Good Bad Ugly Beautiful-flash animation-please comment

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It was pretty good. I liked how you made it seem like old film. My only crit is that it isn't as clear as it could be that "The Good" shot "The Ugly" as well as "The Bad" during the gun duel.
You see the rifle fly in the air and suspect that's what happened, but aren't sure until the end; when you see him lying there dead.
You need to show "The Good" shooting in two directions and show the guy on the cliff getting shot like you do "The Bad."
Maybe you need a shot of "The Good" noticing the guy on the cliff out of the corner of his eye just before the duel; then he rolls out of the bullets path and fires in two directions at once. Keep pluggin.' :buttrock:

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