Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: mohd zaki bin ragman

[ragman]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4811/4811_1099015073_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4811/4811_1099015073_large.jpg)

in progress

[ragman]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4811/4811_1099534519_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4811/4811_1099534519_large.jpg)

hi guys still under developement
hope can see a clearer picture soon .

[shadowstarre]

Looks like a cool concept, that sweeping perspective really sucks you in. This might become one of those pictures that you can get lost in for hours, but we'll see. ^^

[ragman]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4811/4811_1099994575_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4811/4811_1099994575_large.jpg)

thanks man
for yur comment man ...respect...:)

[screamingwing]

Strange. Prefer the scale of big ship in first image. In black and white looks as though it is much further away and much bigger. Like the insectoid arms thing going on. Like where you are going with your colours.

[PetriJ]

Try making that ship lighter and more desaturated, I think that'll just do the trick.

[Hillartsympho]

is the tip of the ship intended to be pointing down toard the palent or back in space? if you want it to recede back to the horizon, the shape would need to be a more obtuse angle and it would end a bit higher off the horizon. is it supposed to be so big that it extends past teh horizon? just some things to thing about.
good job and good luck!

[sidchagan]

Definitely got a great concept going, but I cant help but think its too dark. it sets the mood perfectly, but theres need to be some highlights somewhere.

[renton]

I like the initial sketch , at your last img, the ship seems to be very close the character or twisted .

[ragman]

thank guys

yeah , ill guess it does look better if it desaturated
rite now im trying to tighten up certain detail.......
thanks again guys for yur comments.....:)

[melkao]

amazing image that you have. it makes me remember the lord of the rings.

good luck:)

[ragman]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4811/4811_1100596992_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4811/4811_1100596992_large.jpg)

sorry still in progress i noe is a bit slow,hope i can finished bfore the dateline...:)

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