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rashaverak
10-28-2004, 05:59 AM
Sebastian J. Gomez has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/grandspaceopera/view_entries.php?challenger=4895)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: Anotherr color test
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1102741947_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1102741947_large.jpg)

one more...

rashaverak
10-28-2004, 07:32 AM
hi people, first at all, i apologize for my poor english :P

okz, when i read the objetive of GSO , the first thing that became to my head was the concept of evolution that Arthur C. Clarke develops in his book "Childrenhood's End" (also, the concept of that kind of "god" really change my religious point of view). Okz, my idea its too mix up that with some kind of Karma concept attached to it. The final unification to this being is preceded by a purifier process, leaded by the Shepherd to finally arrive where this Mente Maestra (Mastermind) is fisically manifiested and complete the purification and unify the race.So, the idea will become a kind of prophecy instead a myth or legend, cause this didn't happened... is going to (its supposed to happen with all the races of the universe enventually (except the Instrumentals (like the Shepherd, specifically created for this purpose), but the picture focus only in a race.

okz, thats the idea, but ill write it longer later.

Good works & have fun!

azazel
10-28-2004, 08:54 AM
Arthur C. Clarke develops in his book "Childrenhood's End"
Man, you really liked that book.... judging by your username ;) Good luck :)

rashaverak
10-30-2004, 05:56 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1099112215_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1099112215_large.jpg)

im still defining a few details of the scene, so, by the moment, i will the concept sketch of the Instrumental Shepherd.

greetings

rashaverak
10-30-2004, 05:58 AM
damn dial up cnx :s

essencedesign
10-30-2004, 04:15 PM
Quite a cool sketch indeed...can't wait to see this modeled !:applause:

texxx
10-30-2004, 04:16 PM
the sketch is strange and disturbing, I love it.

mmoir
10-30-2004, 04:21 PM
rashaverak,

Yes , I like your sketches too. I also like the spiritual take on this as well , the prophetic aspect gives a icon feel to it.
Good luck in the contest.

Mike

My entry
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=180886

rashaverak
11-01-2004, 05:28 AM
thnx for the comments guys! i wont be able to upload more stuff this week, im to busy right now , but im dying for work on this, so ill try to finish soon as posible my schedule.

texxx: your site itz amazing, i love your works! wish i have an uncle like Cthulu :buttrock:

greetings

Genesisa
11-01-2004, 04:40 PM
you what that remember me very much to Cirque Du Solei, Varekai, just amazing, good work man maybe you can use some colors like reds something like that, very dark, cool concept. :bounce:

sonicstrawbery
11-01-2004, 05:59 PM
Yeah, very intriguing concept... In what kind of environnement this guy is going to be ??

Keep updating !!

rashaverak
11-02-2004, 03:13 AM
genesisa: about the red colors, in fact, some of the main things in the compositing are red :D

cipher: it wont be in the outter space, but i cant describe it , see it in the sketch will be the best

cattledog
11-02-2004, 07:33 AM
I like the sketch. Unfortunately, I have not read teh book. So I don't really know what you're talking about. I hope you have a chance to expand the story. Can't wait to see some models.

Good luck.

rashaverak
11-03-2004, 04:36 AM
cattledog

I like the sketch. Unfortunately, I have not read teh book. So I don't really know what you're talking about. I hope you have a chance to expand the story. Can't wait to see some models.

Good luck
true! u r right! i only comment the story, n cause the first ones to reply the thread knew the book, i totally forget to expand the story. im reaaally busy right now, but im my first free time i ll update some concept sketches with the complete story

greetings!

vrhead
11-03-2004, 06:55 AM
must be hard to stand up=/ but very cool

claudiojordao
11-04-2004, 09:54 AM
Hello, what a great sketch you have there! But, that's it? No more stuff? :) Come on man!

rashaverak
11-05-2004, 06:13 AM
i'd been 3 days sleeping only 3/4 hours, im knocked out, too busy! next week im sure ill be free, so i should be posting new sketches and the whole story

thnx for the motivating comments anyway! :thumbsup:

greetings

rashaverak
11-06-2004, 06:54 AM
about the new concept sketch above, do u people think its "un-original"? im not sure about the concept... better ill check it out later

rashaverak
11-06-2004, 06:58 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1099724287_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1099724287_large.jpg)

okz! i found some free time to scan a new concept sketch of another character but i couldn't find time to write the story yet
maybe i should post first a sketch of the complete scene, but ill wait and finish it properly, but better i hurry up

saludos

young_927
11-06-2004, 07:35 AM
cool character concepts! can't wait till you put everything together~

mmoir
11-06-2004, 01:46 PM
Rashaverak,

Your latest character is looking nice, I like the mix between the technical(head) and the spiritual(flow robes)
Mike

My GSO entry
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=180886&page=4&pp=15

rashaverak
11-13-2004, 06:13 AM
okz, heres the story, or some part of it. Im really busy, and i dont know if im gona make it, but ill try.


