Still Life: Architectural interior renderings [scanline]

[killcat]

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http://www.chinadv.com/bbs/photo/200271119028773.jpg

[visualboo]

Nice job... the only thing I see that really sticks out is the tiled carpet. Very obvious.

The bed in number 2 is schweet :buttrock:

[killcat]

Picture these use photoshop make and fix later stage, what the bed of the second is used is pinup picture

[say-g]

heh only the top 500pixels showed for me but from what i saw, very nice indeed

[say-g]

also i think the carpets fine, the carpets in offices (well some of the ones ive seen) do actually tile like that

[JFrench]

It looks like most of your objects aren't beveled. I can't stress how much better images will look with good beveling.
Other than that, the renders look very good.

[sYRA]

Both pics lok really great .. although I think the couch in no. 2 looks a lot CG-like, dunno what it is .. maybe the lack of beveling as mentioned.

[killcat]

Commercial works, the time to finish a work is only one to two days, so in the model, Not meticulous enough. I think that these have something to do with the customer's request

[mill-o]

everything looks good apart from

1: too clean
2. the shadows are too dark and the fire is "flat" (well it looks like a texture). i'd tad of DOF would also make it better

other than that, excellent

[visualboo]

what the bed of the second is used is pinup picture
Yeah, I kinda figured. I just didn't want to imply anything :)

[stephen2002]

wholy crap...I really like the top one. It looks like a picuture of a brand new office building. The carpet looks fine to me.

The only thing that I noticed is that the same image is on all of the computer monitors.

[amapimaster]

Really nice stuff!

I dont mind the same pic on all the screens - corporate screensaver I reckon!

Is the plant in the office render coming through the glass though?

Whats your light setup for a scene like this?

Excellent work!

[KazuyaMochu]

Hey, killcat

really nice job!

but the carpet, does stand out!

try using the highpass filter (under the "other" sub-menu) on photoshop, to reduce the contrast of light in the carpet texture before you render.

just a sugestion.

keep it up man! very nice!

[aDiaNDi]

Really nice! But I´ve found a mistake:

On the first pic: The lamps on the ceiling drops shadows. that can't be right ;)

[AshmisT]

They look great!!:cool:

Its great to see someone can light a scene without using GI and still make it very realistic.

I think a lot of "props" are cut and paste pictures in the second image though. Still effective though

[PureFire]

OMG those are teh s3x...love em!

[HapZungLam]

everything is just "too" clean and perfect.

[AshmisT]

but clean is good for this type of commercial image.

if you show a client the design for their new office complete with fingerprints, dust, chipped paint and carpet stains it's going to lose a bit of the impact ;)

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