Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Yura Vranchan

[Yura]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1103396807_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1103396807_large.jpg)

Small part of Intergalactic story...

[Arctis]

Hi,
Welcome in the challenge !
Your characters are well in place, it's a good base. ;)
Good luck, man!

[theCloudmover]

Nice!

I like the widescreen aspect of it.
For the b/g outside the windows.... what are you going to put there?

[Yura]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1103481931_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1103481931_large.jpg)

Small story of Universe in lines ;)

[lynch]

cool concept but i think you need to relate the characters in a way that makes the senator look more like he is being taken captive . Try to put across the image in such a way that you dont need words to explain whats happening in the scene. for instance the soldier on the very right just look like hes standing there .You need more tension try more epressive poses, like more submissive for the senator and more controlling for the captors. I know you can do it.

[Yura]

Thank you for interest for my work! :bounce:

to cloudmover: b/g outside the windows i want to put city of future or space battle. May be something else. I'm not take ready to take this decision. :shrug:

to lynch: Thanx for you opinion! I will think about this suggestion.

Good luck to everybody!

[Yura]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1105018280_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1105018280_large.jpg)

Continue of storyline...

[se7en-z3r0]

I have never used this technique but Marvel artist will often line up all of the characters eyes along the same plane - helps make the perspective work. Nice job so far... definitely needs something outside.

[Yura]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1105963480_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1105963480_large.jpg)

to be continued... :)

[Yura]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1105963821_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/5510/5510_1105963821_large.jpg)

Final Part of Story...
and begining for another Story!

[Falcorr]

Yura

Youre a real surprise to me! You have been too silent so i have totally missed your excellent artwork.

This picture propably has the best storytelling inside 2D challengers.
You didnt even bother to write the story, but i can almost imagine it.

Artwork is great. I can see a hint of Rage of Mages in it.

Next time remember to be active on the forum also. Have fun! :thumbsup:

[NinjaA55N]

Nice, very nice... I like ur technique, something different form the otrher artists here... good luck! :)

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