Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Jesus Antonio Conde Galarraga

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098377615_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098377615_large.jpg)

im not going to explain anything yet becuse i dont have the whole idea yet.

btw i dont talk to much english jeje.

[Genesisa]

i think thats not good jeje, i will do some kind of world war event, and make a new version of it
like pearl harbor or something

yeah definelty im gonna do something like that.:bounce:

[Miss Hippo]

Hey, Looks good i think u should continue with this story....it would be nice to see it in color....love the skecht though. One critique...i would be nice to make the man on the lower right bigger. It seems like he is kinda important to the story...so in my opinion u should make him larger or bigger to the scale of the picture...right now he kinda disappears at the bottom. Love the moon exploding though! Good luck!

[Larsen]

Interesting sketch, i like the standing man and that exploding sphere...
i think more of round shape in your city could increase the potential and make it more futuristic, actually it's only box building...but it's a first sketch, looking forward...

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098387056_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098387056_large.jpg)

this is kinda second pearl harbor.

[Larsen]

that one change from the 1st sketch :eek: , i really prefer the 1st sketch... + the remake of pearl harbor may be a purpose out of the rules and could be judged as not really original, i'm sure you can do something great with your first concept, keep it up man !

[Grimreaper1981]

as cipher said, the first sketch is better, brings in a very mystic touch, lonely man in front of the big city containing lot of mysteries and maybe the destination of his journey (just a thought) keep goin':D

[Bael]

I think the first concept is stronger, composition wise - but will agree that the man should be a bit larger. Its a very nice city-scape design, and is very 'grand'.

I like the idea behind the second concept - but the bottom part of the composition seems a little too centered and leaves alot of blank space on the bottom left/right. You probably shouldn't parallel the ships with actual countries either (I can't help but notice the zero-like circles on the wings of the fighters, for example). My only reasoning behind such a change is that it seems more like a future depiction of our world than a 'space opera'.

Its a good start, you've got two very strong ideas going. :)

[BookMansBlues]

Definatly like the shattard moon, looks great.

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098398492_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098398492_large.jpg)

Ok this is a image that shows how is gonna start a concflict between to nations, the tecnology its so much avanced that the have devices that can track the nuclear bombs and stuff so the only can attack like the old times, using space aricrafts, or however they called jeje i dont know to much english. so good luck for everyone.

[Genesisa]

hi guys i wanna said thanks becuse you are helping me a lot.
but jeje i dont know im kinda confuse right now whit those desings.
i will see your work a little bit and see if i can do the same for you, thanks a lot guys.

[Ducklips]

I think the first one was great but very common to see person standing in front of buildings, I have already seen a few like that.

You might want to add some more stars in the background.

I have not seen anything like yours yet, which is why I like it so much. Keep up the good work.
:)
Take care.

-Dean

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098407120_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098407120_large.jpg)

this are gonna be kinda the planes of the scene.

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098453459_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098453459_large.jpg)

this are gonna be the space ships on the docks.

[SibSpi]

I like both ideas - the ship looks like it could ram the hell outta anything btw ;)

The first one really seems to grab the idea of 'grand' while the second one has the feeling of 'grand climax' of sorts. In other words the one seems to almost be the excellent recovery after something was lost, while the others seems to be about to lose something of great value just after it was completed.

Kinda like humans having just made the earth into effectively heaven, then having a giant comet bash it to bits :P

[SuperXCM]

Really like the sketch!!:bounce:
But i prefer the first concept, i like the composition, and the city seems to be very very cool.
The second concept is cool, but you must work more your composition... i think
Nevertheless (it's just??), i think you can make a cool final image!! Keep going! :buttrock:

PS: Sorry for my bad english :blush:

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098459488_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098459488_large.jpg)

another quiclky concept.
i think this is gonna be the idea in general

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098470468_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098470468_large.jpg)

i dont have so much free time but this is how im going to start the modeling.

well guys see you later and good luck

[Lotus7]

hey antonio. really liked your last concept. keep it up!

[BookMansBlues]

The Concept is great, looking awsome.

[Borro]

Your idea is pretty good :). Keep it up. I would advise you to make the weapon FX the most eye-catching thing in this image. Since this is a picture depicting war the main theme should be the weaponary.

P.S. One more advise... I can see in your concept only a few flying ships, maybe you should add more in the 3D scene... and also make some bullets(lasers) crossing the line of view. That should add a nice effect to the image you're doing ;). Good luck!

[superlayer]

I like your sketches.
Will the first sketch still be a part of your later designs?

[Genesisa]

no is not going to be part of the composition, maybe i will do it in 2D category
its good idea i think.

i like all of your work guys.
and you hey jeje that EVA is going awesome.

[superlayer]

You mean me?? who me huh?
Lol, I am making an eva so I guess its me right?

Thanks if thats the case.

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098615581_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1098615581_large.jpg)

this is how is going the model of the gigant ships.

it still lots of errors so i have lot of work to do, but i dont have to much time, becuse i have lot of lot of homeworks in the university.

have fun buddys.

[Gunilla]

I really like the cityshape in your first sketch - hope you will still do it for the 2d Challenge.Composition and shape of the buildings are great - keep it up!


My Space Opera (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=180529)

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1099317292_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1099317292_large.jpg)

this is the final model of the gigant ship, i still got lot of work to do jajaja, im so busy this month but i promees i will take time for you guys this december, best luck for everybody, you guys are rocking this challenge.

