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monsitj
10-18-2004, 11:39 AM
Monsit Jangariyawong has entered the Grand Space Opera 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/grandspaceopera/view_entries.php?challenger=3768)

Latest Update: Final Image: dark assasin
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105846834_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105846834_large.jpg)

that's it ! final image ,
about the "grand" theme , i want to capture the moment of epic battle , but battle has different scale , I want to capture the mood of "spy" and"battle" in the space battle ,so it's come out in my image , just want to explain my concept ,but it's hard ,coz my poor english! anyway , enjoy!!

monsitj
11-12-2004, 07:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100291118_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100291118_large.jpg)

here is the small thumbnail to find the right composition , story will follow

AirbORn
11-13-2004, 03:32 PM
I like the line work, it is loose but there is nice open space in the composition. :)

I hope to see more soon!

monsitj
11-14-2004, 10:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100432113_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100432113_large.jpg)

here is another concept of giant robot and east culture

YeeWu
11-14-2004, 03:10 PM
Those are some really killer looking thumbs!

I think the left concept of the last post, with the guy flying above the giant robot is the best. It allows the viewer to see more of the city and the sky.

Looks great!!!

V_Shane
11-14-2004, 03:52 PM
great action! when about for the line art?

monsitj
11-14-2004, 04:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100454066_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100454066_large.jpg)

hi !here is another approach, the story is....
In the distant future , human try to find the new place to live and more resources to feed themself ..
finally survey ship has arrived the edge of the universe and found that they don't be alone in the universe!

NOOB!
11-14-2004, 06:53 PM
jeez,i'm impressed!

AirbORn
11-15-2004, 01:41 AM
I like the composition on the bottom of your last post! :)

Puts the audience right into the action. Good angle too!

monsitj
11-16-2004, 04:26 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100625988_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100625988_large.jpg)

Hi ! i decided to change my concept to this , and here is the story
"it's the final battle of galacxy war in the distant future!the technology and war strategy is back to native . this the scene of the greatest space sniper code name "dark assasin" he is the key point of the war !he can kill the target from very far length with his deadly weapon!no one can stop him even huge battle ship or large fighting robot...maybe this conflict will end with his bullet!!!

Ganthu
11-16-2004, 04:40 PM
Whoa, awesome... more like "the dark one man doomsday device" than an assasin.
Really looking forward to see the color on this one, mainly to figure out what the hell
is he! I see the legs but can`t work out the hands.

walrus
11-16-2004, 05:02 PM
Wow, it's really nice to get to see your sketching nice and large instead of the thumbnails. That's looking really nice so far! I'd like to offer the small suggestion of moving the bottom-most spaceship to the left a bit so that its tail isn't cut off by the Assassin's gun, and maybe even pulling the wings in so that the bottom wing isn;t disappearing into his chest, but aside from that, it's looking really beautiful so far. I'm sure you'll do a great job coloring it too!

-mike

giocele
11-16-2004, 06:07 PM
:bounce: Fantastic! Great drawings!!
the guns, the ships, the character... wow!!! Very very nice.
I wanna to see something in color.

congratulations. Go ahead!

***********
my Grand space opera (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=178693&goto=newpost)

monsitj
11-17-2004, 02:22 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100704932_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100704932_large.jpg)

here is the final line art(i hope) still a noob in coloring :> need your comments

bolchover
11-17-2004, 02:42 PM
nice ideas and line work - are you keeping the same background to the figure as was shown in the corresponding thumbnail..?