La civilizacion estaba lista hacia siglos, pero el Ente comenzo a manifestarse recičn ahora, en las ultimas generaciones,los Seleccionados, los Ultimos Nacidos. Aunq el resto no formaria parte de la transicion, no tenian el don, de alguna manera sabian lo q iba a suceder. Los Campos Puros aparecieron y el dia llego junto con los Pastores Instrumentales, que llevarian en una ultima procesion de purificacion y union a los Seleccionados, a lo largo de la Senda Gris, pasando por los ultimos Pilares de Ascencion , hasta la Mente manifestada, complementandose con ella, sin espacio, sin tiempo, pero siendo todo, y el resto, los Anteriores, obsoletos, sin proposito, esperarŕn el tiempo q les quede. Son pocas las razas como estas, q ven el fin desde el principio. La profecia se cumple, el momento ha llegado.

The civilization was ready centuries ago, but the Beign started to demonstrate recently, in the last generations, the Selects, the Last Borns. The Pure Fields appeared and the day arrived with the Instrumental Shepherds, who would guide the Last Borneds through a purification and union procession, along the Grey Path, passing the last Ascension Pillars, down to Mind are physically manifested, complementing with she, without space, without time, been everything, and the rest, the Previouses, obsoletes, with no purpose, will wait the resting time. Only a few races, like this, can see the end from the beginnign. The Profecy fulfils, the moment has come.


greetings!

Jaba153
11-13-2004, 10:47 AM
supa nice sketchez!! bravo! y suerte con la modelizacion! cool story too:thumbsup:

rashaverak
11-22-2004, 02:19 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101089963_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101089963_large.jpg)

at last i found some free time! this is a fast rough of the scene. I think this viewpoint gives a icon feel to the image, but not much "spectacularity" (or however it writes). The lines behind are the Walkers... walkin :P, and that kind of wall beyond the lines is a biiiig waterfall, then biiiiig clouds, and those sticks are like biiiig distant buildings/towes/contructions of any kind (u see, everything is biiiiig... cause its GSO xD )

greetings!

rashaverak
11-22-2004, 02:47 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101091628_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101091628_large.jpg)

this rough is even worse! sorry, no time! but what matters here is the angle... mmm.. i like these one, but i dont know... what do u think guys?

greetings

lehmi
11-22-2004, 08:06 AM
I like the perspective!


style is really outstanding... it's all so... thin... really nice!
can't wait to see more!

nuclearman
11-24-2004, 05:17 AM
Sebastian, your sketches are quite good, and should make for a really neat scene. The sketch of the Walker made me think of a post-Apocalyptic "Cirque du Soleil," and I can't wait to see it rendered in full 3D glory! Good luck! I'll keep track of your progress.

Versiden
11-24-2004, 11:17 AM
heya

great character sketches... looking very promising.. hoping to see something in 3d soon

Sharga
11-24-2004, 04:39 PM
I especially like the use of details for your character sketches. That second sketch of the scene is much more dramatic and compelling. Extreme perspective=sweet. My only suggestion is to make one of the shepherds really close up in the foreground, so the viewer feels like he/she's being herded along with the masses.

rashaverak
11-26-2004, 05:01 AM
thnx for the c&c , guys! i really "apreciate" ("" means im not sure how to write it :P) them

Sharga: thnx for the suggestion! i was thinkin to make a Shepherd very close to the camera, but when yr idea of suiting the viewer like he/she's being herded along with the masses, that gave me the camera angle i was looking for! thnx :D

ill post some colouring sketches soon

greetings!

rashaverak
11-29-2004, 04:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101703514_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101703514_large.jpg)

okz, i defined some colors of the scene... ill work out the saturation and color balance, but thats the general idea (anyway, i never respect the sketches :P)
as u know, c&c r welcome :)

greetings

gmiller8
11-29-2004, 07:40 AM
Holy sht dude,
You have practickly created an entire world. Kinda Dark but really sweet. I am not saying it is un original, nut it reminds me of Warhammer 30000. But only in the religeolse since of with the herding of the races and such. You designs are totally originall. the concepts just reminded me of it. Thanks for the vision. keep it up.

arturro
11-29-2004, 09:04 AM
Nice colors man, but I would advice to reduce the clouds. They are too big and cover too much of the sky. The feeling of division between the foreground and background is disturbed by this. Good luck!

