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BernardoDelgado
10-19-2004, 03:10 AM
Carlos Bernardo Delgado Virgen has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/grandspaceopera/view_entries.php?challenger=4025)

Latest Update: Final Image: The Ending
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105849407_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105849407_large.jpg)

Hi well finally I added some human models and some little fire there, after thinking if I should add more elements like ships or etc I decided to keep it like this I think it express wut I want to and the picture is diferent from all entries to keep originality, I also added some light rays. I hope u like it and hope to have good luck :)

good luck to u too buddies

DimitrisLiatsos
10-19-2004, 06:30 AM
Hey..i am glad to see again in this one friend...i liked the one in machineflesh, i sure think u will make eye candy stuff once more :)


have fun

BernardoDelgado
10-19-2004, 02:35 PM
haha, thanks man! :) lets see wut we can do here. I thing everyone will do great stuff thats for sure. This challenge will be extreme thats wut I like about it. So lets figure out wut to do , c'ya greetings from mexico

3doid
10-19-2004, 02:45 PM
good luck mate.... nice to c ya here

BernardoDelgado
10-19-2004, 03:45 PM
thanks pal, lets rock this challenge ! :buttrock:

BernardoDelgado
10-20-2004, 09:20 PM
well, now I have an idea. I call it the Earth Museum. In a far far away future the human race wont live in the earth, because of awesome meteors and the age of the sun. So all cities will remain as ghost cities, covered by sand because of meteors, beaches, palm trees between ruins of big cities like new york, the moon half destroyed with a ring like saturn, and of course a lot of tourist in ships visiting the earth, taking a tour over the biggest museum oh human history.

Hope u like the idea, I'll post the sketch later today :)

DimitrisLiatsos
10-20-2004, 09:32 PM
I like it ...it's different from all i 've heard up to now...the difficult
(which i think u can do it ) is that u have to make a lot of half-ruins....i like it ..it's most challenging :)


show us some thoughts Bernardo.

DigitalOmega
10-21-2004, 03:48 AM
hi, my evil clon!
i really want to see this, with that particular style of yours! i like the idea, all the destrucion and everything can be really cool! and very dramatic, is like seeing what happened after all the battles of everyone!

good luck!!

Kanga
10-21-2004, 11:26 AM
Hey Bernardo!

Good to see you competing again!
Best of luck.

Kanga

DJ-Prismatica
10-23-2004, 09:11 AM
The concept sounds very interesting. Is it going to be people looking through objects through velvet type ropes in space suits or like tourists in hawaiian shirts with cameras lol. Sounds good either way, good luck too you!

Borro
10-23-2004, 09:46 AM
Good luck! I was carefully wathing your work the last time, I'll be doing so again ;) Good luck!!!

BernardoDelgado
10-23-2004, 04:37 PM
thanks pals I'll do my best :) , I'll try to post the concept later, sorry for the delay but the damn school doesnt give me time, its nice to see everyone here again, lets rock the space:buttrock: haha

BernardoDelgado
10-26-2004, 03:57 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1098806230_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1098806230_large.jpg)

well here's the first concept, not really clear but I am figuring out the idea, Im thinking in another perspective also. but wut do u think about this one :S

adr
10-26-2004, 04:15 PM
Me gusta el sketch Bernardo , quizas debamos esperar un poco mas a la otra perspectiva que muestres y asi compararlas.

No lo tengo muy claro aun , pero vas a agregar mas naves a tu escena ?

Saludos

Borro
10-26-2004, 07:51 PM
I see you've done your first scetch! It's looking pretty well! Keep it up!

BernardoDelgado
11-03-2004, 05:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1099505664_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1099505664_large.jpg)

here's a wip of the final perspective I decided to use, I just will add some stuff but this is the base, hope u like it :D. The topic is the same, the planetary human history museum when all the humans no longer live in the earth because now earth is a museum. After all the disasters bla bla.

there are civilizations in craters also in the destroyed moon and I'll add more ships I guess, also the weird white stuff down there is a train that moves up the water like a snake :D

DimitrisLiatsos
11-04-2004, 11:00 AM
I like the idea of putting the water element in such scale in your concept, i think it will give u great potential for extreme shading and pleasing look...Can't wait to see how the water train will look :bounce:


Good start Bernardo..:arteest:

LucianoBerutti
11-04-2004, 11:10 AM
hey! great idea and good sketch! , maybe you can mixed the camera on the first one with last one.Only a suggestion!:thumbsup: good luck!