BloodTaster
11-18-2004, 12:11 AM
Hey guy, great work!! The character design remind me a lot the anime series "Evangelion". Maybe you can try different thinks on the mecha.... i don't know...if he looks more machine and less humanoid?...its only a sugestion...not to crit.
your draw skills are great:thumbsup: :buttrock:

lenz79
11-18-2004, 08:21 AM
Nice concept :). A thought about the sniper, it's highly unpractical to carry more than one rifle. So i would leave the two rifles on his back out. Instead i would think about the aiming system on the rifle. I was thinking about having a backpack with an aiming computer in it. Maybye, he's connected to the aiming system somehow(controlling the aiming/shooting process with his brain) The sniperrifle should be a bit bigger too :thumbsup:

monsitj
11-18-2004, 05:48 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100803703_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100803703_large.jpg)

just paint to block out the charactor shape , and overall atmosphere , i'm new in coloring , so any advice will very appreciate@@

V_Shane
11-19-2004, 03:58 AM
very nice comp. needs something to make us sweat, a reason we wouldn't want to be in his position, more epic I guess I'm sayin.

walrus
11-19-2004, 04:28 PM
i'm new in coloring , so any advice will very appreciate
No worries, it's looking good so far, nice set of hues you've picked. Now just pump pump uf the value differences: With such a strong light source, the hilights (especially on metal) will be pretty intense too.

Have you decided to take out the ships in the background? I liked 'em, they added drama.

-mike

AirbORn
11-19-2004, 06:23 PM
I love it. Great detail in the design. I noticed that your composition will have ships in the background, interesting too, but one thing I want to point out here. I find that your character is taking up too much space and it leaves you will little room to work with for the background and you loose that sense of "grand" that is important to convay in your composition. I am very into your designs and style, keep it up :)

monsitj
11-19-2004, 11:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100911166_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100911166_large.jpg)

add a little more drop ship to give distant to the picture!

monsitj
11-20-2004, 12:01 AM
many many thanks to consturctive commments!
BloodTaster : thanks man! and yes eva is my favourite anime , but I think the body of design is different!
lenz79 : yeah! he carry too many guns , and about the aiming system , he recieve target data from GPRS system , he heheh sounds fun??
V_Shane : i decide to focus my concept to hero of space battle , to show how he 's important to the conflict ,many thank to your point !made me have to redesign my composition
walrus : thank you! i put the space ship to make more depth to my image ,
AirbORn : thank you! now i have to add more depth to my image!!

adel3d
11-20-2004, 07:34 PM
That is fascinating!
! Look forward to seeing more details!

Gord-MacDonald
11-20-2004, 07:52 PM
Good work from the 'get go'. Great line art. I think the last image you did is quite powerful. I find the spaceship/fighter behind the main characters head a little distracting.

monsitj
11-20-2004, 11:30 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100997027_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1100997027_large.jpg)

a littel update ,just add cloud and reposition the spaceship

NinjaA55N
11-21-2004, 12:59 PM
Great atmosphere and feel of dynamic! I'll follow this thread :)

SideAche
11-21-2004, 04:07 PM
Nice work :thumbsup: Have you thought about flipping this horizontal so the action goes from left to right. It may not work and I'm only thinking out loud. Anyway, great job thus far :thumbsup:

giocele
11-21-2004, 04:26 PM
The clouds look great.
I believe you're in right path.:thumbsup:

Very nice!

subculture
12-24-2004, 04:29 PM
*speechless

theuni
12-26-2004, 07:17 AM
Hi monsitj,

this looks just brilliant. I can`t believe that you are taking place in both in 2d & 3d... :wavey:

robinayles
12-28-2004, 02:27 PM
just one word....AWESOME! :thumbsup:

monsitj
01-12-2005, 08:57 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105523835_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105523835_large.jpg)

hi! here is the new action of my assasin , the old one is too static , so i just gave him face enemy!!
(i think i can finish 3d in time) so i continue with
2d

bolchover
01-12-2005, 10:02 AM
nice composition and feels very dynamic. good luck

monsitj
01-12-2005, 02:15 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105542929_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105542929_large.jpg)

Hi ,here is black-white for study about value , I\'m newbie in 2d , so i need all of your comments, thaks

monsitj
01-13-2005, 05:51 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105599099_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105599099_large.jpg)

coloring with value is hard! nee d to learn more!! advice will be welcome

monsitj
01-13-2005, 06:27 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105644465_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105644465_large.jpg)

here is the progress of mech coloring! comments are alway welcome

Kraull
01-14-2005, 03:39 AM
I haven't seen your new composition! Soooo dynamique! We really have the impression that this mech is coming! So about the compostion, nothing to say from my side. :)

monsitj
01-14-2005, 10:34 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105702462_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105702462_large.jpg)

small update, enjoy!

