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freeman00
08-23-2002, 06:41 AM
Hello everyone, I am new in here.This is my work just finished.I don't have time to set material because I have to go to school.Any way I think it's maybe better not with the material.
please give me some advise.tnx

here is the picture
http://www.flintsoft.com/3d/uploadimages/200208/big/20020807194152234.jpg

:hmm:
ferdo
08-23-2002, 07:06 AM
looks cool, lots of detail, much work, hehe

would love to see it textured !

but there is so less live in it somehow. maybe a few birds or something ?

or something like a garden on the top of one house actually would be cool :)


nice work !
Tumerboy
08-23-2002, 07:19 AM
it very much looks like a model. . . textures would bring it from a model to a city. . . and maybe better lgihting. . . I know people like GI, but real lights would probably help out too.

-Nick

P.S. if you texture, don't forget about dirt.
frye
08-23-2002, 07:24 AM
Great building designs. Did you design them yourself or use reference pics?
I might space some of the buildings out a little. A few look like they're too close together (unless thats the look you're going for).
anticz
08-23-2002, 07:27 AM
No, it's definately not "better" without materials, it's just different (finished model vs. finished scene). Looks good though!!!!! Your GI is set a little grainy for my taste but each to his own I guess.
Joel Hooks
08-23-2002, 07:48 AM
texture it and it'll go from "neat" to incredible.

That is a great looking model.
bioni
08-23-2002, 12:21 PM
very good work and also very good Ilumination.

congratulation !
wasted weasel
08-23-2002, 03:25 PM
As is, it looks kind of like a miniature model for a train set or something, you know? Like all the buildings are made out of foam or cardboard.
It looks good,

Surely textures will make it more real, and I don't know who said it, but adding birds or something to show life would really touch it off nice.

Is it a very low poly count?

tom
Dave Black
08-23-2002, 05:16 PM
very nice work, friend. No crits yet...Lighting is great, and I love the film bloom...

:thumbsup:
Geriss
08-23-2002, 05:58 PM
Nice Render....But I think you should add some bevel in some areas....The model looks a little bitt sharp.....
Flypaper
08-24-2002, 12:19 AM
I think the lighting is great, reminds me of a hot fog filled sunny city day.
otacon
08-24-2002, 03:33 AM
Very nice pic here.:thumbsup:
say-g
08-24-2002, 07:23 AM
excellent work.

I agree that it should be textured for it will bring it to life.

love the hexagon building in the back :applause:
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