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jubz
08-18-2002, 05:09 PM
This is the first render of my PlayStation. Give my your opinion about my rendering!

Thanks

JuBz.

K-design
08-18-2002, 05:18 PM
nice model but the lighting
need some work;)

Flypaper
08-18-2002, 05:31 PM
I agree, great model, but it's too smooth, even my playstation has some really fine irregularities about it, and the lighting needs some attention. -

Edit - And it looks as tho you've applied a raytrace material to the playstation itself, looks very odd.

CHRiTTeR
08-18-2002, 05:32 PM
Yup, work on the lighting.

jubz
08-18-2002, 06:55 PM
I have change my light intensity

wedge
08-18-2002, 07:02 PM
the lid is too round... it has rounded edges, but the top is flat

jubz
08-18-2002, 07:15 PM
!!!

kyphur
08-18-2002, 09:48 PM
add a bump to the floor texture for the cracks in it and lower the specularity on both, they're both too shiny. My playstation is a matte grey. Plus the lid's rim is a bit too rounded, flatten that out and that should make it a bit better.

Kyph

frozyn
08-19-2002, 02:42 AM
also, i very rarely find a playstation, or any game station turned on without a controller in place. if u plan on adding that, then the light is fine, but if not, you might want to turn the light off

kyphur
08-19-2002, 04:42 AM
...or even lack of a powercord for that matter :p

Kyph

james_martin
08-19-2002, 05:49 AM
The model itself is nicely executed except the above mentioned, but those arnt anything big. Just need a better scene, to put it in, if your gonna leave it on the floor, definatly lower the spec, but also try blurring the reflections, i know you can do this in lightwave, but i dont know what renderer your using. Add a bump of course, nothing big just sublte stuff makes it. Just add some of the cords going to it. and youi'll have yourself an impressive picture

Anton Andriesh
08-19-2002, 08:09 AM
just a playstation.. and what for? :rolleyes: :hmm: Nothing interesing, sorry...

jubz
08-19-2002, 11:36 AM
I have work on the light, I reduce the specular on the floor ane up a little bit the bump. On my play, the libs was not very smouth.

I use the Area Light for my render.

ironbearxl
08-20-2002, 05:25 AM
Wow that is beautiful, !!! but you might want to add a few light blue tones to the playstation color, atm it looks like it turned to stone. You really caputered the model so far, great job!! :thumbsup:
Is the interior modeled too?

Izu
08-23-2002, 02:18 PM
hmmmmm PS1 ...hmmm...lid is still too round in Y.......hehe :drool:

malfunkshun
08-25-2002, 04:31 PM
looks good, but this was very easy to model. why not try something more challenging, like ummm... i dunno, something that's not shaped like a box.

CHRiTTeR
08-25-2002, 04:44 PM
a teapot! ;) :)

dark_lotus
08-26-2002, 05:38 AM
looks great!

BluemoonX
08-26-2002, 07:21 AM
I think a stronger shadow might be nice.
Just a comment:)

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