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BloodTaster
10-21-2004, 03:26 AM
Vinícius de Sá Menezes has entered the Grand Space Opera 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/grandspaceopera/view_entries.php?challenger=4439)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: studies again
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1101838079_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1101838079_large.jpg)

Here some new sketchs... My favorite is the one with face of the girl...maybe i will go on that...

Thank's again, the feedback is awesome here, I'm doubt about this contest, so your help is great!

Smash.rs
10-21-2004, 03:46 AM
Good luck dude!

:thumbsup:

sketchfiend
10-21-2004, 04:49 AM
Welcome back mate, i loved your piece in the "Machine Flesh Challenge" i look forward to see what you come up with. Goodluck.:thumbsup:

NinjaA55N
10-21-2004, 10:10 AM
Hi there! Good luck in this challenge to another great artist! :)

flyingP
10-21-2004, 12:52 PM
:cool: and another to put on the subscription list

cheers

Brian

BloodTaster
10-22-2004, 03:19 AM
hey guys! nice to see all of you. This challenge will be really awesome!!! Just have SYD MEAD as judge, for me, is the great prize !! (hehehe..,my favorite movie is blade runner)

good luck for you!!!:scream:

Tommy Lee
11-05-2004, 10:39 PM
Welcome to the challenge dude!:thumbsup:

Can't wait what you come up with.
Cheerz and good luck

Tom

BloodTaster
11-09-2004, 11:41 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1100004080_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1100004080_large.jpg)

Well...finally I post sometinhg. :)
The pic will show one pilot defeated by your enemies, he or she crash the spaceship on the "alien swamp". On the sky, the pilot watch your spaceships fall....that's all for now!

Hillartsympho
11-09-2004, 12:00 PM
your first sketch is very exciting. It has alot of vitality; it feels "alive" when i look at it. I hope you can keep this aspect through your progress. I'd say that next you could work more on the ships in the sky and figure out a unique landscape. good job and good luck!

Fahrija
11-09-2004, 12:29 PM
Hey BloodTaster,

nice sketch > I like the thickness of your strokes. The foreground part is really cool. The background is not that convincing but it´s the initial sketch :)

I will watch your further development with interest.

Greetings
Fahrija

NinjaA55N
11-09-2004, 01:00 PM
Very nice start! I really like the idea of the swamp, so we wont look just some sky space and desert planet scenes. I dig it!

jeroentje
11-09-2004, 04:47 PM
Nice start, nothing to crit at the moment.
I'm curious for your updates :)

Amida
11-09-2004, 08:27 PM
nice initial sketch, waiting for update...

Tommy Lee
11-10-2004, 09:15 AM
Nice start, nice idea but maybe you change the landscape.
first: Sombody does also a swamp in the 2D Challenge(What is not a problem)
second: Your image looks right now like a "Luke standing ontop of his crashed X-wing and looking over the swamp"-kind of thing.
Didn't want to crit so hard but that was the first thing I thought and that gave me the impulse to reply that way.
Anyway love the concept. If you wanna keep the swamp, make it very unique.

Cheerz Buddy:thumbsup:

BloodTaster
11-10-2004, 12:55 PM
thx everyone for the replys!!
Tommy: Your opinion make sense man! well, I'll think in everything you sad.
But..here some ideas i have for this pic:
first: the design of the ships will be very diferent of stars wars, maybe they will look like big "space motorcycles" The idea is " gang wars" hahahah... with a cyberpunk design.
two: the main character will be a girl...
three: it's more like a alien swamp than a earth swamp....i will try make very unique,( with different creatures and plants)
thx tommy, your critics is always welcome!

Tommy Lee
11-10-2004, 11:27 PM
:thumbsup: aproved...lol

SideAche
11-11-2004, 05:26 AM
Looking forward to seeing your Image emerge again in this challenge.

Azagthoth
11-11-2004, 01:09 PM
Hey! finally I found!

continue the work! the idea this original!
different from the sketches posted in other threads!
good luck!

with the fellow citizen greetings! :thumbsup:

BloodTaster
11-11-2004, 05:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1100196285_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1100196285_large.jpg)

more studies of composition, i start to think more cleary about the character design e and "swamp design"...