Fahrija
01-14-2005, 11:37 AM
Hi Monsit,

Hey man! You also can draw like hell! The robot-design reminds of Appleseed. Well done.

Fahrija

monsitj
01-14-2005, 12:10 PM
thanks fahlija, yes , i 've influenced by shirow mansamune , he 's very great! , it seem that this time is rush hour! so nobody pop in here ! anyway good luck to you all!

conundrum
01-14-2005, 12:47 PM
awesome stuff man, and very fast, i like the action of it. at this stage i dont really have anything to crit, its along coming along nicely. keep it up

monsitj
01-14-2005, 02:49 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105717758_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105717758_large.jpg)

here is progress :>

walrus
01-14-2005, 04:19 PM
You amaze me, Monsit! Not only are you an insanely talented 3D modeler - your 3D piece is my favorite - but here you are tackling 2D as well, and being unnecessarily modest about it, too. This is looking great, no crits here. Good luck finishing it, and most of all, have fun!
(and then take a break!)

-mike

MDN67
01-14-2005, 05:22 PM
Hi, the look of your mech is very fantastik, i like this and the paint of this it's great, good work and good luck

giocele
01-14-2005, 06:59 PM
:eek:
Great machine!
great colors!
I love the "electric effect" too!

very good. keep going!:thumbsup:

Aethyrprime
01-14-2005, 09:58 PM
I friggin love this work Monsit! Keep it up! Your progress is excellent!

Fahrija
01-15-2005, 12:53 AM
Hi monsit,

your skills rock!

Just a question:
What brush did you use to get the nice gradation on the surface without applying any glossiness on the metal parts?

Fahrija

monsitj
01-15-2005, 05:53 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105771978_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105771978_large.jpg)

here is progress,i think the mech and assasin are done! have to focus to background and effect! wait for your comments!

conundrum
01-15-2005, 06:30 AM
awesome work, and incredibly fast, makes me sad to think that you can progress such a great painting in such a short time. i like the texture but maybe smooth a few focus parts of the main characters, just to emphasize them a bit. thats all though, its a top painting, good luck with this and your excellent 3d entry

monsitj
01-15-2005, 12:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105794756_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105794756_large.jpg)

after non-stop painting , i decided to move to final milestone , now just need comment to fine tune the image , thanks in advance!!

cuppacam
01-15-2005, 12:30 PM
Love the composition. The painting is superb! Only comment I can make at this stage is maybe darken the man's body a little. Bring up the contrast? Just a suggestion as this is a brilliant piece!

Good Luck

turbinea
01-15-2005, 12:48 PM
monsit, this is very fine piece! it is very cool, only thing i missing is some space opera element. at least some planet on background can help.

YasushAzush
01-15-2005, 01:08 PM
nice ....i like your style....

Nomad
01-15-2005, 02:58 PM
Great progress :applause:


If i can suggest one thing it will be nice if the guy have more colored elements.. I mean that not all the armor pieces have to be of the same color... some color variations or a "camouflage" texture shoud be interesting :curious:


Looking forward to see the final picture :bounce:

monsitj
01-15-2005, 04:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105810099_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105810099_large.jpg)

final image!(I hope) many thanks for all of your comments! here is story,

dark assasin is the special agent that work in the cold war
of universe, he has ability to sneak in to the enemy base and complete the objective , but this new mission is not easy as he thought , now it's time to test his close combat fighting , fight for the universe!!

enjoy

Fahrija
01-15-2005, 04:44 PM
Hi Monsit,

damn are you fast! Great mood and atmosphere. The only little thing is the feel for grandness. Anyway - great work.

