character design-needs coloring!

[rocky]

I think have some problem on your Character... the face and his pose not good... and you need make more detail.

[Najd]

yep, there are some problems on the character, but it's a good start.
The eyes are too far away from each other.
the pose isn't that bad, but I definitly don't understand how is the second arm. And by the way, I don't relly like these shoes.
Anyway, a good start :beer: continue.

I did a little coloring on it... feel free to crit :)
http://snaj.free.fr/temp/person2.jpg

[teknotek83]

the coloring's really nice! not exactly my style (i wasn't looking for too much realist..kinda wanted like anime style), but the colors are just about the same as the ones i wanted. :)
yeah..the character's kinda under-developed because this was my first full figure drawing of him. (i made him like a week ago and just got back to drawing him today). so that explains the pose and the lack of detail (actually, i thought there was a fair amount of detail within the upperhalf of his body...the se\cond half, i can understand, but i don't want to overdo it with the armor). the eyes was my mistake. the second arm is just supposed to be..there. not really doing anything. :p

iis that a final version, najd? or a wip?

[Najd]

Well, I think it's a final version, the truth is that I'm not very good at coloring, just starting, and don't really know how to continue that, where to add detail, etc. For now, that's how far I go :p

and the next time you want a coloring, precise the style you want !! ;)

[teknotek83]

sorry i wasn't specific before. my mistake. but i still like how it turned out. do you think i can get a copy of the file? you can add your sig to it, and i'll (of course) give you credit for it on my site

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