NinjaA55N
11-12-2004, 04:15 PM
just an idea... what if u rotate the camera view, that the girl will facing the viewer, so it will be more personal, more dramatic, emotional... she could looking to the sky and her gang and the enemy gang is flying over her, from the back to the front... if i make any sence :) Just a suggestion for more dramatic feeling in my opinion. The swamp stays in the background, its a great idea of an environmnent.

Gord-MacDonald
11-12-2004, 10:39 PM
I like the first sketch alot. It has got a great dynamic feel. Lots of potential. The debris of the crashing ship in the second image seems a little sparse. Perhaps add some more debris to reinforce that great sense of movement on the right hand side of the image. Good luck!



Gord MacDonald

Tommy Lee
11-13-2004, 09:01 AM
... now I can see what you going for. Keep it coming.... no crits for now.

And I think the composition is good. I also like that the heroin is facing away looking in the distand sky. Gives the whole image the feeling of getting lost, being helpless. The only choice you have is to seat back and look at what you can't change no more.

Cheerz:beer:

BloodTaster
11-15-2004, 02:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1100489744_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1100489744_large.jpg)

Hey guys! YOur replys are really great!
thanks, all of you!
Here is another composition study. I put the great "snake ship"...it's like a headquarter for the bikers. Well.. they are going to the burning city at background.

OKMER
11-15-2004, 02:44 AM
Excellent sketches!!!The last one is great(and the first)
Maybe if you put the crashed part of the ship and the girl a little more to the left you'll got some space left to do the reflections of the burning city into the water.
And maybe it could also give a little more dynamics if the skyline would be a liitle less flat and more bolded(or rounded?)
sorry,broken english is in the place:D
I'll sure be watching!!!

My Grint Spacepra
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=184953

teknotek83
11-15-2004, 03:00 AM
awesome composition! it's very dynamic and animated! i wish i oculd identify everything in the scene, but i guess i'll just have to wait :p

BloodTaster
11-18-2004, 05:17 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1100801848_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1100801848_large.jpg)

this is a color study...the main idea is a swamp bioluminescence...

Squibbit
11-18-2004, 05:23 PM
looks good , as usual :thumbsup:

Tommy Lee
11-18-2004, 05:30 PM
Very good color choice. Strongens the composition and brings the main figure even more to my attention. Good flow...

Cheerz:thumbsup:

monsitj
11-18-2004, 06:02 PM
i llike your compositon ! i 'm a noob in coloring , but in my opionion I think your color is too satureate , maybe u can desaturate it a little bit ! any way after check your machineflesh entry ....... nothing to crits!!

MrD
11-18-2004, 06:39 PM
I´d find it even more interesting if the sky wasn´t using the same greens as well. Maybe add some blueish tones to it or more towards orange.

just my two cents

V_Shane
11-19-2004, 03:55 AM
I like this, a little too angled for me, maybe kick it back to the left about 15 degerees?

Blackarts
11-23-2004, 04:35 PM
It's looking good BT. Not much to comment on since this is stil pretty early on, but I would say I think the ship, or escape pod, or whatever that is in the water should be tilted more. That would make it look like it's sinking a bit rather than just hovering on top of the water. It would also make the pose of the girl more interesting.

OKMER
11-23-2004, 05:10 PM
Great colorscheme!!!More,more :bounce:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=184953

BlueEyeLizard
11-23-2004, 05:41 PM
It would be nice to see her hair blowing in the same direction that the ships are going. It would look like the air is comming from tha passing planes. I like the new changes.

Tranchefeux
11-24-2004, 11:58 AM
Hi, All my encouragements for your GSO, original the with dimensions
tilted one of your visual to follow
Good road

BloodTaster
11-24-2004, 05:45 PM
Wow:eek: what a feedback!
Tranchefeux, BlueEyeLizard, OKMER, Blackarts, V_Shane,MrD, Tommy Lee, Squibbit...thank you guys! Your replys are really helpful, and gimme stregth to go on! thx!:bounce:

About the pic, I'm not happy...it's time to try another things...before is to late..

