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young_927
11-04-2004, 06:43 AM
young choi has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/grandspaceopera/view_entries.php?challenger=5086)

Latest Update: Modeling: car2
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102835066_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102835066_large.jpg)

another car

young_927
11-04-2004, 06:49 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099554584_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099554584_large.jpg)

Hey everyone this is my first concept..
i am gonna add more detail...
any comments are welcomed~

thanks!

kaajey
11-04-2004, 07:55 PM
Yeah I like the concept sketch.
Nice perspective and characters.


See this:

young_927
11-04-2004, 08:43 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099604583_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099604583_large.jpg)

I added some stuff on the foreground..
not sure yet if its people, or some kind of creature,, but i thought it gaved more depth?.....
I will add some more detailed sketches soon~

young_927
11-04-2004, 08:44 PM
thanks kaajey~

I will add some sketches of the characters soon~

young_927
11-05-2004, 05:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099634750_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099634750_large.jpg)

Hey guys~ a little more detailed version...
i am trying mix things up.. w/ animals and playing around w/ shapes..

greentek
11-05-2004, 05:33 AM
wow.. excellent skethes young_927.. and very nice composition..
welcome to the challenge!
i'll be back to see development.. your work is going to be very good..:thumbsup:

best of luck and cheers.. :beer:

WilliG
11-05-2004, 05:54 AM
This looks awesum so far dude.
I think i actually like the first two better than the last one but it's prob just the different style.
Can't wait for the final. :bounce:

young_927
11-05-2004, 06:06 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099638376_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099638376_large.jpg)

this is a quick sketch of the big character,, I am just gonna start modeling him, since this is not really a character contest~ and I don't want to spend couple of weeks in one character.... since I have to create the whole enviroment!! :P

young_927
11-05-2004, 06:08 AM
thanks for your reply greentek~

and thanks WilliG~
yeah, ur right WilliG~ the third one everything its too dark,, not much value,, but i just wanted to make things more clear,, so i would have a better idea of what models have to be detailed~ :)

young_927
11-06-2004, 05:54 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099724091_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099724091_large.jpg)

Hey guys just a little update on my model~

young_927
11-06-2004, 05:56 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099724178_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099724178_large.jpg)

i won't be gettin into too much detail since he will be mostly facing back,..

TiTaNiuM sAMuRa
11-06-2004, 09:48 AM
One word comes to mind: futuropolis. This is a great composition! Are you considering making the form in the sky -- the one in the centre -- a factory-planet? That would be very cool, and would help extend the scene into the space beyond, instead of depicting just the life on this planet's surface.

mmoir
11-06-2004, 12:41 PM
young_927,
I like the sketches that you have done so far, looks very cool. What sort of story line goes with the image. Keep up the good work.
Mike

My GSO entry
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=180886&page=4&pp=15

luigithekid
11-06-2004, 12:47 PM
The sketches look really good!
I like the composition. But in my humble opinion, I think the scene looks way too peaceful, you know, for the "Opera" part, it looks like "A normal day in the life of..." Could you post some background story?
Anyway, the character looks great!! Keep it up! :thumbsup:

young_927
11-06-2004, 11:08 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099786135_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099786135_large.jpg)

little update on my character~

young_927
11-06-2004, 11:09 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099786181_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099786181_large.jpg)

3/4 view

young_927
11-06-2004, 11:14 PM
thanks TiTaNiuM sAMuRa (http://www.cgtalk.com/member.php?u=54257) vbmenu_register("postmenu_1708832", true); yeah~ i was thinking something like factory planet~ :)
and on the right its like a train of some sort that leads to those planets~

thanks mmoir (http://www.cgtalk.com/member.php?u=116113), and luigikid vbmenu_register("postmenu_1709090", true);
the story is that the characters in the foreground are going there to take care of business!
they've been traveling from planets to planets to finally take down the enemy on those factory look alike places..
i am have a question? does it have to be a battle going on to qualify as OPera?

greentek
11-07-2004, 01:57 AM
i am have a question? does it have to be a battle going on to qualify as OPera?
no.. it doesn't..