Virtuoso
11-04-2004, 11:13 AM
Bernardo......................nice concept,and the idea is a interesting one.I like the plan and your current idea has a touch of a whimsical look and feel,always a nice extra................:arteest:

BernardoDelgado
11-04-2004, 02:15 PM
hi, thanx for your comments :)

Dimitris: thanks pal, I love sea water haha but I think it will be a real challenge to have a nice result in 3d, thats why I wanted it to be large scale so I'll have to learn more hahaha.

Luciano: well I think it would be nice but I guess the more adecuated angle is this one because I would be able to put more detail that in a more elevated point of view like the 1st one.

virtuoso: thanks pal ,I hope to get a nice 3d result for everyone here :thumbsup:

BernardoDelgado
11-04-2004, 02:18 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1099581512_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1099581512_large.jpg)

well, here's the final concept I hope haha, I added some few futuristic details and more lighting/shadows. also I used painter 9 to have a better look

DimitrisLiatsos
11-04-2004, 02:25 PM
Go for it..and u can always add more stuff in the way ...have fun:bounce:

DigitalOmega
11-04-2004, 03:01 PM
hey, clon! well, as i told you, this is very nice (it should be in the 2d section hehe) i hope that you have a fun time modelling all this, and in the final rendering i think you must play more with the lighting, you know, to have more contrast, i feel that this will be some sort of "relaxing" enviroment, hope you can capture that feeling, well, good luck, and i really want to see some polygons soon!

good luck!!

uwil
11-09-2004, 07:55 PM
the concept is very refreshing, but i'm more interested on the 3d side of it. good luck amigo:thumbsup:

BernardoDelgado
11-10-2004, 12:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1100048756_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1100048756_large.jpg)

well since I dont have a sea simulator or something like that, I had to create the shader for the sea water, the geometry I'll model it in zbrush. The shader is made with the glass shader of final shaders (final render), adjusting some smooth bump and absorbtion

uwil
11-26-2004, 07:22 PM
interesting test Bernardo...now you can integrate it to the scene. waiting for your update.:thumbsup:

BernardoDelgado
11-27-2004, 01:56 AM
thanks uwil , sorry for no posting so often but school is killing me, fortunately I'll finish the course in a few weeks so I'll be able to work in this full time

BernardoDelgado
12-30-2004, 06:20 AM
http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104391253_medium.jpg (http://cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104391253_large.jpg)

Hi, maybe Im a bit late but finally I have "free" time , I'll try to hurry to unless finish before the date I'll do my best. Here's the future moon I Hope u like it. Its made with 3dsMax 7, final render, Zbrush, Corel painter and the textures are from the Celestia Motherholde

BernardoDelgado
12-30-2004, 10:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104449382_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104449382_large.jpg)

I've just finished the terrain, its kinda complex and slow to render because it has a dirt shader. Anyway I'll have to bake it.

BernardoDelgado
12-30-2004, 10:34 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104449638_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104449638_large.jpg)

oke now i put the sea, I'll detail the model of the sea but this is just a box, I also put some basic boxes in the places of some buildings to test the lighting. Greetings

DimitrisLiatsos
12-30-2004, 11:10 PM
Sea shader works great i think friend.....i am happy to see u are around... :bounce: :thumbsup:

I hope for u and your family ..happy new year! :bounce:

BernardoDelgado
12-31-2004, 12:36 AM
Thanks Dimitris, Happy New Year for everyone !! partyy!! ahaha:bounce: :buttrock:

DimitrisLiatsos
12-31-2004, 12:51 AM
Partyyyyyy! :bounce: :argh: :beer: :drool: :beer: :argh: ..weeeeeee

BernardoDelgado
12-31-2004, 06:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104478144_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104478144_large.jpg)

Now I've baked the base texture of the terrain with tbaker from final render to only bake the texture chanel without shadows and GI, Now lets work on the hard stuff :)

Nomad
12-31-2004, 11:32 AM
Exellent terrain model and great sea shader :thumbsup:
I`m looking forward to see more :bounce:

BernardoDelgado
12-31-2004, 08:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104526913_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104526913_large.jpg)

Im modeling the buildings and the stones from the beach. its getting kinda hard tought haha but lets keep on working

thanks nomad :thumbsup:

uwil
01-01-2005, 02:42 AM
well, it's nice...your back Bernardo. very refreshing update. good luck!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

