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Laia

10-23-2004, 12:15 AM

Hi there!!
I wanna show you a piece of the project I'm working on. I't will be a short short, but for the moment I'm testing both the character design and the rig (needs eyes controls and some unseen details ;)). I'll like to know what do you think about it.. and of course critics are wellcome!! :)

(728 Kb) avi file (http://www.feedthefishes.com/videos/Laia_DB.avi)
http://www.feedthefishes.com/videos/Laia.jpg

RaoUUUL

10-24-2004, 05:49 AM

i think she can be angry...er. she looks stubborn angry but then i guess not stubborn enough. nice job, some tweaks could make this a great moment.

kevinw

10-26-2004, 08:13 PM

I think it's pretty good up through the kick. Nice and Snappy. But he kick needs some work. I'd like to see the same quick, snappy movement when she kicks the box. And put more force behind it. Including more of a follow though after the kick.
Nice Character BTW.

harmonic01

10-26-2004, 10:51 PM

Hey nice anim. btw, it's "nice girl, isn't SHE?", not it. girls are not it. :-) Anyways, about the animation. When she's about to kick and brings her right foot up, I think her torso should be twisting the other way and her hands should be going to the oposit side of her torso. Just try and kick something yourslf that way and see how your torso and arms move for balance.

that's about all I can say. Nice animation, I like it. :-)

Thorse3D

10-27-2004, 10:18 AM

Hey Laia!

Nice to see you here! I like the character design!! I was looking the animation several times and i see something strange when after get angry she moves her arms down. There is an arc movement but i see something strange. I dunno. Maybe I´m a paranoic? :P

BTW Nice work!

David
http://www.davidmartinez.com

Laia

10-27-2004, 10:57 PM

Uau!!
thanks for all that interesting comments.. excuse me if I'm not that expressive.. but I don't want to make any mistakes... that's why I will try to speak in a basic english level ;) don't bother about this "harmonic", but you have to understand that if i don't use english as a first language it's not easy for me to "speak" that right... :(

Anyway thanks again for the advices, I will try to change them as soon as I arrive at home (I'm having some holidays).

(Hey "harmonic"!!! this message has been really dificult for me to write!!! so, next time I'll ask you correct my mistakes, ok??? :))

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