Dutchman
11-07-2004, 09:00 AM
Great work! I like that style in those sketches! The composition looks really nice! That 3D model looks a bit lowpoly at this moment, in my eyes, but I think its meant in that way?! :)

Allot good luck,

Gijs

young_927
11-08-2004, 09:09 PM
thanks dutchman~

yeah, they're not that high res... I don't think u will be able to tell w/ textures though, plus they won't be that close to the camera ..
if not,, i have to go back and do some modification.. :)

i will post more stuff later tonight~

young_927
11-09-2004, 04:54 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099979651_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099979651_large.jpg)

here is model wip, on the smaller character~

young_927
11-09-2004, 06:03 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099983837_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1099983837_large.jpg)

screen shot~

young_927
11-12-2004, 06:03 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1100243004_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1100243004_large.jpg)

a little update..
i almost done laying out the UVs~

young_927
11-16-2004, 05:22 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1100586120_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1100586120_large.jpg)

i finally got around texturing this guy ! :) hopefully i will be done by this week~

dubacan
11-16-2004, 06:46 AM
I think your final scene will be good. But add details to your characters.

young_927
11-16-2004, 04:04 PM
yeah,, i will be adding more details... hmmm.. i am thinking maybe i should add more poly details on the characters... even though they will be kind of far away....

thanks for your comment~

young_927
11-21-2004, 05:57 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101020243_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101020243_large.jpg)

almost done w/ the texture~ got to touch a bit more~
and crits or comments are welcomed~

young_927
11-22-2004, 05:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101105950_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101105950_large.jpg)

need to touch up more on the texture,, but this is just a basic idea :)

lehmi
11-22-2004, 06:17 AM
wow cool stuff. I like the Textures!

can you show the model from the back?
That's the only side you see of him in the final comp right?

can't wait to see to see the other guy textured!


keep it up

young_927
11-22-2004, 04:58 PM
yeah, sure~ i will do that as soon as I get home~
maybe I should add more stuff on his back... :)

thanks for your reply~

young_927
11-23-2004, 03:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101184522_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101184522_large.jpg)

here its the back view

kaajey
11-23-2004, 04:23 PM
I like the compositon well well well.

The hut of the character above seems funny to me but let see
Hope to see more

I'm subscribing.


See this>

young_927
11-25-2004, 07:51 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101372702_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101372702_large.jpg)

i began laying out the uvs for the small character

overcontrast
11-25-2004, 01:00 PM
hey very nice and cute charecters u got there man... u got style i gotta admit... keep up the good works... ur doin great :thumbsup:

claudiojordao
11-25-2004, 07:38 PM
Excelent concept sketch, and very cool models... I'm coming back for more :)

emonimo
11-25-2004, 10:01 PM
I say the same as Claudio Jordao ..... excelent work!! :thumbsup:

I'll be looking foward .....

young_927
11-26-2004, 06:25 AM
thanks for your comments guys~!!!
I will keep updating as much as I can~
so keep coming back~ :)

young_927
11-26-2004, 09:07 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101463638_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101463638_large.jpg)

little update on my character~
i need to touch up the texture...
just got done putting down the basic form and stuff :)

Virtuoso
11-26-2004, 10:58 AM
Nice concept Young..................I like the idea and layout very much.........I think your plan is one that has alot of potential,and I think you are on the right road to getting there.........The charcaters remind me of the up-coming game "Stranger from Oddworld"...... in some ways.........Nice work,fun and interesting,keep it up,looking very nice..........:arteest:

phoenixomen
11-26-2004, 01:58 PM
One of the things I like about this Challenge is the multitude of different interpretations and visions that all the artists have in regards to the subject matter. I like your approach, the style of charactersthat you are going with and I think your sketches are great. I like how your models have been true to your sketches. Keep up the good work and look forward to future updates.
Alex!

