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lordmachuca
12-13-2004, 11:26 PM
fellow modelers and texture artist,
I got this character I'm about to finish here for my demo reel.
I could use some last minute critique before I do my renders for my reel. I forgot my head map but I will post it as soon as I get home.
I could use critique on the texture, (color, or lack of color). I really want this to kick ass, so be critical with the critiques thanks.
model 2172 tris
map 1028 diffuse and 512 diffuse for the head , which is not present. your critiques are appreciated.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/losmm/ua1.jpg



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/losmm/ua2.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/losmm/ua3.jpg
AdamAtomic
12-13-2004, 11:42 PM
Geometry: Awesome, would fit in perfectly with most FPSs available now.

Texture: Very hard to read currently. Is too dark and there is too little contrast - BoBo and Soul both do exemplary texture work for their humanoid characters, I would check out their respective web sites for inspiration!
lordmachuca
12-14-2004, 07:37 PM
heres the head shot. I work alittle more details here and there. its getting close to being finished.

Is there areas that are lacking detail?. any suggestions would be cool. All I have left are details on the chest and the gloves . Its really hard to critique your own work. I've been working on this for a while, It gets hard to spot areas that need fixing.
adam a- I tryed to lighten it up a bit. let me know if its still to dark.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/losmm/Ua4.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/losmm/Ua3.jpg
krazyace
12-14-2004, 08:18 PM
the legs look a little boxy from the back
franklyn
12-15-2004, 04:36 AM
the texture looks quite plain it lacks a considerable amount of details like weathering and scratching ..you should look at the new media from " nuclear dawn " mod ...

wait here ive got it for you http://retroshinobi.nuclear-dawn.net/Images/Large/ND_Tm1_Exo_Large.jpg

notice how the texture has a lot of depth ...scratches etchetra.
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