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ilam
11-02-2004, 11:45 PM
Project Name: Senior Project for 3D Modeling
School: Cogswell College

I need serious Critiques for my senior project
There are 3 models that I need to complete with rig, texture, light.
I am still working on the rig, will going to texture and lighting by next week.
Please give some comment on these 2 models' post, proportion, and over all rating as future demo reel....
Thank You all

Ilam:thumbsup:
http://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/608_1024.ts1100096850000.jpg
http://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/599_1024.ts1100096146000.jpg

*lx
11-03-2004, 05:11 AM
Where are those models? I can't see any links or images in that post...

ilam
11-03-2004, 06:30 AM
http://ilam1.photosite.com/SeniorProject/
http://ilam1.photosite.com/SeniorProject/
Please try again...:D
http://ilam1.photosite.com/SeniorProject/

oxyg3n
11-03-2004, 10:38 PM
It looks like you have a good start on this. Are you going for realism or stylistic??

On the renders with her head it looks like there is an unusual lump on the forehead. Also, I would like to see some more renders with better lighting and some wireframes.

Is this going to be animated?? I like the pose that she is in, what is the story behind her??

ilam
11-04-2004, 06:43 AM
Hi Hi:
Thanks for the reply...:thumbsup:
Yes, I am going to realism, there still problem with the rig that I need to fix, especially with the arm..:sad:
The Lump on her frohead I will fix it this weekend, and will update by monday...^^
However, i am not going to animate these two char, couz both of them are in high poly after rig, I local sub-d them...>< for better rig and easy weight paint....
I would love to animate them only if I can have better computer..heh
The first model, it's a recreation of a Mucah painting...I am going to post pictures to my link...
And my own picture for my self-protrail.(sorry for my bad pic:rolleyes: )

ThankSsss..!!
Ilam
http://ilam1.photosite.com/SeniorProject/

By the Way, how to post pictures on Cgtalk without linking it? I can't get picture like others did in here...please help....thanks:bounce:

-Vormav-
11-04-2004, 08:35 AM
Can you post any close-up shots? Can't really see enough in these to make out the details, etc.

As for how people include images in their posts; when you go to post a reply, look at the additional options section and there's an "attach files" option.

oxyg3n
11-04-2004, 06:06 PM
you create a link to your image using the following tags:

and

put your link in between them and it should work.

ie http://wwwyourlinkhere http://www.yourlinkhere

itsallgoode9
11-05-2004, 02:53 AM
make a page where the photo and the model are on the same page .....and yeah, post some higher res version....i'm liking you model so far....i like how the body is looking more naturalistic and not the perfect idealistic body that every cg female model is..... the face looks a little bit.......skelatal I guess.....try working on making it a bit fleshier....going in the right direction though! keep it going...i'm a senior too...dec 10th then hopefully off to the industry soon after that! good luck

ilam
11-09-2004, 06:38 AM
Hi all
I been working on the riging, so far coming along pretty good...still some problem with the arm...
I fixed the Mucha head....I am still trying to figure out how to render wire frame in XSI..
I will ask my teacher tomorrow...therefore more update comming up tomorrow...
Thanks for all the comment....
http://ilam1.photosite.com/SeniorProject/mucha3_1.html
http://ilam1.photosite.com/SeniorProject/?page=2
still can't post pictures as others did..try the site ..dont work..
hehe, I guess I have to trouble you guys to check my pics from my third party website...

thanks all

ilam
11-09-2004, 06:45 AM
http://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/589_1024.ts1099653482000.jpghttp://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/588_1024.ts1099653408000.jpg
I got the images on ^^
program: XSI
Subject: Recreation of Mucha painting

ilam
11-10-2004, 01:52 PM
http://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/609_1024.ts1100097256000.jpg
http://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/607_1024.ts1100096712000.jpg
http://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/608_1024.ts1100096850000.jpg
http://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/601_1024.ts1100095936000.jpg
http://ilam1.photosite.com/~photos/tn/603_1024.ts1100096074000.jpg

here are some update render pictures of my senior project

For more images: http://ilam1.photosite.com/SeniorProject/

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