Van helsing's lady vampire

[kev1n]

http://img115.exs.cx/img115/1180/shot12.th.jpg (http://img115.exs.cx/img115/1180/shot12.jpg)
I'm trying to give her more feminity

[hesido]

The ear may need reworking, there is a lot of progress from the first shot but still there is some room for improvement. The bottom eyelid has an unexpected wrinkle. At times you may want to reduce poly-count to make it easier to work for you and then add more geommetry to the places that needs more definition.

[kev1n]

Thanks hesido for the crits.
I work with zbursh I don't care to mush about the topology now ....

http://img58.exs.cx/img58/7919/shot221.th.jpg (http://img58.exs.cx/img58/7919/shot221.jpg)

another little update

[hesido]

Nice going, and thanks for the comments on my thread. :thumbsup:

A little suggestion on the wings of the nose, you can make'm smoother..

[Da3X]

It's looking quite good at the moment... allthough this isn't female to me... you said it's supposed to be draculas wife... so you should go for a more female look. Maybe you should take some inspiration using different female fotographs. I'll keep my eyes on this thread though...

[kev1n]

thx da3X and hesido... belive me I've watched a lot of women ( and I mean a lot) picture but each time I've try to make her more female It went boring .... I had to be really subtle and it's hard ... I still got a lot to learn about anatomy... update soon

[kev1n]

http://img70.exs.cx/img70/8210/shot277.th.jpg (http://img70.exs.cx/img70/8210/shot277.jpg)

Im' still lookin for more female feeling .......

[hesido]

A smaller chin would help. A less pronounced cheek bone would make her look more female.

[kev1n]

mesh isn't finished yet,
http://img95.exs.cx/img95/8276/shot42.th.jpg (http://img95.exs.cx/img95/8276/shot42.jpg)
hesido, I've listened you but that's not enought :shrug:

[Coaster]

Hi, looks like a really nice model, the eyes have nice detail, I agree it does seem a bit masculine, it hard to say exactly why, but I would definatly pull the ears forward. I think maybe the jaw is slightly too big, and maybe the brow is a bit heavy, although vampires do sometimes have heavy brows, perhaps go fully female for a while and bring the vampire elements back in later?

So I had a go in photoshop, to see if I'm talking crap or not, I mainly just raised the head, and norrowed the jaw line a bit, to my eye it looks more feminine, at first I thought the eye shape was a little too 'old', but being a vampire it might be a nice way of betraying their true age? what do you reckon?
(this is only my 2cents by the way)
http://img106.exs.cx/img106/826/vampires1.jpg

[hesido]

@coaster: LOL, you are faster than I am! we probably did the photoshopping simultaneously, but I uploaded it to my site minutes later!

I was going to say the exact same as you, and here is my photoshopped version (it is an animgif, if it doesn't switch to the original version, you may want to activate anim gifs or disable any ad blockers (they block much more than they should)

http://www.hesido.com/display/cgtalk/kev1nsuggest.gif

edit: uh oh, I had uploaded the wrong version. :)

[kev1n]

Thx you very much you two ..... I appreciate It...
I don't used to use photoshop to morph a mesh ... from now I'll do. It's a great idea to make a quick preview before modeling... the two verison are interesting, I'll do my best thanks again

hesido you've got a PM

[hesido]

Hi kev1n. You can use my msn, I messaged you on ICQ.

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