BernardoDelgado
01-01-2005, 04:06 PM
thanks uwil Im having a hard time with a lot of things I have to do but I'll do my best to make some competence here :thumbsup::buttrock:

BernardoDelgado
01-05-2005, 12:31 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104888687_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104888687_large.jpg)

here's another update, Im currently finishing the scenery models the problem will be, I guess, the plants haha , lets see wut I can do I hope u like it

BernardoDelgado
01-06-2005, 04:38 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104989894_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1104989894_large.jpg)

oke now this will be the "last" render of the scene, from now I shall start comosition stuff and modeling some characters to add in first plane

DigitalOmega
01-07-2005, 03:07 AM
Que onda clon!

ahi te van unas criticas, espero no me odies


vas bien en tu entrada, realmente no es algo que esperas demasiado ver en un concurso de un tema como este, creo que debes de encontrar la manera con los personajes de dar a entender que tiene algo que ver con el tema de "gran space opera", a la mejor me veo algo manchado, pero me gusta ser critico: a darle con mas edificios, para que se note mejor la onda de la destruccion, metele mas detalle a la parte del frente para que concuerde mejor con los edificios y creo que se ve un poco estirada la textura verde esa.. hmm el puente pasa por ahi, como que creo que tendria que tener los bordes redondeados, (es lo primero que notas, y no concuerda del todo con el resto) lo que se ve de poca es el shader del agua, lastima que lo tengas que sacrificar un poco para meter cosas al primer plano.. ahora, el cielo siempre ayuda dale un rato en PS para tener buenas nubes (si quieres te paso una pagina con imas de nubes chidas a 2500X2500) y si pones mas edificios puedes agregar algo de neblina para que tenga mas atmosfera... me intriga que seran tus personajes, espero poder verlos pronto =)..
no me lo tomes a mal, pero me gustan las criticas un poco duras, y bueno, spero que tengas unas buenas horas para llevar esta imagen mucho mas lejos, y continues sacando ese estilo que tienes para hacer tus renders

suerte y a seguirle dando!!!

Bernardo

BernardoDelgado
01-07-2005, 03:27 AM
ajaja no hay pecs clonaichon si estoy conciente de como va el asunto, lo de la tecstura verde em ps jja no es tecstura es un shader de vidrio y la geometria en verdad esta asi deforme jaja segun yo pa q se viera como aca chido como los escudos de half 2 (nada q ver ajaja) del agua ps hasta a mi me dolio pero tenia q meter algo en primer plano, en cuanto a la escena en general si se ve un poco vacia aun mas pienso meterle un buen de madres en composicion, mucha mas vegetacion y por supuesto alguna especie de neblina levezona pa q se vea la profundidá. el cielo pss si me la pense en poner mas nubes de hecho anduve haciendome wey un rato en el techo tomando fotos de nubes pero creo que me kedare con esa foto ya que en la parte azul que se ve ahi se vera de fondo la luna que hice pa esta escena claro. Y ps a ver como keda el asunto espero tener tiempo keda demasiado poco y muchas cosas que hacer. :thumbsup:

BernardoDelgado
01-10-2005, 12:40 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105321240_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105321240_large.jpg)

by now Im working in composition, adding elements like plants and details to the water, Fog , sand and some lighting effects.

DimitrisLiatsos
01-10-2005, 05:59 AM
Bernardo ..man! ...those wave endings with the white as they hit the beach rocks...Rocks! hahaha ....Very nice ..can't tell now if it's in 3d or compositing but it's awesome ! :):thumbsup:

BernardoDelgado
01-10-2005, 02:45 PM
haha thanks Dimitris they're all handpainted with my super tablet 4x3 ahahaha, I'll keep on working, I hope to end before the limit date. Thanks dude your entry is awesome:thumbsup:

neble
01-11-2005, 07:57 PM
I like the image itself, but I feel it needs something more to lend itself to the Space Opera theme. The water looks really sharp, and the lighting works well.

BernardoDelgado
01-14-2005, 01:34 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105670072_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105670072_large.jpg)

Here\'s the model of 1 alien, there will be 2 in the scene and one human. I have to hurry haha , its made in max7 and zbrush2

BernardoDelgado
01-14-2005, 01:39 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105670348_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105670348_large.jpg)

Here's the final look of the enviroment, I added some details with photoshop

DimitrisLiatsos
01-14-2005, 12:23 PM
Going Smooth as always....i wonder where exactly the aliens will be .....now hurry ..3 days....:bounce:

azazel
01-14-2005, 12:52 PM
Environment is very nice, not much to crit there.

