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WhiteBlaizer

08-21-2002, 05:18 PM

hi 2d maniacs

here´s my first work with a digital pen. It needs some retoches such us lighting and little things without importance.

http://blaizer.metropoliglobal.com/w006.jpg

Please make constructive critics

x-alien

08-22-2002, 02:36 AM

cool! :beer:

i have not critics

awesome work :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

:thumbsup:

flamedevil

08-22-2002, 10:00 AM

TOTAL CHAOS !!!!! :scream:

Looks very good for a first, i like the cloth and the smoke behind.

:thumbsup:

WhiteBlaizer

08-22-2002, 04:15 PM

here's a bigger image from this work.

http://blaizer.metropoliglobal.com/w006a.jpg

:buttrock:

puddlefish

08-23-2002, 12:10 PM

Nice work, great for a first try!
However, I think the composition could be better, especially when it comes to the main character. His pose is very wooden, and doesn't look natural. Maybe don't have him so head on, it tends to flatten things. Also, the foreshortening on his right arm is a bit off.

Hope this helps

WhiteBlaizer

08-23-2002, 12:31 PM

thanks, u have reason. i need to change somo things like that u say. :cool:

The right arm is so short, the head may be not so flyer :) and the ilumination, respect the fire... need a lot of changes.

thanks for all

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