young_927
11-26-2004, 10:13 PM
thanks for your comments guys~!
I will keep udating as much as I can~

young_927
11-26-2004, 11:49 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101516544_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101516544_large.jpg)

here its the backview

essencedesign
11-27-2004, 12:27 AM
very stylized aproach man...way to step away from the pack..very much in the style of Oddworld crew....keep it up :thumbsup:

young_927
11-28-2004, 02:24 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101612283_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101612283_large.jpg)

this is the basic color texture for small character's gun.. need to touch up w/ some rust and more tone..

Climax
11-28-2004, 04:38 AM
Man! I am Impressed, I like Your sketches so much, moodeling and also texturing!
At this early phase of your progress I am not sure if I can give any helpfull Critic, so I'll keep an eye here for more evolution

.... Maybe this can help, I like the fat guy with a shirt, exactly as in your sketch, musculature seems too rounded, some wrinkles in clothes will give a very significative change!

Nice to Come visiting!:)

young_927
11-28-2004, 07:36 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101630960_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101630960_large.jpg)

i updated the texture~

young_927
11-28-2004, 07:39 AM
thanks for your reply Climax~
for the big guy.. I was thinking of him having sometype of metal armor or something...
but I see what your talking about~
when i put everythig together I will see what works the best ...and I will keep in mind about your advice w/ the shirt..
Since these 2 character will be kind of far away,, I think I am kind of spending too much time on the textures :P...
well now off to model the Train~ :) and the high poly character in the foreground~

Lemog
11-29-2004, 06:15 AM
The first sketch agree me a lot... and I when I see the Big Guy... I laughing... it's so good and so interesting... I like your way...

I'm waiting here to see more of your creation... Keep it up man :thumbsup:

young_927
11-29-2004, 06:16 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101712608_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101712608_large.jpg)

my first pass of the train~
just a rough model.. I will be addin more details~ :)

young_927
11-29-2004, 06:18 AM
thanks Lemog~
Your stuff kicks ass~ :)

arturro
11-29-2004, 08:01 AM
I like your characters, thesketch is also great, but it shows that much work still to be done... hope you will finish on time! Good luck:thumbsup:

claudiojordao
11-29-2004, 09:04 AM
Very cool modeling Young... keep the good work.

young_927
11-29-2004, 04:59 PM
thanks Claudio, and arturro~

yeah,, there is so much work to be done,,, :P
I can't believe its december already~~ time goes by so fast~
Hopefully i can finish it during my Christmas Break~ :) I would really like to finish this up!

young_927
11-30-2004, 05:04 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101794644_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1101794644_large.jpg)

little update on the train

young_927
12-04-2004, 09:26 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102199177_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102199177_large.jpg)

wireframe view

young_927
12-04-2004, 10:02 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102201322_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102201322_large.jpg)

little update on my train :)

young_927
12-08-2004, 05:03 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102485816_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102485816_large.jpg)

here its first pass for the character in the foreground

young_927
12-08-2004, 06:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102489522_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102489522_large.jpg)

spaceship

young_927
12-08-2004, 06:16 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102490161_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102490161_large.jpg)

different view

lentil man
12-08-2004, 06:18 AM
hey young_297 - man i like that space ship - especially the rotors. damn - how did i not think of those!? i love choppers. I love your concept sketch work - so fluid and casual, yet filled with tone and detail. its a :thumbsup: from me

my space opera (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=192509)

young_927
12-08-2004, 05:05 PM
thanks lentil man!
I wanted to go futuristic but still keep some old elements ~ :)
I just hope I can finish in time...
seems like it will be a busy winter for me :P
I will keep updating~

young_927
12-11-2004, 11:27 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102811263_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102811263_large.jpg)

first pass of the car model

young_927
12-12-2004, 06:04 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102835066_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/5086/5086_1102835066_large.jpg)

another car

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