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Meny
11-24-2004, 06:13 AM
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Title: Environment: Factory
Name: Meny Hilsenrad
Country: Israel
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

Hello everyone,

I recently finished this work. i used 3dmax and
photoshop for the texture and some postwork.

visit this link for more images and some sketches:

http://www.themeny.com/temp/factory/factory.htm

and here some credits:
Sketches and concept art by Sherban.
I want to thank Ruzz for it's input and
his great feedback. also thanks to Ilan,
Oren and Yair.

another version:

http://www.themeny.com/temp/factory/factory_brown.jpg

siouxfire
11-24-2004, 11:37 AM
:applause: Very nice work - the loaders give a great sense of scale. Fantastic work.

unwrap
11-24-2004, 12:15 PM
The first version is so cool. Greatly modelled and textured, you also picked up a good lighting and depth. Great work!!! :thumbsup:

victor throe
11-24-2004, 12:55 PM
lovely feel

the chimney things with the red checkers really stand out though.....

id look at moving them into the background a bit more

iayestaran
11-24-2004, 02:08 PM
this is really nice work! I love everything about it-love the sense of scale. nicely done:thumbsup: i think you could use a slight DOF for the bkg though..but just knit picking here

mecman
11-24-2004, 02:09 PM
Nice!!! I love the mood of this scene! Great modeling, great details, great lights
Congrats!

simoncheng
11-24-2004, 03:18 PM
very fine detail. you really got what they call SPECIAL.
i wonder what if after render...

wybl
11-24-2004, 04:21 PM
Lovely details. Something is bothering me about the colors in both scenes I really cant tell what it is. But render itself is gorgeous.

Tilstrom
11-24-2004, 06:00 PM
fantastic work, excellent design! :)

zero-bALANce
11-24-2004, 06:03 PM
I like this piece... but I too feel that the red checkers stand out way to much. The overall feel of the scene is cold. An overwhelming amount of machines with little to no life. I would consider adding figures. In a place as vast as this, it is tough to take in the whole scope without some workers not riding around in loaders. Yet I guess that if you were trying to show a diminishing workforce due to machinery, then bravo. Hit the nail on the head.

jsandoval
11-24-2004, 09:40 PM
Outstanding concept and execution. Very well acomplished sense of magnificence with sense of scale. However I think that more variation in color will benefit this image, Iīm talking about some accesories, hoses, flanges, tubes... in different color than main structures. At first look, you canīt tell differences in material between parts. They look as the same material.

BladeFX
11-24-2004, 10:08 PM
Very nice! Second one has a great atmosphere :thumbsup:

dmitriy_k
11-25-2004, 08:13 AM
Very nice details and design. Amazing work:thumbsup:

dixit13
11-25-2004, 01:27 PM
:applause: Nice work maan , liked the lighting very much n G8 modeling too...


P.O - * scene needs some texture variation ( may be of same colour but diffrent intenseity ) * change texture on the two tallest towers ( did'nt fit the mood of the scene) * N if you wanna go further - then try to improve the enviroment on the farest side ( may be you have to make the horizion more bright) .....Anyways maan i realy like the lighting ...love da work :thumbsup: :thumbsup:



:deal: http://thedesignfirm.4t.com/

yinteshen
11-25-2004, 01:47 PM
Great modeling!

jojojo
11-25-2004, 01:54 PM
that's exellent work! nice atmosphere, although i'm missing some smoke or dust somewhere.

cermit
11-25-2004, 02:47 PM
amazing modeling and texturing work

geneticlone
11-25-2004, 07:01 PM
thats pritty cool try makeing something for the grand space opera contest you have a great chance to suceed. love this model.

questionmark
11-26-2004, 01:51 AM
disgustingly sick with mad details!!! and I mean that in the most positive sense... really and truly inspiring work. Where might I ask did you find the patience to do such a detailed piece ?
I'm totally impressed !
:eek: :thumbsup: :twisted:

WOW! man AWESOME!!!

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Meny
11-26-2004, 12:08 PM
Thanks alot for the feedbacks!!

I really appreciate your comments and suggestions.

here's a link for the making of:

http://www.themeny.com/temp/factory/makingof/page_01.htm

eburdeinick
11-26-2004, 01:09 PM
Outstandig, but i would really like to see more colors in it, im sure it would change the mood, but its worth trying and testing what would come out. And also some close up renders would be nice, with so much detail lost with distance... :applause:

alp
11-26-2004, 03:35 PM
Great sence of scale . Excellent ! :thumbsup:

JuanManuel
11-26-2004, 05:49 PM
I like the second one best, as the first one has a sky that is too "clean" or unpolluted, which with all the chimneys etc, is difficult.

