Female...

[claybub]

the nose is kinda funny looking. it looks a bit flattish, but its hard to describe. It looks good otherwise.

[tuanphong]

Here is an update, i modified the nose, eyes and a bit face shape.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/girl7

[EdySusanto]

hmmm her fore head needs to be push forwand abit.
another thing is her eyes interior corner needs to be placed a bit forward also .
hm... ther chin is a bit too wide for my taste :)
good luck bro.

[tuanphong]

Another update, i pushed the eyes forward a bit, but i think there is still problem with the nose. I'll work on that.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/girl8

[tuanphong]

Here is the latest update of the head, now i'm working on the body of her.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/girl10_lux

[Cleveland]

looking better. if it helps at all for the nose the bridge is a bit narrow and the ball a little short and thin. it's getting better in the last iteration though, but still room for impirovement. i'm yet to model my first so i'm just speaking as an observer of the human form...

oops, ignore this. i didn't see your last, last iteration. looking good.

[MrGrinch]

This is looking much better, but there's still a few problems. The ears need a lot of work, the outer rim where it curls over is far too thin. The face is starting to look good, but the flesh just beyond the corners of the mouth shouldnt be depressed (pushed in) like that. Some other views would be helpful in seeing how the model looks as a whole.

[tuanphong]

This is another view of the head.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/girl10_2_lux

[tuanphong]

I'm working on her body, how does it look? is my mesh ok?

http://iphongstore.com/3D/body03.jpg

[tuanphong]

I think i have some error at the part under the cheek, here is the fix.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/girl10_lux_3

[tuanphong]

This is the update of the body.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/body04.jpg

[tuanphong]

I have finished most of all parts, i made the head and the body seperately, in this image i just put them together but i haven't joined them, because i think they are still not matched in size. Could you guys give me some advice to perfectly match all parts of the body.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/girlFinal02

[tuanphong]

This is the other view of the model.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/girlFinal01

[-Vormav-]

I'd say the legs are a bit too long, and mostly the abdomon is waaay too short.

[tuanphong]

i made some change, here it is. This is almost to the final.

http://iphongstore.com/3D/girlFinal03

[actionbob]

I agree with the above comment, and i think the head might be to big. maybe shrink it 10% or so.

[modjo]

Yeah, you should shrink the head about 10 or 15%

[The Laughing Vulcan]

Looking good...

The only two suggestions I'd have were stated earlier:

1. Grab the mesh above the hips and move it UP. She need more space for her abs & laterals.

2. Face - You might want to try bringing up the underside of the chin/jaw. She looks a tad too round there to me. (Unless you are shooting for this...)

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