Fahrija

monsitj
01-16-2005, 02:40 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105846834_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/6/3768/3768_1105846834_large.jpg)

that's it ! final image ,
about the "grand" theme , i want to capture the moment of epic battle , but battle has different scale , I want to capture the mood of "spy" and"battle" in the space battle ,so it's come out in my image , just want to explain my concept ,but it's hard ,coz my poor english! anyway , enjoy!!

conundrum
01-16-2005, 02:44 AM
congratulations on finishing such a great painting so quickly. the action is superb and i really like the colours. good luck

cgkrusty
01-16-2005, 03:46 AM
Beautiful work... I'd love to see you deepen the shadows a bit more which will add some emphasis to the great lighting you have!

Great work!

ecura
01-16-2005, 01:43 PM
This turns out to be great, I have been monitoring the 3D stuff that goes on aswell and just realse one of my favourite 3D pic was create from you. What I a surprise, you did manage to do both 2D and 3D challenges and were well and truely capable of delievering it amazingly. I can't say more of your achieve but its seems as though you have masters both of these worlds. Great work and best of luck in both of these worlds.

Kraull
01-16-2005, 05:41 PM
Lucky you to have already finished! :) It looks just great by the way! Wish you the best luck with your 2 entries! :thumbsup:

AirbORn
01-16-2005, 10:06 PM
Congratulations on finishing your entry, what surprises me is how well you did the textures, you could easily mistaken it for a 3D entry :) GOod luck!!

Fahrija
01-16-2005, 10:17 PM
Unfortunately two 3d entries are not possible :)

I love the texture - Iīm a big fan of metal textures. I would be very glad if you
tell me about your way to do it if you donīt mind.

Fahrija

monsitj
01-17-2005, 04:09 AM
many many thanks guys for your words!! this is my second full project 2d paint , i never finish 2d paint when i do my personal project , but with the project like this challenge , i can get profession artist over the world 's comments , which is very useful to improve skill! but i just begin in this area , i look the orther 2d entries , their entries are awesome and profession , image look sharp and clean , but i think i have a long way to go ! and i really enjoy to paint! ,and again thank you for your support!

Fahrija : sorry to reply you late about the blend method , i just buy don segmiller's charactor design and painting photoshop edition , it' help me start very quickly , i use his techniques about blend , he use heal brush ! i never thought that this tool can use like this , he use heal brush with option set to pattern and select white background , you can use texture aswell , very cool ,
and about texture , i also use custom made brush to paint texture layer and overlay it to color layer, quick and dirty!
one thing that i want to know is how to get the clean and smooth image like your entry! anyway long way to go !! good luck and see ya in next challenge!!

Fahrija
01-17-2005, 05:39 AM
Hi Monsit,

thank you very much for your information. I consider to get don segmiller's charactor edition. And I will try out what youīve said.

Itīs really funny. In opposite I would love to give my pictures a dirty touch. :)

Good luck with your challenge-artwork-masterpieces

Till next


Fahrija

Rook
01-19-2005, 03:03 PM
I really like the mech and the sense of movement. 2d and 3d? You have been a busy guy.

Virtuoso
01-19-2005, 10:00 PM
I cant say beautiful work with this..............................................But I can say "Wicked nice" thats for sure.:thumbsup: ........Very interesting and intense piece.great job Monsit.I enjoy this very much................We should create together something wild and wicked....I have ideas..................let me know.............:buttrock:

ace4016
01-21-2005, 06:29 AM
Wow, i was just voting and I found your 2d thread, didn't know you had a 2d entry. Amazing entry, i wish i found this one sooner during development. Good luck on the voting, on both your threads.

NinjaA55N
01-21-2005, 10:21 AM
Im not sure if I posted anything in ur thread, but I really should. Lots of action and great figures, style, everything. good luck at the voting process!

ArtisticVisions
01-21-2005, 05:54 PM
monsitj: Wow, man, you must've been busy as heck working in both the 3D and 2D Challenges. It really shows that you put a lot of yourself into your works: they all have a great sense of style and depth to them a lot of others lack. Great work. :)

adel3d
01-23-2005, 12:20 PM
WoW
Awesome Work :applause:
You Had my Vote!:deal:

Lovliebutterfly
01-23-2005, 08:01 PM
Nice work! Good drawing and nice coloring!

goktugg
04-18-2005, 03:11 PM
nice work `mate:)

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