Character: Anime style (lightwave)

[wgreenlee1]

Advice??????

MY advice to you is gimme some of that talent!

Sheez!
Thats friggin' awesome!

Maybe a little DOF but unless you have X-DOF I wouldnt worry about it.
The backgroubd pic is pixelized but really overall looking good dude!

Lets see some more renders along these lines.
Looking great!:applause:

[Ezz]

Hi there...Nice work you done there. Very original!!!!!

My advice though. Try and tweak the eyes a little. She look a bit
funny!!!

otherwice!!! - great!!!


Ezz

[Bug_Eyed_Earl]

I agree with Ezz, the eyes aren't really comfy. They have the anime feel, but the middle point is possibly a little sharp. Also looks like she has a bit of a hang-over (slight bagginess under her eyes).

Also, that background is very pixelated. Is that deliberate?

[RobinOberg]

Try a celshader :)

And, this reminds me of the finalfantasy movies, youre sure you dont work for square? :)

Great work, especially the lighting effects...

[pezz]

Great character, you should work on the background though :)

[JoBbE]

the character is cool I don't like the hat though. maybe add some structure (bump?) to ist or use a cel shader ->right now it looks like a piece of clay...

[caldeira]

Hi! It's an awesome work. Just give some folds to the hat. Indeed the face is a little odd. she looks like a mature lady, not that childish face that anime have. Perhaps if you don't put those bags under her eyes. Just that. and texturize the clothes. But 5 stars for you!!! great character!:bounce:


Ps: Maybe a Mecha to put her inside? Or a motorcycle... that should improve your scene.

[Beastie]

Interesting work. Nice and original. If you want advice, the only thing I could say is to add texture to your maps, right now most of them are flat. Bump maps could be interesting. Anyways, nice work.

[daftlamb]

thx!
http://www.colorbird.com/forum/attach/2002/09/04/238204-final1copy-embed.jpg

[daftlamb]

http://218.76.39.7/bbs/attachments/200209/05112700-341.jpg
fish~~~

[floater]

1.beautiful background albeit a bit pixelized

2. i guess the eyes have issues, but i think the whole face and/or its expression is not what i'm getting from the background

3. the whole theme is really wishy washy, i mean you have a fantasy setting with a character that very much resembles claire redfield from the resident evil series.

3-2. if you stay with the look you have know i think you should add a gun or make her more cop-ish. i maen the magic can still play a part but if she has no fire arms, she just really looks misplaced

p.s. who ever said it was a female :p

[JohnD]

Awesome character. I dig the theme to and IMHO i wouldn't add any firearms (Seems to be the quick fix nowadays.)
I guess the only thing is the eyelids seem like they are pulled a little too far away from the eyes. But the eyes look awesome. Maybe a little more detail in the hat, but badass character. The fishies are kickn too. Cool texture...very pastelly. How did u do the hair?

[himizu]

Originally posted by floater
p.s. who ever said it was a female :p

knowing anime it probably isn't. course you might wanna ask the creater first before making such a judgement

[facial]

Well.....done. Nice character design, anymore? keep post
:applause: :applause:

[himizu]

OMG!! I just noticed that that character looks just like my friend's bratty sister!

[Ian Kington]

were are her breasts, and whats with the nose, everybody knows anime chicks have size 32 double d's:scream:

[JeT]

thats very on topic.

looks cool, the modelling is a little .. simple, but hey whatever floats your boat i guess. cool cool
:)

[daftlamb]

floater:
your advice is good!thx very much
facial:
i'm chinese too:)



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