Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Andy Yang

[CoolBird]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4866/4866_1099858485_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4866/4866_1099858485_large.jpg)

here is one of them more will come

[NOOB!]

cool i love mechs,check out my thread if u wanna to see my mech progress.

the only thing i dislike about it is the face,i think it cud be more menacing.

[annisahmad]

woo, awesome sketch! just one thing; the anatomy of the head can use some work. but hey! this is only a sketch :P. look forward to u developing it

[JARhead]

I like it how the cannon is smoking. Whats going on with his right hand? Did it get blowen off?

So whats your whole idea? What dose this charater fit in the big picture? Be intresting to know :D

Good luck, seems like your on the right track

[CoolBird]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4866/4866_1100240938_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4866/4866_1100240938_large.jpg)

robot 2

[CoolBird]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4866/4866_1100241075_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4866/4866_1100241075_large.jpg)

just an idea of an envirnment

[CoolBird]

having a hard time trying to put those things all together in a big picture anyone got any sugestions?

[teknotek83]

I think so far the first sketch seems to have the most potential. The third one's environment is very very reminiscent of a modern day setting. That's fine and what not, but to be honest, there isn't really anything going on that would imply a world based on science fiction. The second one is fine, but there is almost no story present within that specific drawings. The first one has the most potential because you can tell that this space-marine is struggling with something and he's obviously trying to kill this thing while falling. In oder to develoop this scene a bit more, I'd think about the story (if you have already, then try your best to explain it). Hope this helps! Good luck on the challenge!

[Miker]

The cityscape doesnt work that well. you need a center of interest in that picture, a person at least to keep our eye on the prize or story for that matter. the eyes move around, but you need to be able to hold it somewhere and have the rest of the picture as support. your first sketch works best so far. keep the sketches coming.

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