= WIP-Cremator =

[JakeJK]

Very nice model... can we see some wires?

the only thing i can crit, is that the ears are maybe a bit too high... maybe you should lower them a bit.

[oxyg3n]

This model looks great, I love the anatomy of your character. Please show us some wires?

[cg219]

I cant see the image.

[oxyg3n]

Hmm that is weird, it is still here. I can see it.

[Smaw]

nice model man!

[Solace9]

I can't see it in most of the images, but with the center image, you can see the "clone" line where you cloned on the axis... seems that the points didn't merge. Otherwise, looks like it's coming along quite well... nice organic modeling!

[BlackNull]

hey guys, thanks for the quick replies! my server was down for a bit for those of u who couldn't see the image, it should be fine now....hopefully.

Iceblaster: those ears are pretty high lol good point
oxyg3n: thanks man, wires comin' up with the next update!

[kev1n]

good mesh... upper part is well done, try to make the bottom as beautifull.... the first abs seem to be big .....

[AndrewHwang]

more veins in his forearms and hands would be nice unless you just plan on doing that with bump mapping, not to take away from the model or anything, it is indeed an incredible job.!

[oxyg3n]

I can't see it in most of the images, but with the center image, you can see the "clone" line where you cloned on the axis... seems that the points didn't merge. Otherwise, looks like it's coming along quite well... nice organic modeling!
Hey Buddy,

How are you doing?? I have not seen you online in a while? Are you still in sactown??

[BlackNull]

Found some time after work for a lil update. Basically reworked a few areas...the proportions have changed slightly also. The hands are bugging me....they shall be cut off MUUAHAHA:twisted:
Shoot I forgot to lower the ears!! too tired to fix it now...next update.ZZZzzzZZZzzz
Oh ya, and some wires....I better clean it up...

Solace9: Hey man, the body is not actually merged yet, but soon tho...then I can finally add some assymmetry:bounce:
http://pierreb.akuter.com/Cremator2/cremator09.jpg
http://pierreb.akuter.com/Cremator2/cremator11_wire.jpg

[Xeroedge]

Hi Pierre~!

This would be Chris ;p

Really good job you have done on him. The face is really good.

few comments though.

His leg is missing the middle muscle and I dont know that area looks a bit odd.
I say remove those viens totally. It looks really werid that only those very few viens show when in that area when your so ripped you would see it quite a lot different. I say bump or displacement map when rotating arm.

The bottom of the hand looks a little flat and the thumb nail area seems to be flat too. I think also the thumb nail doesn't have enough curve to it. I could be wrong though its really hard to see the hand in these renders.

I think sence his so ripped and maybe you want to take the model further by adding those chicken fingers on the side of his chest that come to the front.

The navel right now looks like just a big hole. A little tweaking in that area will make it look much better I think.

The muscle that comes from under the armpit and connects to the choulder bone middle should press down the pec area there in such a strong person I would think or maybe just the start of it.

I think in the middle of the pec area is too much of that muscle pinching......

His oblics [sp?] in such a strong person should have a large intent below them and then nicly flow down to the crotch area.


okay thats it for now ~_~;;

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