Vehicle: here is my first car made with nurbs. that used my lots of time:(

[JosephMclamb]

Hey nice model man! Dunno about the background though... but all in all, looks good!

[T0BER]

Very nice.

Some crits: The headlights are lacking a certain depth though. It looks like you have just stuck a glow light behind the glass with no other geometry behind. I find that the lights of cars need a lot of attention as they are almost the equivelant of eyes for people - detail there is important. As for the body of the car itself; there appear to be a few bumps at the area where the front fender meets the front/side panel and then again later down the side at he beginning and end of the door. Try to trim away the insides of the wheel area as well, it should be hollow there.

I don't mean to put you off though. All in all a good image, but can be improved.

All the best.

[jdragon]

thanks for your help. you say these is very right. after this ,i will modefy it let it looks better.:) thank you.

[catbells007]

I too would agree with the previous comment about the wheel arch but i should put some sort of liner in their as opposed to leaving it hollow as most new cars have this kind of fitting. Also the form of the front bumper doesnt flow correctly with that of the front wing.

Rest looks pretty sound tho, nice work.

[BluemoonX]

I think the black line around the headlight looks a bit strange

[EighthDecay]

not to shabby for your first nurbs car model.
what program?

can we see more of it?

keep at it, I'm sure the next one will be even better.

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