[neble]

I like your concept sketch, portrays a lot of action. Looking forward to seeing how your going to make it look not too earthy.

[GaNNEl]

Hey! Hello! o Hola! Estamos cerca! Primera persona que encuentro que vive más cerca! Hey vas muy bien! Me gusta la idea y el modelaje esta bueno! :D Tal vez deberías darme algunas clases porque lo mio apesta jeje :) Me gustaria saber como haces ese modelaje y esas luces para que la sombra se vea asi de verdad que quedo muy bien! Y el barco quedó muy "bacano" como decimos aca en Colombia! Bueno volvere por aqui muy seguido y buena suerte! :thumbsup:
PD: Que software usas? Max, Lightwave?

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1099428761_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1099428761_large.jpg)

this is how is going the city, im hurry ,bye everybody see you later.

have fun

[GaNNEl]

Hey Antonio si tengo msn! es: arango_alejandro@hotmail.com , hey me gustó mucho la ciudad... son las cosas que debo aprender! Como logro esos edificios? Clonar y cambiar formas? Jaja y como siempre la iluminación es espectacular... no se como la logras! Va muy bien! Yo creo que no voy a acabar jamás! jejejeje :D
BTW: Vi la entrada del anterior concurso y ese modelo del ada con esa cosa extraña atras estaba muy bueno... pero me pareció que el ambiente necesitaba mas cosillas, plantas etc...

[element5]

Coming along nicely...no crits here :)

[SuperXCM]

Coming along nicely...no crits here :)
Agree... keep posting man!! :beer:

[Genesisa]

i think that city is too much simple, and i will do another later
im very busy this month but i will be working in the image for the 2D category

thanks very much all of you guys, see you later.

[oneir0s]

Podias plantearte otra capa mas de edificios en la zona periferica de la ciudad mucho mas bajos como textura incluso sin modelarlos, y hacerlos coger luz con un pequeño displacement y tendrias un area digamos "residencial"....

Es una idea.

Un saludo.

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1100438909_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1100438909_large.jpg)

this is kind of building that opens when theres a emergency and then come a lot of aircrafts, ships from the inside

im very hurry bye guys
have fun everybody

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1100456842_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1100456842_large.jpg)

i think this is how is going to look the city, sorry about dont write to you guys but im danm busy, i just have few minutes free.
i promeess i will take a look all your drawings this december. bye
see you later.
have fun and good luck for everybody

[Grimreaper1981]

love your sketches, i'll stay tuned :thumbsup:

[AirbORn]

INteresting concepts, great progress too!

Just one suggestion, I find that the under part of the city is too similar to the above part of the city, to me at least the underground (concept of underground) is piping and non inhabitable structures. Unless you plan on having the city excite both above and underground, which would also be cool but I'd like to see some contrast between the two :)

Hope that helps in anyway :) Great work!

[Vittorius]

Love the Sketch, I'll be visiting more often:scream:








My CG Challenge XVI - Grand Space Opera - 3D Thread (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=185732)

[Hector M. Mercado]

Great sketches man :thumbsup:

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1101466652_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1101466652_large.jpg)

this is a concept for la nave, i dont know how to say it in english jje.
seee you later guys good luck and have fun

[Virtuoso]

Nice scope,and scale,a grand scene indeed......I like your plan,and your overall Grand scale.......The designs are very clean and look very nice jesus........Keep this going as you are,I think this will be a very nice entry,and one for you to be proud of........Work hard,it's paying off already.............:arteest:

[patina]

Nice style and design, although I would include some characters for the city,

to give a feeling of the Inhabitants that live there..

check my thread

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=188090



Paolo. P. Patina!

[SUN]

:thumbsup: Great city I like it a lot your style:thumbsup:
nice space pearl harbor project:)

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1101672050_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1101672050_large.jpg)

asi es como va la nave atacante.
the invasors

[[wr]JeFf]

Nice concept sketches ! Nice begin of modelisation ! Good luck and courage

[arturro]

Your sketches are great! I like the concept:thumbsup: I can't wait to see your textures, because I your ship looks too squary to me, but I think that the texture will breake thos feeling.
Good luck:buttrock:

[SuperXCM]

Excellent work here!! :eek: like the style of the sketch and modeling!!

Cool!!:thumbsup:

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1101758540_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1101758540_large.jpg)

this is a update of the nave

have fun guys i gotta run

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1101842263_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1101842263_large.jpg)

this are going to be those towers that opens when theres a emergency, how is in the concept,you gonna see a lot of ships coming from the inside.

have fun guys

[Genesisa]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1102106012_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4169/4169_1102106012_large.jpg)

this is how is going the model of the city.

[overcontrast]

hey very cool concepts and nice start on the modleing... i like ur clean looking models... i'll b droping by l8r for more updates...till then keep rocking... :thumbsup: good luck

[otacon]

I like your concept, and you have great designs! Modeling is looking good. Cant wait to see some stuff come together.:thumbsup:

[shotta]

:thumbsup: i like very much ur models,good work.

[GaNNEl]

Hola hace ratoq ue no venia por aca, estaba en el colegio y porfin me gradué :buttrock:! Ahora voy para la universidad :banghead:! Pero ahora tengo tiempo para visitar mas amenudo! Me gustan esos modelos! Sigue asi! :thumbsup:

[SnakeFarlow]

Hey I like your modeling, the citie looks great, It reminds me to Tokio2 from the saga of evangelion, maybe you could check some websites of this anime.

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