Animated Short "Space Deliveries"

[Flypaper]

To be brutally honest it's not much of a teaser/trailer. The subtitles (or whatever I couldn't read them) wasted alot of space, then you showed the same environment like 4 or 5 times (the treehouse) and a couple of wireframe and progression shots. I have no clue what it's about. The flag was also reused. I would have waited till you were a further ahead in production to produce a trailer/teaser. Truth be told it kind of turned me off from watching any further movies from this saga.

Don't get me wrong it has promise, but how many different ways can you show the treehouse?

[anticz]

Ummm,... There's a couple model spins and an environment. This really isn't anything like a trailer. I'd say post a couple of your best models in the WIP section. When you get a lot further along (like a couple complete shots or some actual animation) come back and post again. Only crit/feedback I can give is nothing really looked finshed. Hope that was helpful and you don't think I'm being a jerk.

[BASSit]

Actually i was searching for critics...

The enviroment with the tree house is finished ! and that´s why i have posted it here.

To Flypaper: Sorry, that the site is just in german. But i told the visitors that the movie isn´t a real trailer or teaser. It´s just a mixture of test-animations and stills !

To Anticz: I don´t think you are a jerk, because i like your 1st nixie episode ! Waiting for the 2nd... But instead of telling me that this is no trailer (i already mentioned it on my website !) you could give some advises on the finished enviroment.

[anieves]

I think you should split your movies in smaller pieces until your "real teaser" is complete. Geocities is too damn slow... I had to give up, took too long to download.

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