BC1967
11-29-2004, 03:58 PM
GREAT CONCEPT! I loved that book too. And.. Rama!
The character sketches are wonderful, weird and beautiful at the same time, very otherworldly. Keep going!
My only suggestion would be to push the camera angle even more. Try taking it down to the walkers, seeing the shepards and the Enity from a POV inside their eyeline.

cla-w
11-29-2004, 04:01 PM
how is necessary it to make to be registered with the challenge?

thanks

rashaverak
11-30-2004, 04:57 AM
wow! lots of replies!

gmillereight:i couldn't finde WH30000 pics :s post a few if u have, plz!

arturro: excellent, when i was making the colour sketch, there was something on the background that was anoying me, but i didnt see what was it! u r right! but i really like big clouds... so, i think im gonna reduce them a bit, and make vertically larger the final image, so ill have space to play with the sky and separate better the fore and the background (maybe i could desaturate a bit the background, or changing its color balance, makin almost an unique tone... ill see) thnx!

BC "mil nueve sesenta y siete" :D: yes, i was thinkin on it, pushing more the angle not only will give me a more detailed view, i think it will bring more power to the scene, but for the colouring sketch i didnt redraw the scene, i used the old sketch and painted on in :P too lazy and short of time :P

worleyclarence: i didnt understand the question :s

greetings!

rashaverak
11-30-2004, 05:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101791148_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101791148_large.jpg)

okz some modelling of the Pillars... the solid structure is quite simple, so im working out the red clothes, but here is what i got so far

SnakeFarlow
11-30-2004, 05:06 AM
Wow nice concept, When could I see more modelings, I hope that will be soon.

I will keep one eye in your work.

Take a look of my images www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=184160 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=184160)

Snake Farlow. The rogue.

rashaverak
11-30-2004, 05:11 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101791483_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101791483_large.jpg)

from other angle

rashaverak
12-02-2004, 04:25 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101961499_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1101961499_large.jpg)

im done :P jokin
its a 3D sketch of the scene
the sky'll be higher, ill do it in post, but i dont know if its allowed to do that in this category, ill read the rules :P

rashaverak
12-11-2004, 05:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1102741546_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1102741546_large.jpg)

dammnn im too busy , i think im not gonna finish it at time :s
some color test i forgot to submit

rashaverak
12-11-2004, 05:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1102741947_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4895/4895_1102741947_large.jpg)

one more...

blackdragoncg
12-13-2004, 03:39 PM
Hi there! I just want to say i think you are a talented artist! I really like the concept sketches you have done there! some awsome style and imagination there. I wish you luck with your entry.

Kind regards
Gary

My Thread http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=191177&highlight=Gary+Picton

rashaverak
12-15-2004, 04:26 AM
thnx , i really apreciate yr words, man!
im sad, cause i dont think im gonna make it... the same with machineflesh contest :(

greetings!

essencedesign
12-15-2004, 05:00 AM
Well a great concept anyways...I would still love to see those walkers modeled out..so weather it's for the contest or not....get on IT... :argh:

vrhead
12-18-2004, 05:37 AM
wicked concepts but yea better start hammering out some models man !!!

claudiojordao
12-19-2004, 04:06 PM
Hum!!! This is strange!!! I like it!!!
Cool!!!

SnakeFarlow
12-21-2004, 06:54 AM
I really like your art, but I dont understand what are you trying to do. Those flags, the big sphere bihind, looks great but I dont get what it really is. Are you going to insert some people or ships, It will be really good. I hope so.

rashaverak
12-22-2004, 04:53 AM
thnx for the motivating words, guys :P i found some time, im modelling the shepherd, still, im not gonna make it... anyway, ill finish it, someday :)

mista farlow :): in the reply #22 i wrote a short version of the history, i promess i ll wrote more before i finish the work :) in first place, i considered to place some ships in the sky, but i think it will disturb the spiritual feeling that im triyin to show in the scene , but i will think it if i see i cant finish the work for the contest

greetings!

Climax
12-31-2004, 05:46 AM
• Sketchs are looking good Sebastian, Time is running out
still, im not gonna make it... anyway, ill finish it, someday :)

• Work hard, It would be great, and you know you can make it! :thumbsup:

blackdragoncg
01-18-2005, 02:25 AM
Please finish this at some stage i would really like to see the complete image:bounce:

Until then good luck with your works i hope you do well.
Kind regards
blackdragon

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