS. http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/thumbsup.gif

[derwolpertinger]

congratulations for an outstandig piece of art(and work). :thumbsup:
can't believe you modelled all those muscles, simply amazing. but i like the feet with its folds the most.

[Ollarin]

Holy figs! Awesome work man! That shader is insane!

Superb job! :thumbsup:

[Hooch]

how did you made the skin material?
very well done.

5 stars from me! ;)

[rmsmedia]

Absolutely astonishing shading! The face feels a little too plastic though, and the shape of the face in some areas is weird as others have said so I wont elaborate...excellent piece!!!

[Apollux]

I like the way she is WEARING her skin, like a female would wear an open-back night dress. Take that and add the "Miss June" title and interesting things come to my mind.

[Silmarillion]

Looks good, did you use zbrush too? Feels like there`s displacemnt map on the skin?

[zuliban]

really great character and idea grat job:thumbsup:

[electropulse]

man, I just can't stop staring at that butt...er, those hips, nice work...how did you go about doing that skin?

[SuperMax]

About time we see a real women on these forums!

[Bluplet]

Hmmm, I saw this back in 2003 and thought it was pretty nifty.

Good work.

[madart]

Excellent skinshader and modelling. Her thighs looks so real, there is even some cellulite there. Great! You've made her look quite realistic..... that is the skin part of her. Please don't change her face or anything else to make her look prettier or more beautiful, I like the fact that she looks like a normal person (skin part). Amazing work!

[AndyH]

Justice is served!
This piece was begging to be plugged since it first appeared!

Nice one

[Levitateme]

Incredible all around, very nice modeling. i think that the breast texture is to over saturated on the nipple and around the breast in general, and the front part of her forhead is very square, i think if you rounded out that forehead it would really work much better. great work though.

[samankhorram]

the shader and is great very good job

[Koen86]

Hey nice stuff! I agree with the forehead, don't no maybe its because she is bold, i haven't see many bold women before.
But you got great texture skills! very nice job

Greetz Koen

[Jadan]

As everyone has mentioned, the textures are amazing, esp. around the thigh! I love the goosebumps! Your use of lighting and environment detail is good too, I wish I could have a better sense of the room or cell? she's in. The one area that I dont get is the head? Why does it look so plasticy and the rest of the skin looks like SSS has paid off?

In the end, this piece is amazing when you think that this is your first finish piece!
Great job!

[zukezuko]

nice piece of art
much original style
1year huh?
well i quest good artworks need a lot of time to mature.
incedible...

[SergioSantos]

Excellent work!

I like very much the character (very good feet),
but i don't like the enviroment...

[ShinChanPu]

Absolutely GREAT!!

Five stars, man.... :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Rennie]

Wow that is fantastic.

[olijosman]

excellent 3d model and great and disquieting image.:applause:

[mickatt]

your work is amazing !!

I am really impressed by your lighting and modeling skills

congrat

[Jameslsy]

The way you peel and review the inside and the flesh and the skin.. it's just too awesome!

[freka01]

Disturbing image, but very nicely done. Good job :)

[Adriano-Zanetti]

very well done for sure... but about the concept... as a "sex toy" for men she doesn't do the thing for me. Quite an average face and body and all that cybernetic Matrix humanoid thing is defenitely a big turn off... in the end she's an average looking woman with a back that would even freak out Terminator! ..am not really a big fan!

Nice Texturing for the skin.

pe@ce

[LuisTelesforo]

lighting and modeling are great, very nice work :thumbsup:

[Anubis]

Please post wire, I can't believe you posted so much behind the scenes stuff without any wires, I wanna see the legs/feet. Very nice attention to detail on the back. Did you sculpt out the skull and things? Because I noticed you did not really show it at all, and it would have been a lot of work. (although it is visible in images). I like how you broke apart the latissimus dorsi and the other license you took with the back. Great work.

[Relic]

This is excellently modelled, it is one of the more accurate organic models i've seen of a woman, usually we see 'stylized humans' and not realistic bodies. The only thing I don't care for is the head, its not awful but I think the rest of the body looks better.

[Crewler]

wow man, just amazing. no critiques on it. :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:

crewler

[Crewler]

forgot to give u 5 stars, whops.

[mogla]

Great job.

I just think; if we're that far in the future, the use of such cabling would be obsolete and micro electronics would me used instead. The skin is nice apart from the head and chest area wher it looks a bit bumpy. I love the crinckly feet but think the environment she is in could be a bit more relevant. However it's very obvious that you have done a lot of hard work.

[hauke]

Wow! This is creepy and very cool!

[mindrot]

Wow! The natural elements look utterly real, and the mechanical parts are well designed and subtle enough not to ruin or cheapen it.

The only thing that lets it down a little for me is her head. The indent by her eyes and temple is too deep and is creating a distracting shadow, and her skull profile seems a little too square. I think the rest of the face is perfect though - the expression on her face tells a story, and her features are kind of european and old-fashioned. As mentioned before, i love the cold, lonely feel to it.

The legs and the lower back look amazing - the skin tones, goosebumps and just the whole fleshiness is really something - are you suuure its all 3d?! Id love to see some wires to amaze me!

Fantastic work!
I must agree with Andy on the skull bit...

Other than that this is a really beautiful piece of work....

[PeterSanitra]

Blahozelam, velmi dobra praca. Dost si sa namakal na detailoch a zrejme aj dost nacakal na testoch Final renderu;-)No ale robit na tom cely rok to je o hubu, to by som si hodil.
Ale vela stastia do dalsej tvorby.,a potom si pridaj aj webpage do profilu aby ta mohli iny obdivovat, lebo ja som sa xel pozriet aj na nieco ine od teba ale ziaden odkaz.

[Gord-MacDonald]

Really Good work!

The female component of the image has to be very sensual for the image to work - (this is about woman as sex object) - and it is (nice posture, nice breasts, nice bum - not easy in 3d).
The integration of human and machine elements is very well done. This would have been a great entry for machine flesh!

Gord MacDonald

[Terkonn]

Not my taste, but very well done. The interaction between the skin and the mechanics look darn cool.:thumbsup:

[ODoul]

The wrinkles on the feet are pure genius.

[Guanny]

Very good work, I like so much the skin shader, am very realistic. In the final shot have you used sss?
The face loses a bit with the final lighting, I like it in the renders of production.:)
The shaped one is very good, especially the legs and the feet.:buttrock:

[Ramtin]

Very very Great work .

Its really ok .
good luck :thumbsup:

[emilioG]

Great job.

Very impressive. I'd also have to agree with a couple of people on the head, there' something going on there, not quite sure what it is. We can't see it in the full render, but I noticed the skin looks very loose right under her left ankle in your unrendered gray body. If this is only an image, then no worries.

Simply amazing.

[Zdino]

Why I was't get AWARD ? I thought that the reason is high rating from a lot of people. So tell my why please. Sorry for my english

[*o*]

Beautiful modelling and amazing skin texture. Keep it up.

[Almacan]

Your work is more beautiful than any other 3D nudes.
and...sublimity like Vermeer's painting.
I love this image !!!

[goktugg]

Wonderful Work!:thumbsup:
Awesome!!...

[Tysus]

Stunning work!

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