BernardoDelgado
01-14-2005, 03:47 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105721230_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105721230_large.jpg)

Now I finished the aliens, as u see there's a banner that says homo sapiens. its because I decided to put another point of view, there will be a point where human beings will almost cause its own extintion, till being in extintion borders. Aliens come to earth and make a kind of Museum and Zoo to preserve the specie. Hope u like it

MDN67
01-14-2005, 04:44 PM
Hi, i like the concept of your project, that originaly, and the realization is very great good work, i wait the final image

Aethyrprime
01-14-2005, 09:57 PM
Very intersting concept. I like what you have done here. Keep it up. You are almost there.

Trenox
01-14-2005, 10:20 PM
I love the idea and the picture! very nice work man. The aliens look great, but theres seems to be some problems with the composite somehow. as if they dont blend completely yet.

keep it up!

BernardoDelgado
01-16-2005, 03:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105849407_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/4025/4025_1105849407_large.jpg)

Hi well finally I added some human models and some little fire there, after thinking if I should add more elements like ships or etc I decided to keep it like this I think it express wut I want to and the picture is diferent from all entries to keep originality, I also added some light rays. I hope u like it and hope to have good luck :)

good luck to u too buddies

taavi
01-16-2005, 07:22 AM
I like the idea alot:) alien zoo! :)
Alltough i would advice to make the fire more visible-but anyway the pic is excellent :)

markovicd
01-16-2005, 10:58 AM
well congratz!

BernardoDelgado
01-16-2005, 01:49 PM
thanks pals :thumbsup: lets hope to have good luck in this challenge :bounce:

gpepper
01-16-2005, 01:53 PM
Well done and fun ! congrats ! :applause:

uwil
01-16-2005, 04:52 PM
dramatic ending Bernardo, i like it a lot.:thumbsup: congratulation!:thumbsup:

MDN67
01-16-2005, 05:28 PM
I said again, i like really the concept of your pic, the realization is perfect, very great work, i like, good luck

arturro
01-16-2005, 05:32 PM
I don't want to end in a place like this... but the picture is awsome:) my congratulations!

BernardoDelgado
01-17-2005, 05:15 PM
Thanks pals!! challenge is finished lets play some half life 2 deatmatch now ahahaha :thumbsup::bounce::buttrock:

markovicd
01-17-2005, 05:18 PM
i stopped playing cs 1 year ago... :shrug:

BernardoDelgado
01-18-2005, 11:52 PM
:shrug:its fun to die anyway . ahaha......... virtually of course hahah :scream:

mmoir
01-19-2005, 12:06 AM
Hey Carlos,

I like the idea of your image and the image itself is very well done. Great job:thumbsup: and good luck.
Mike

DigitalOmega
01-19-2005, 04:01 PM
Well done clon! its a really good image, but it`s a really sad final for our loved specie, i hope you are not right with your "optimistic" vision of the future, anyways its a very original view of the theme for this challenge. the technical side of the image is awesome, the ambient the trees, and specially the water are the best points in the image, my only observation may be that, i dont really think that the language of the aliens is english, it could be better if you put some weird signs and under that the homo-sapiens thing.. yes i am being a "little" picky, but sience fiction is sience fiction , and you have to think everything. =)


well good luck, and congratulations for this great image!
da orgullo que seas mi clon!!

Bernardo

Gunilla
01-19-2005, 04:09 PM
Wonderful image and an even better concept! Really good work - congrats and good luck :thumbsup:

theuni
01-21-2005, 06:32 PM
Hi,
just wanted to let you know that I voted for your image :bowdown:
I really like the concept & every viewer can make its own story out of it without knowing the details of your thoughts.

BernardoDelgado
01-21-2005, 07:47 PM
thanks pal!, thats refreshing haha I hope to have good luck in this challenge :thumbsup: :)

ArtisticVisions
01-21-2005, 08:04 PM
Wish I could have found your entry sooner; love the concept, as well as the composition and dramatic angles used.
Congrats. :)

Skywatcher
01-23-2005, 07:04 PM
Nice concept. Love the atmosphere in the image :thumbsup:

good luck.


My GSO : http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=200503

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