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leon!
10-18-2004, 05:21 PM
piotrek marczak has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/grandspaceopera/view_entries.php?challenger=3900)

Latest Update: Modeling: peope wip
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1100802300_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1100802300_large.jpg)

Haven't done much since last update, I've modelled few heads and painted simple textures.
Foreground will consist of 4-5 people. No guns, no armor or other military stuff.

As you can see there is alot to do, especialy with neck and hand anatomy.But this can wait, now I want to start modelling what's in background: spaceships.

I am thinking also about giant flying platform in the centre of camera, something like cylindrical-shaped space parking lot.

leon!
10-19-2004, 04:58 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098205102_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098205102_large.jpg)

Hi all
here's rough sketch of my idea.

Great migration of mankind. Conquering new planet. Few soldiers in front of 'camera' and alot of cosmic stuff behind them: cargo ships, small war ships etc and a huge mother-ship. Maybe I will add blurred figures of aliens in front of those soldiers - an encounter with inhabitants of the planet.

Designer2
10-19-2004, 05:04 PM
nice sketch, i only recommend you make poses for the character to make it more dynamic, i think it will be great piece.

rock on mate

leon!
10-19-2004, 07:38 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098214681_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098214681_large.jpg)

Ive started modeling body today. Those spacemen will be 'men in tights' ;) Each character in scene will have diffrent body.

leon!
10-20-2004, 07:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098300601_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098300601_large.jpg)

Hello. Here's update of soldier, suit still needs alot of tweaking, then I will add details like belt etc.

vanderstrat
10-20-2004, 08:49 PM
Looking good! My only crits are that the abdomen is too long and the thighs too short, IMO. The hands also look a little funny (too small, maybe?).

Great work so far :thumbsup:.

Cheers,

b01c

leon!
10-21-2004, 11:30 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098358230_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098358230_large.jpg)

Thanks for comments. I've tweaked suit, changed proportions of body and remodelled hands. Suit still needs more tweaking and details like 'wrinkles', pockets...

cheers
leon

leon!
10-22-2004, 11:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098444201_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098444201_large.jpg)

I've added some stuff like bag, backpacks. I'm still not satisfied how his clothes look like, so there will be more changes. When I finish modelling this guy I'll post some concepts of spaceships.

Sky_one
10-22-2004, 11:48 AM
such a nice models already! keep up the good work!
I really like the compositon, humanoids in front, ships in the back... make those brave soldiers look like the men of steal, you know, heroes that have seen whole universe and now have come to this new home!!

taavi
10-22-2004, 12:48 PM
Really good modelling :eek:

leon!
10-25-2004, 11:51 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098705064_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1098705064_large.jpg)

Didn't have much free time lately.
Just a simple shader test.

cheers,
leon

chadtheartist
10-25-2004, 12:19 PM
I love the last render. I can see that this is going to look really nice once finished! There are a few things that stick out in the last render, one is the neck which looks twisted, and two is the reflection on the visor. Is that trees?

Nice work though! I'm sure the final result is gonna rock!

funkymunkey90
10-25-2004, 12:45 PM
simply wonderful....i like the colors and the added details around the joints in the suit...the visor looks mechanically sound but the neck does look a little odd like chadtheartist stated

keep it up i want to see more:bounce:

leon!
10-25-2004, 01:31 PM
Yes neck is twisted because of my 'ultrafast' rig ;) Chad: Yep, trees. There is a texture of forest as environment (for reflection) just to test glass shader. Scene lighted with 1 area and 2 spot lights.

Versiden
10-25-2004, 01:34 PM
very cool.. you work really fast.. models look great

what app are u using?

dominicqwek
10-25-2004, 01:51 PM
very nice piotrek. What did you use to render the last shot?

LucianoBerutti
10-25-2004, 01:59 PM
You are fast! really nice work!! very clean, itīs like a flash gordon style ! Good luck!

leon!
10-25-2004, 02:46 PM
thanks :) I'm using 3ds max and splutterfish Brazil to render.

RKurczewski
10-25-2004, 06:39 PM
Great modeling -two thumbs up.

I have some doubts about overal conception- it seems to be a bit like all these american heroic movie posters. It's nothing wrong (in fact it might be an advantage considering how iconic that type of composition became) but I'd say it's a pity to waste such a good models for a passe composition.

igorstshirts
10-25-2004, 07:09 PM
The pilot looks great. I too think that finding good composition in 3d space is easier than on paper. looking good.

JorgeV
10-25-2004, 07:51 PM
Your work really looks great! Good luck!
Jorge

Crusty_Butt
10-25-2004, 10:29 PM
The model looks great, I love the style. The pose with the ships behind them reminds me of an action figure commercial. I love it.

Good luck!

-Bret

Mr. Glass
10-25-2004, 11:35 PM
Cool character, the shaders and lighting add SO much to the image. Can't wait to see the rest.

Shawns
10-26-2004, 12:35 AM
Looks cool,and quickly done.:thumbsup:

leon!
11-18-2004, 05:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1100802300_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/7/3900/3900_1100802300_large.jpg)

Haven't done much since last update, I've modelled few heads and painted simple textures.
Foreground will consist of 4-5 people. No guns, no armor or other military stuff.

As you can see there is alot to do, especialy with neck and hand anatomy.But this can wait, now I want to start modelling what's in background: spaceships.

I am thinking also about giant flying platform in the centre of camera, something like cylindrical-shaped space parking lot.

Crusty_Butt
11-18-2004, 09:19 PM
Yeah, man, yeah! That looks sooooo epic. Great camera angle.

The three men look a little stiff, like they have boards going up their backs. The female looks natural. Maybe play with the shoulder to hip angles a little. Try to show where their weight is, maybe exxagerate it a bit.

The man putting his hand on the woman's shoulder is great and the woman's hands look good. The guy with the clenched fist looks like a little tough guy, he has some character. I don't know what the deal is with the guy next to him. I do think you did a good thing making him doing something different than the others, but maybe something even more different would be good. Folded arms, arms behind his back or maybe clasping one hand with the other in front.

Anyway, sorry to try and make you work on these guys when you are anxious to get to the space ship models. :)

bear in mind that I really love this, overall. My crits seem bigger than my praise, but actually they are not.

-Bret

leon!
11-18-2004, 09:49 PM
Its ok, Thanks for constructive crits ! I'm sure it will help me in creating better final image.

Andrey_SE
11-19-2004, 09:10 AM
Goooood! :thumbsup:

Those characters are really nice! Keep going!

AirbORn
11-19-2004, 06:39 PM
Very good quality. I like it a lot and please forgive me but this image is just asking for it.

BIll: "Johnny, I think this is where we will start a new life, a new city, and most of all, our annual BBQ, great job on the landing pilot."

Johnny: "Bill, you call that a landing? Felt more like a crash to me."

Bill: "you are mistaken it was a landing"

Feel free to add to this. I love the design! :)

Nomad
11-19-2004, 07:08 PM
Wow that looks great and so real :applause:
Can`t wait to see all the environment and vehicles aroud :bounce:


Powodzenia!!

leon!
11-19-2004, 11:07 PM
Thanks guys!

Airborn- Girl: "Shut up you two and call a taxi" ;)

OT: If you like the idea of colonizing other plantes I recommend you book by Orson S. Card "Lovelock". I've just finished reading it and it's in my top 10 fav sci-fi books.

otacon
11-20-2004, 06:07 PM
Cool characters. Cant wait to see some spaceships!:thumbsup:

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