BloodTaster
11-24-2004, 05:48 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1101322116_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1101322116_large.jpg)

Compositions studies...well. Some feedback its gonna be great in that stage!;)

coCoKNIght
11-24-2004, 05:51 PM
The pivotal moment thingy's missing, but your style's great and I'd like to see every one of these finished :D

giza-di
11-24-2004, 06:45 PM
hello

i believe your very first concept has the most potential for a dramatic image, but unless you find a believable 'reason' behind this pan-galactic gang war, you will be missing the pivotal thingy:)

keep to this concept plz,it;s risky but it;s very original

BloodTaster
11-24-2004, 07:54 PM
hey guys!

giza-di and coCoKNIght: I know about the pivot thing... my idea is show (in the back of this compositions) the destruction of base (or ship) that represents battle's end. One of the gang is defeated...(girl's gang)...what you think?
sorry for poor english

thx a lot guys!

coCoKNIght
11-24-2004, 07:57 PM
Okey, that sounds cool, but anyway, I'm impatient to see more! :scream:

Amida
11-24-2004, 07:59 PM
Yo, I like compostions 1 and 3 really much. I think I might even like 1 better. ANd do the destruction thingy in the bg :P Really, cool concepts. GJ m8, and keep it comming. You still have a lot of time, but get going, we want MORE, MORE i tell ya.

Walrusmann
11-24-2004, 07:59 PM
i like your style dude the after the battle concept is classic and very cool. good job on the sketches too youre doin great. the only thing id suggest is alittle more red in the green in the reflectins and sky keep it up ill be watchin

Tommy Lee
11-24-2004, 11:34 PM
hello

i believe your very first concept has the most potential for a dramatic image, but unless you find a believable 'reason' behind this pan-galactic gang war, you will be missing the pivotal thingy:)

keep to this concept plz,it;s risky but it;s very original
Have to second that!:wip: :wip: :wip:

monsitj
11-25-2004, 12:13 AM
from your comp study , no, 1,4,5 is my favourite , if you continue with the very fist sketch , I think no 5 is great, just my 2 cents............

oldhobo
11-25-2004, 01:31 AM
Real nice set of sketches - I think I favor 3 and 5. I like the depth of space you get and the swirl of action.

W-I-L
11-25-2004, 04:09 AM
It is so hard to keep up with everyone. this is great stuff. i am really partiasl to gang warfare type stuff. very cool. I prefer comp 3. Lots of depth. did not like the extreme angle before. keep it going. . .

BloodTaster
11-25-2004, 11:19 AM
Dudes, great feedback!
Thanks!! I really aprecciate! My favorite is number 3 and 5....but i wanna think in some compositions....well .lets work

thx guys!:thumbsup:

tlggungor
11-25-2004, 11:27 AM
hi great sketches

I like number 3 :thumbsup:

coCoKNIght
11-25-2004, 11:35 AM
3 or the one you colored, 5 is great but in that sketch she looks like she's just gonna find another fighter and continue to fight.... remember that pivotal thingy? :) Battle is lost, the only thing she can do now is enjoy the show and look to the exploding base.

Fahrija
11-28-2004, 05:19 PM
Hi BloodTaster,

great line-drawing thumbnails. Really A pleasure to watch.

I also prefer no.4 and especially no.2 > a fight after a fight. From one action to another.

Greetings
Fahrija

BloodTaster
11-30-2004, 05:08 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1101838079_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/4439/4439_1101838079_large.jpg)

Here some new sketchs... My favorite is the one with face of the girl...maybe i will go on that...

Thank's again, the feedback is awesome here, I'm doubt about this contest, so your help is great!

Falcorr
11-30-2004, 08:28 PM
All your studies makes me think of more like a storyboard. They are so varied in particular way.

I almost could have sworn youd pick the green crash landing to be the one. Just dont wait for the last week so we get to see finished piece. Month might go fast and youd never notice.

Stay sharp as usual :)

W-I-L
12-06-2004, 06:36 AM
the girls face? Is there reflection in her vizor of the rest of the scene . . . that could be quite cool.

Amida
01-12-2005, 07:30 PM
Uuuh Bloodtaster, have u given up on this or what? I think so because u have to a LOT of work if u still want to finish this..

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