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Bpham1

11-24-2004, 11:17 PM

Hello this is my first thread. I am a begginer in Lightwave and taking a class @ a JC. I have to render 5 images for my final and this is my first one. I am hoping you can critic and tell me how to make it better especially w/the lighting and composition. Tell what looks wrong and what would make it stand out. We were suppose to make 4 objects and render them. My four were a mini-remote control car, watch, stool, and pencil. Any suggestion to make my models better is appreciated. Keep in mind that texture isn't required for the render. Thanks for looking at it.
http://www.geocities.com/southida@sbcglobal.net/ (http://www.geocities.com/southida@sbcglobal.net/)

midazolam

11-25-2004, 02:01 AM

Well, I guess it's really more of a personal opinion thing here, but the stool should be relatively to scale since your other objects are sort of close. Maybe you could put all the small objects sitting on top of the stool, and just render the seat part. Also, the legs of the stool are too much like one object - they should be separate, individual legs.

Great start, though...

:m

Bpham1

11-25-2004, 02:07 AM

thanks for ur reply and the stool really isn't a stool it's more like my 8th grade woodshop project :p and I built it in layers the way i built it in class. yea and the shadows make it look like one leg when it really is 2.

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