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Vali
11-08-2004, 12:52 PM
Valentin Schwind has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/grandspaceopera/view_entries.php?challenger=5145)

Latest Update: Post Effects and Compositing: REDEMPTION Compositing
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990947_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990947_large.jpg)

Some layers of the renderings I used. The compositing was made in combustion.

Vali
11-08-2004, 01:03 PM
http://www.hdm-stuttgart.de/~vs016/gallery/shatteredplanet_08.jpg

first concept of a broken planet

madshooter
11-08-2004, 01:09 PM
Hi Vali, welcome to this challenge. Well The concept looks nice, it has a deep space feeling:cool:
What is the story behind it.

Vali
11-08-2004, 01:30 PM
Thanks! The story is from the shortfilm "redeem" i'm recently making. A pilot returns home and discoveres the remains of his destroyed homeworld and civilisation. More about that later...

Greetz
Vali

Vali
01-17-2005, 05:47 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105984031_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105984031_large.jpg)

Last concept for "Redemption"!

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105989918_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105989918_large.jpg)

Last scribble!

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:27 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990021_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990021_large.jpg)

Planet and spaceship for "Redemption"!

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990121_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990121_large.jpg)

Final textured spaceship and planetmap.

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990173_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990173_large.jpg)

Planet and spaceship for "Redemption"!

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990322_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990322_large.jpg)

Light positions and scene.

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:33 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990432_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990432_large.jpg)

My first "Rendering" image...

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:35 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990534_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990534_large.jpg)

Some layers of the renderings I used. The compositing was made in combustion.

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990742_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5145/5145_1105990742_large.jpg)

My final compositing and still for this contest.

Vali
01-17-2005, 07:42 PM
All files was rendered in RPF.

Vali
01-17-2005, 09:38 PM
"Redemption" is an not-commercial computer-animated short film by me in co-operation with the "Hochschule der Medien - Stuttgart (Germany)"/"University of applied scientics of media Stuttgart". It tells the story of a spacepilot (probably the last living man), which return to his destroyed homeworld after a great war - with the dead body of his killed friend.

I made this picture for the contest with three elements of the film - the space ship of the pilot, a destroyed space station in background and with a broken piece of the planet.

My 3D program was 3ds max 6. Textures and Nebulares was paint with Corel PHOTO-PAINT and the PostEffects was made in Combustion3.

More infos and a video-making-of will coming soon on http://www.redemption.valisoft.com (http://www.redemption.valisoft.com/).

Greetz
Vali

jddog
01-19-2005, 10:47 AM
wow you made all this work really fast... your final image is really wonderful Vali :applause: I really like this space scene and this Mars colors

jdd

Aethyrprime
01-21-2005, 10:49 AM
Nice job. Good overall feeling. Congradulations of finishing in great time!

Vali
01-22-2005, 02:16 PM
Thanks, yes this picture was made in one day (4 hours before ending of the challange). Of course, the ship and the planet mesh are older.

Vali

Squibbit
01-22-2005, 02:22 PM
i think the rules say everything must be new for the contest :(

good image tho

flyingP
01-22-2005, 02:46 PM
i think the rules say everything must be new for the contest :(


Yep, after all it is a WIP challenge

Vali
01-22-2005, 06:59 PM
At the beginning of the contest only one reply has been posted for my first wip concept of a broken planet - only for this contest. I take this element (in another form) to the film and this again for my contest picture. I have made a 4min making of video of my film with ALL wips i collected. Of course, all elements (ship, planet, station) was created AFTER the beginning of this contest (nov + dec).

http://www.hdm-stuttgart.de/~vs016/redemption/Download/makingof_divx.avi
(28 megs)

Greetz
Vali :)

gwhite206
01-24-2005, 05:34 PM
Hey I like your picture overall the planet looks great, it's too late for you to change anything but I was thinking the ship's cockpit could stand to be partially transparent, also try adding some struts to the cockpit. Overall looks great.

Squibbit
01-24-2005, 06:30 PM
heyy ok cool then, dude :thumbsup:

and as I said , good image u got there

ArtisticVisions
01-25-2005, 06:58 PM
At the beginning of the contest only one reply has been posted for my first wip concept of a broken planet - only for this contest. I take this element (in another form) to the film and this again for my contest picture. I have made a 4min making of video of my film with ALL wips i collected. Of course, all elements (ship, planet, station) was created AFTER the beginning of this contest (nov + dec).

It would've been less confusing (and maybe you might have recieved more C&C) if you had been posting the WIP of the ships, planet, station,etc., during the period in which you were creating them...
Still, nice image.

element5
01-26-2005, 08:02 AM
Nice image Vali :thumbsup: goodluck

warthog
01-27-2005, 12:54 AM
nice concept, but i think there should be more bigger debri floating around. The dbri looks all the same. Nice station and ship design. I like it :thumbsup:

Vali
01-27-2005, 02:07 PM
I've upped the short movie to the image on:
http://www.redemption.valisoft.com/

Greetz
Vali

arturro
01-27-2005, 02:47 PM
:applause: :applause: :applause:


I'm really impressed. Great animation and very nice making of. I think You could work more on the facial expressions. But I'm totally impressed that you have done it by yourself. How long did it take to make it?

Respect!

Vali
01-29-2005, 01:51 AM
Thank you!!!


I've worked 4 months on it!

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