Demo Crit

[TimmyJay]

looks good man, no sound at work so I can't coment on synch but it looks good.

[RaoUUUL]

real fast. really good stuff. you need to get rid of those black screens between shots. annoying.

[kevinw]

Thanks for taking the time to look at my stuff. I agree the black has to go. I'll hopefully have an update next week.

[scottiedoo]

haha, I bet you know my friend Dave Bokser ... he worked on that animation with the jeep who wanted to fly as well.

I think it is good, agreed about the black space inbetween... maybe make it a little more shorter because you have good stuff but its not a whole lot different all the way through if you understand what I mean..


good stuff and good luck on your animations!

[jamesjhunt]

great work! nice animation!

my only critic apart from what's already been said would be to
get rid some of the shorter clips at the middle/end part. doesn't really
add anything to your reel. kill your darlings :D

keep up the great work!

[kevinw]

Thanks for the comments guys (or girls?) Still working on some new stuff that I want to include to mix it up a bit.

Stealth:
Which clips are you referring to specifically? And what the hell are Darlings?

Scottiedoo:
Yeah Dave is a funny guy. I really enjoyed working with him. (when he wasn't all drunk and verbally abusing everyone in the studio) :sad:

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