Characters: Gun Bound

[Carina]

That's great! I really like it!

Can't see anything to crit at all!

[xee3d]

Hi~ ^---^

Very cute~ your work!~
I'm looking forward to seeing your work again...:thumbsup:
:beer:

[derelict]

Damn cute! Soo cute! Berry cute! MMMmmmm Cute!

Ahhhhhh nice!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[sceaja]

Looks very very nice, but the furthermost di/die/dice is incorrectly numbered, presumably the other one is too if they're both the same model.

JA

[wonder]

I---------------------------LI~~~~~~~KE your work!!!!!

[RobinOberg]

WOW! I love it! :)
I love anime and this is so anime that its mind boggling :)
rendering and modelling is great, an animation perhaps?

[Joril]

Could it be that the dice are not perfectly square? Or is it just the perspective?
Anyway, really nice characters you have there :D
In a way, it reminded me of the digimon animation series.:hmm: Same "monster" and trainer scene.

[nemesis]

...amazing work...even those massive destruction weapons look so...cute (loved the cats photos too) I feel i wanna embrace you ;)

[AJ]

Oh that's just fantastic... :eek: :D

If I could give you any, I'd give you 5 Luxury stars... but I can't... and I don't know why... :shrug:

[catbells007]

You dont see too much cartoony stuff on these forums so it makes a nice change. The dragon kinda reminds me of Spyro from the PS1.

Minor crit would be that part of the floor looks a little too burned out, but thats about it.

Wicked work!

[yaong2]

http://www.xee3d.com/cgi-bin/zero/data/test/1030599037/Y.jpg



shading & wireframe images

[SirRender]

Very, very nice. My only suggestion is that you tweek the lighting and or the materials of the objects becuause overal specularity is getting blown out.

[bored alien]

Great job! No real crits here, except that maybe the chess pieces look slightly out of place -- maybe a little more realistic than the rest of the image. But they are very simple so I'm not sure why I say that. :shrug: More great stuff from Korea! :beer:

[pabbloz]

GREAT ! :thumbsup:

[karlsson]

congratulantion!!!cute char and great idea!!!

[pterandon]

:arteest:

Amazing. I so more thoroughly enjoy this kind of stuff over the exhaustively photorealistic human stuff. It has nice characterization.

Two minor points:
1) The purple texture on the dragon doesn't sit well with me. It seems like it's the "wrong material," evocative of neither anything organic nor a plastic toy.

2) I have decided that in this life :wise: I am going to be offended at impossibly small wings. I don't even find them cute.

[Anton Andriesh]

Really nobody can't crit? :annoyed: Let's try to help you remove some mistakes:

First of all is the THEME of your work: what is about? What if you haven't possibility to say anything about it? This image is thematically overloaded: a chess board with lines, like those on the basketball field, cubes, a new-born dragon and a kid riding him. A lot of thematically untied between them objects.

Compositon. It's overloaded like the theme. Too many details. Add some shadows, they should hide the prodlem. The dragon is positioned so, that it is not clearly visible, is the boy behind the dragon or he is riding him. It is possible to emphasize such a triviality as his eyes, they are too "simply" closed. This straight line in the middle really "cuts" the eye (observer's eye :) )

The eggshell on dragon's head don't look like eggshell. Eggs besides are white. Try to accentuate that one of them is green.

Gamma is oversaturated.

Chess figures looks too unfinished. They definitely need a texture.

Background looks too unfinished. It's too bright. Black one would look better.


Hope this helps! Success, Yaong. And, I really like you work! :)

[dmonk]

I love the modeling really cute.:thumbsup:

[facial]

Nice works, so cute. i love your character design.:bounce: :bounce:

[Mr D]

"Very, very nice. My only suggestion is that you tweek the lighting and or the materials of the objects becuause overal specularity is getting blown out."

;) I agree with SirRender ;)

[Aura]

:thumbsup:

[baby]

is he a Digimon ?!? :)

[Nelis]

very very cool,

could you make a big render of that crab like creature on the ground. i love it and want to see the deatails. maybey for on my wallpaper. hehe(love them)

thnx anyhow.

niels

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