the bodyguard

[Âme noire]

Now I blocked the colors out any suggestions?

[Âme noire]

I forgot to ask, what would be next wise? I have now all color-pieces in one layer, should I sketch the levels of depth or should I smoothly increase and decrease the colors with the burn and dodge tool?

[Swoop]

Well first off i see some problems with the perspective. Like the lamps grids dont work out okay. They give the perspective that we are at eye level with the lamps, which the rest of the images doesnt align up to. Also her right hand doesnt seem to be in contact with the spear... And finally i think you should work on the smoothness of the blade.. looks a bit uneven, and fuzzy ...

Apart from that i think you got the makings of a good image, i would just correct the perspective first since it really for me throws the image off, and then i would propably loose the fine lines. Or add some lineweight to the lineart. Even lines all over make for boring lineart...

[Âme noire]

@Swoops: thanks at your advices. I corrected some things, but didn't stylize the lines yet. Comments are welcome.

[captain chapo]

her left arm is bigger and longer than her right, also her right nipple seems a bit too high, or something, something is off with that breast at least...??? good work so far, like the new right hand much better.

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