A beautiful night...

[WillemB]

Hm.. I think it's rather strange. Some feedback:

- The background should affect the table. The table looks much too dark.
- The objects aren't really smooth. They're like.. an 3D game developed in 1996 or so.

But it's nice. How long have you been working on this? (without counting the minutes/houres of rendering :P i'm feeling sorry for you.. my PC has a RAM of 512mb.. which is also rather low)

Btw, a very good thing of this one is that the reflection and transparency have been done very nicely!

[dmonk]

Turn up the Anti-Aliasing in the render.

Use a clearer image. I looks like you textured a plane and stuck it behind the table.

The image is yellowish and your lights look white. Use colored lights.

Maybe use a lighter wood texture.

Shadows would help out a lot also.

The materials seem good though. Keep working on it. :)

[FerryvD]

except for the issues that have been said already the corque (is that how to write it) seems to be floating if you look at the shadows.

[Wardile]

Yes, u might want to change the lights BIAS or

[blinxpro]

I would honestly consider losing that background all together and find one more suitable for the scene. I think it's going to be like pulling teeth to get these object to feel like they belong. Just google around. Or put the time in to model a background. Thats just what I would do. Good luck. As for the other objects I think they are coming along just fine. Keep it up.

[alberto86]

Thank you for all the posts!!

I've modeled it in about 15 minutes, using Rhinoceros, But I used 1 or 2 hours for the scene and the texture... If I render the scene without antialias, the computer takes about 1 hour, but you shouldn't know how much time with it...!!!:)

I'll try to do my best for improove the wood texture and the background and... thanks to FerryvD because I havn't seen that the corque is floating!! :D

updates in the next days... Bye!:)

[alberto86]

And here you are, after a lot of time, an update!!
At last I buyed a new computer and now I could render the scene in an acceptable time...

During this time I fixed the corque and some lights, added specular map to the table...

C&C are very welcome!

http://web.tiscali.it/lovebonsai/images/calice3.jpg

[admiraligor]

looks much better, but now it's apparent that you need to meshsmooth that bottle ;)

[alberto86]

Hi all!
It's a long time that I haven't posted updates on this thread, but I've fixed some things and now here you are... more than 5 hours of rendering... probably I must decrease some rendering options...

I haven't changed the backgrond because in fact I haven't so much time, and I've done some other works...

cover me of C&C!:D

http://web.tiscali.it/lovebonsai/images/calice5.jpg

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