End Of The World

[MCronin]

I like it alot, it's cute and very clever.

But umm, critiques, yeah... You need GI and caustics. The tree doesn't look realistic, the trees are too big, birds don't fly in space, and crap like that.

Seriously, it's very good.

[Carina]

I don't think he actually thinks that birds fly in space;)

The only thing that bothers me is that the leaves on the tree look weird.. maybe you could do something about that

:thumbsup:

[NikLG]

I agree with the comments re. the leaves on the tree.
Also, I think that the tree looks like it has been pulled out of the surface, rather than it growing out of it ( if you see what I mean ).
I think it'd look beter if the base of the trunk looked like it had grown out of the ground, and maybe had some gnarly roots coming from it, perhaps going across the planets surface, like as if the last tree was trying to hold on for all it's worth ( or trying to hold the dying rock together ) or something :shrug:

[RobinOberg]

the tree isnt as wellmade as the stumps...

[sceaja]

I don't think the spaceships work for this, since it's not
aliens cutting down trees, you need G.W.Bush with a
space suit on or something...

JA

[sceaja]

...using his trusty golf club to hack it down.

[harmonic01]

heh heh, I love the idea. :bounce:

[MCronin]

Yes, please turn the image into an immature, uniformed "statement" so we can have another thread that turns into a flamefest full of political cliches from the peanut gallery.

[zuhuhu]

Hey i tried to make it mighty and as simple as a small child can understand what is going on .

i tried to make a picture that can be placed in a childs storybook.

SO i think it will be adequate to say " forget what you have seen before in that picture. Now try to remember your childhood . Age 5 or 6 . And now look at the picture again and you will understand what i am trying to mansion." so the tree doesn't need to be very complex. Or the birds don't need air to breath!!!!!!

And thanks Harmonic01

[zuhuhu]

If you have the ability to see my work from a childs vision than you will understand what i m tolking about!!! : ))



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[sceaja]

In that case it's quite suitable.

Although the spaceships still seem to implicate aliens as
the culprits [but we can pretend for mcronin's sake]

Can't suggest anything that wouldn't require something
completely different and a fair bit more time like, an
over-sized toony bulldozer running it over.

Very nice idea though, and well modelled.

[zuhuhu]

Thanks for understanding : )))





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[karlsson]

ur pic makes me bethink of many many things~~~~~good idea!and tha tree!I like tha tree,it's so cute!

and suggest......ye...tha root,green root? I don't like it,if I were u ,I 'll improve it.but maybe it has an other meaning?i dont know,just dont like it......

lastly,good work!

[zuhuhu]

Thanks for the cririque . But the green part isn't a root it is the green part of the planet you can imagine it as grass.

And the green part is for to show that trees are the life source of planets. The last part of the life in the planet gathered on yhe top of the planet : )))



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[jpastula24]

i love the idea of it. you should send that to the earth summit meeting going on right now. the only negative thing i have in the top of the green tree could use some more texture detail. the stumps and dirt and done awesome.

[zuhuhu]

Yes you are right i thought alot about the texture of the tree.
it should be better with more detail but i am too lazy to change it : ))) :drool:

Maybe if i got some more good advises i will change it : )) :thumbsup:

[Integer]

Was this not the image submitted, and winner of the 3d Studio Contest??? "planetkillers"
http://www.the3dstudio.com/contest.asp?mode=gallery&contest=5

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i knew i recognised it from somewhere

[zuhuhu]

Yes that is it its me the winner : ))))))


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[zuhuhu]

But nobody told me anythink about it's deficiencies

Every body told its fine its good ext........

But nobody told if it would be better with some additions so i decide to show it here at cgtalk to learn my mistakes !!!!!!!!!!!!! :bounce:

[Pedro]

I like the idea. I don't like the whole gray planet. Perhaps put in some cities or something? Or add some "ex-lakes", like places where water used to be but are now dry...

Oh, I'm just saying...

BTW I don't like the alien ships at all. The robotic arms, it's hard to understand what they're doing at first glance(well, not "hard", you know what I mean... ) and they're just too plain...

[zuhuhu]

Im saying it again !!!!!!!!!!

i want it to be simple very simple, very very very simple. i could make better spaceships with guns lazerblasts and many aerials. But i want it to be simple soo i made it like this if you read the critiques which are expleaning why it is so simple than you can understand what i tried to explain !!!!!!!!!:annoyed: :D

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