Very good work

zooyorkbmxer
11-29-2004, 03:56 AM
Thats really awsome! that mustve been really hard to make!

i was working on a counter-strike map sort of like that.. nowhere near as complex

psycho1
11-29-2004, 06:07 PM
i have to say this looks awsome i would love to play some type of video game with this type of style.
great job


ROCK ON:twisted: :buttrock:

stilllife27
12-03-2004, 03:13 PM
.....cool work man.......a good combination of lighting n texturing.........n nice render as well. :thumbsup:

itayg
12-13-2004, 10:58 PM
great work meny! maz"lat :thumbsup:

maple
12-14-2004, 05:10 AM
great randering.I like it.congratulation!:thumbsup:

mattia242
12-14-2004, 09:02 AM
Wow, great work!:thumbsup:
very nice atmosphere, although there is something strange in the position of the sun and the shadows...
Greets

mattia242
12-14-2004, 02:15 PM
fantastic work!:thumbsup:

there is something wrong in the position of the sun and the shadows...
but otherwise it's perfect!:applause:

SUB7NYC
12-15-2004, 01:43 AM
Wow, Amazing detail....hats off

Cre8
12-17-2004, 04:38 PM
LOVE your lighting!

ZombieFrog
12-18-2004, 04:12 AM
wow, awesome

SandCastle
12-19-2004, 04:54 AM
nice modeling

long2dogs
12-20-2004, 01:32 PM
I think that the background buildings should be not so high positioned ...in terms of perpective pov

rollmops
12-21-2004, 10:12 AM
My wallpaper now!
:thumbsup: It's the kind of picture people have to take a little time to watch in deep!
Just one small critic on the bending of the right side tubes.
But don't you care. You gave us a nice piece of environment!
keep it up!

snowfish
12-22-2004, 11:39 AM
The balance between the tubes and flat surfaces really make this fun to look at!

vimp
12-22-2004, 08:49 PM
Great modeling!How about more colours?

Agiv3D
12-24-2004, 09:31 AM
5 stars
(5 כוכבים)

b00bie
12-28-2004, 11:00 PM
DAAAAAAAAAMNNN

im lovin it !!!

brooklynfl
01-02-2005, 04:24 PM
Fantastic!!! how long do you finish the work?

RwVision
01-05-2005, 11:56 AM
very very nice! :thumbsup:

Malek
01-05-2005, 09:52 PM
Great work.

It would look even cooler with smoke coming out from some of the chimneys though

impulseone
01-05-2005, 10:01 PM
Brilliant stuff!! I love the design and I think your model really does justice to the concept art. I also love the train pics..nice lighting there also..
Keep em coming!

Fingolfin
01-06-2005, 11:08 PM
You should do a "night scene" with the same factory. It would be cool to see a day vs. night compairison. Otherwise, it great!

Ramteen
01-07-2005, 12:24 AM
:thumbsup: very very very nice job !
I like it so much .

_________________________
But U know what I mean ... !

ATX-YU
01-12-2005, 12:45 PM
it's you!i had seen a demo reel in a cd of "CG WORLD" or "CG MAGZINE",I like it very much,but until today i know it's yours,thanks for good job!

balons
01-13-2005, 02:48 PM
awesome work....

animet
01-14-2005, 01:40 PM
i love your lights:applause:

Agiv3D
01-15-2005, 05:35 PM
as allways, "magniv" is the word for you my friend !

edu.rocha
01-18-2005, 05:12 AM
Great work! nice ilumination!

nobrain
01-19-2005, 01:20 AM
yofi!:buttrock:

reminds me of the oil refinery in haifa.

shimon|nobrain

huskyboss
01-19-2005, 01:54 AM
this is great work very good job I love this buildings WOW

mhcannon
01-19-2005, 06:19 AM
Very cool. Also appreciate that your site shows it in wireframe, flat shaded and textured.

alseides
01-24-2005, 04:58 PM
i really like the lighting. its super bright, high contrast, and very white. has a mesmerizing feel almost.

OTO-ACP
01-26-2005, 10:40 AM
Yop!!!... :bounce: Beautiful work!!! I like much the environment which emerges as well as the design from modeling... Good continuation!!!... :buttrock:

pixpax
02-02-2005, 10:30 AM
:buttrock: do I have to say it? :buttrock:


IT TOTALLY KICKS ASS

love that arkitecture

AVM
02-16-2005, 02:59 PM
it is really excelent.

costas
07-09-2005, 07:43 PM
no comments dude

okitasanus
09-14-2005, 04:58 PM
All I want to say is my and all my colleagues are lookind at ur designs as a rule model....great..no no...amazing work

gandoza
05-30-2006, 02:18 AM
very very good

lui 2.0
07-08-2006, 05:28 AM
very nice lighting and atmosphere. how do guys come up with a scene a like this? i mean, what lights to use? thanks :D

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