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krazyace 12-03-2004, 10:58 PM i am working on these few animations...and i need help with crits for this...
this is my first run so please be as callous and rude as you can...
aannndd...uhh ill post more on this thread...since no other site..will reply to my work
http://utf.redsaiyan.org/forums/index.php?act=Attach&type=post&id=2481
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Hollowmind
12-04-2004, 12:40 AM
Looks alright for a start. You should exagerate the movement of the legs some more. Extend them out further when they're all the way forward. Needs some more bounce and hip sway too it as well. Have the hips turn towards the leg that's all the way forward. Maybe add in a little more sway to the shoulders, too. And add in some bending to the spine when his hips go up and down to give it a little more sense of weight. He's kind of stiff right now, Just needs some fine tuning.
spook
12-04-2004, 01:15 AM
its definetely a good start bro. i agree with hollowmind, definetely feels a bit stiff. a bit more movement in the shoulders and head would do wonders to it. looks nice though, post some updates and let us know how its coming along.
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