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Viper
08-29-2002, 02:02 AM
Hello everyone! Been sometime since I posted something (This was a really stupid phrase but whatever)

Anyway, i made this here in a bit of a hurry so that's why the lack of more details. But I want you guys to point wich details I could add to make it better, and eventually in a few days update it.

This one is finished however. Anyway, C&C please!

http://realover.svinc.net/images/Towers3.jpg
Tumerboy
08-29-2002, 02:22 AM
I need there to be something in the bottom part of the image, in order to ground those towers better. . . but nice job.
Jargon
08-29-2002, 02:25 AM
composition wise, it seems a little disjointed. it needs a focus/center piece. the towers draw your eyes across the page well enough, but its just negative space you're being drawn to.
Viper
08-29-2002, 02:33 AM
Thanks for the comments so far.

Any sugestions to improve both points? :)

Tumerboy: Would a Tree for example, crossing over the screen do any good? Just below the towers?
Tumerboy
08-29-2002, 02:43 AM
Na, you'd be better off with the tops of some distant mountains, or the top of a wall connecting the two. . . something to make it look like it's not a shot from a camera that just went off accidentily in someon's hand.
Viper
08-29-2002, 03:18 AM
hmm...you gave me a really cool Idea! Thanks :beer:
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