Vehicle still MMC Smart

[behzad]

looks great, just some color ideas.
The top one has gray on the car, so try not to repeat the gray in the background. The bottom one has cream color on the car, but again the same color is repeated in the background. Try some contrasting colors. Other wise looks cool.

[Tumerboy]

I would agree with Behzad normall, but I think there's enough going on in there that it's not too hard to figure it out.
And I really like the colors in the bottom pic.

Good lighting,

I think you need some shadows though (in the bottom pic, under the car cuz it's got a very diffuse general shading there but, the car looks like it's kind of floating.

Also, this is just my pet peeve, but make it dirty, add something. . . just to break up the perfection that is there alread.

Lastly, the tires need work. Take a look at real tires, they aren't really black. They're usually a dark bluish or brownish grey, and they are usually. . . yup you guessed it. . . dirty. . .


Anyway, very nice, I like the model and the coloring. Just keep working on the shadows and textures. Maybe a rear shot too.

[freeman00]

This one is better than the one you shown before!!:applause:

[chesky Wang]

Thanks guys.
behzad ,Thank your advise, I think you are right, but when I rendering the work, I had imaged a tone of dark enviroment,
and the car just show some hightlight, I think I got it. But not
good enough. And I think I will do some texture works to the car,
I will try what you had said. ;)

HI,Tumerboy, thanks. You have a nice idea, I will try to make it more dirty,
but at first I will try it in the light object, I have spent 30~60min per hour!
without any textures. and I also confused why the tire so dark,
I have rendered several times, but when the final work get out,
it still dirty. I don't know why. and the wheel had bad reflection.
it seems that I should do more work at lighting and texture.

HI HellRender , I have made my work in Rhino, and Export IGES type
to max,it spend two weeks to finish the work. But I haven't finished
the rendering.

Thank you all.

:wavey:

http://www.chinavisual.com/pub_data/Chesky/Photo/Finalblue1slong.jpg

[say-g]

love the colour in the 2nd pic

wd :bounce:

[Tumerboy]

Better looking tires, but you still need some shadow under it in order to ground it.

[EighthDecay]

sweet Rhino model, and I love that blue color, shadows can be hard to mess with, again great modeling, I love seeing Rhino models. :)

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