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wonder
08-19-2002, 10:59 AM
Hello,there~
I just finish it, created by 3DsMaxR4.
Hope you will like it, and I need your advice~ :)

Occe
08-19-2002, 12:43 PM
I like it, cool expression

Sergey B
08-19-2002, 01:06 PM
:) Very well) I like Idea and color the decision))

bigbad
08-19-2002, 11:00 PM
The eyes look like on john malkovic, the actor.

The ears seems to be too small.
Or maybe I have too big ears.

It looks very nice. But keep working. :wip:

Jhonus
08-20-2002, 06:56 AM
i like this picture. very intense.

my crits:
looks a little cross-eyed
as hellrender said, the nostrils are not defined very well.
don't like lip texture very much...

having said that, you can get away with all those things without changing them. not sure why... picture just has a non-reality feeling to it.

wonder
08-20-2002, 08:03 PM
Secend version............
http://218.76.39.7/bbs/attachments/200208/21022521-break.jpg


My web site (http://www.wonder3d.com)

sherban
08-21-2002, 12:59 AM
this guy is scary. Really well done.
I think your first non-symmetrical version was a lot better. I love that crosseyed look he has. makes him look so dangerous.

The second version looks really cg - the sharp eyebrows and nose. Also the blue eyes don't fit him as much IMO

liked your avatar too :thumbsup:

Jhonus
08-21-2002, 02:16 AM
also, colour-wise, the first one looks real good. Its got a strange deepred and yellow highlight thing going on which is lost in the second image.

did you do that in post? it'd be nice to hear your technique.

dvornik
08-21-2002, 02:21 AM
Oh, man. The second picture really highlights the modelling problems. The first one is great except for the lip texture. Any tips on the max texturing/rendering for the first post?

flamedevil
08-21-2002, 02:25 AM
Great work !
I prefer the first one, the atmosphere was excellent and the face looked more realistic.
The render is very interesting...like krugar i really would know how did you do this effect.

:thumbsup:

tigrvision
08-21-2002, 01:36 PM
yeah, first one is a lot better. maybe just use the lip texture of the second image.
nice work.

wonder
08-21-2002, 04:35 PM
Thanx!!
I will improve it with your advice!
I use high contrasty map for the head,and all the other effect done in the photoshop.
I will show a new version latter.... :)

Phrank
08-21-2002, 10:45 PM
Nice work, i agree with the others about the fact, that first one is much better than the second.
there is one thing not mentioned yet which looks a bit confusing to me: only in the first pic there is some.. well.. rectangular shadowlike area under his chin which doesnt look very nice.. it also looks like it overlaps the chin a bit - may be a result of the postprocessing.

Keep it Up! :thumbsup:

wonder
08-22-2002, 09:46 AM
Version3..... :P
just a try.
which is better?

flamedevil
08-22-2002, 09:55 AM
Between the second and the third, i prefer the second.
But between the first and the third, i prefer the first.

I dont really have critics.
I think you should keep the first and the third such as they are.

:airguitar

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