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dakmoden
11-18-2004, 06:50 AM
(***updated*** the first image based on your guy's GREAT critiques. The close-up is still the original one but I'll update that one after I fix her eyes. Someone noticed they were crooked :) Thanks for all your helpful and kind words. Please feel free to let me know if any of you notice anything else I can do.)

Hi everyone. I've always needed to work on improving my 2d skills and I finally got the chance to practice. I usually only do pencil drawings and 3d images but I really needed to work on my digital painting skills.

I think it's basically done but I couldnt get it to post in the finished artwork section and I'd like to get some critiques anyways.
I chose this as my picture since I wanted to work on something that could keep me motivated enough to finish the project since I find the software frustrating sometimes and I never get tired of looking at this picture so...

Anyways I didn't time myself but I guess this took around 10-12 hours.

C&C always welcome and don't be afraid to be harsh :) thnx for your tmie
http://www.adam-may.com/images/kellie.jpg

http://www.adam-may.com/images/kellie_closeup.jpg

southparx
11-18-2004, 07:49 AM
jeniffer love-hewitt :thumbsup:

the painting is really nice especially the hair.

one thing that's bothering me is just the upper part of the left arm seems flat, perhaps u should work a bit more on that part.

other than that it's a well done piece :)

Swoop
11-18-2004, 08:27 AM
Looks very very nice i think. But her shirt looks a little flat. Should get some more shading going there to empasize the form.. ;)

dakmoden
11-18-2004, 06:50 PM
Great, thanks for the tips guys. I'll get right on the shirt.

visionist
11-19-2004, 12:00 AM
damn man that looks beautiful man but i do agree that the shirt looks a little flat on the arm and maybe her back part of her shirt. If you work out those little thinks i think it will be an awesome pic, keep up the good work man.

~~Visionist~~

Prinsessan
11-20-2004, 10:59 PM
... beautiful hair! Good work there, I also like the lips.
But the legs? They look a bit masculine I think..
Good luck with the most beautiful girl!
/Karin

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