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JJASSO 10-17-2004, 02:14 AM http://www.cgnetworks.com/gallerycrits/23487/23487_1097975681_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/gallerycrits/23487/23487_1097975681.jpg)
Title: A Spiritual City
Name: Jaime Jasso
Country: Mexico
Software: Photoshop
a matte painting I did early , whit over 70 photos I found all over the net, (niagara falls,iguazu falls brasil, mosque's in turkey and jerusalen ) let me know what you think
http://img50.exs.cx/img50/9809/mattewaterfallsfinalSxat.jpg
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I-NetGraFX
10-17-2004, 10:04 AM
This's pretty awesome! Interesting composition to look at.
Somehow I'm not sure where the light comes from.
Although there's overcast, there are different lightdirections in your matte painting (especially the treegroup to the very right). I think the lower right corner needs some more work (cloning artefacts, brush strokes, color values, etc..).
But this's just my opinion . . .
Anyway, keep up the good work! :)
Cheers, Daniel
pierrebixquert
10-17-2004, 11:11 AM
it seems one you take care of enchanted.
very good composition.
ervine
10-17-2004, 11:16 AM
Wow that looks pretty good! don't know about the tilitng of the camera though...
celmar
10-17-2004, 01:40 PM
very good mood!... but there are also a lot of perspective problems!... the bacground part of the city seems not in the same perspective point than the foreground part; and the "angle" of the falls, in the middle, is impossible in perspective, too... anyway, maybe it's not important, after all!...
theCloudmover
10-17-2004, 01:46 PM
You could probably nitpick this to death but overall I think this is FANTASTIC!!
:applause:
jsandoval
10-17-2004, 07:10 PM
Admirable composite... maybe I could find too something to crit, but staring at the magnificient view distract me from doing that. Absolutamente impresionante, reminds me some scene in Episode II (Star wars).
Kyena
10-17-2004, 08:11 PM
pardon my ignorance..but is it a manipulation or are there painted parts?
tfwoods3
10-17-2004, 11:27 PM
Looks cool to me :) Would be nice to put a few people on the close tower.
JJASSO
10-18-2004, 12:41 AM
hey guys thanks for your feedback, I appreciatte all your comments as well, about this image I did it all whit joining more than 70 photos togheter, and whit some 100% painted elements too little to watch , everything is from scratch as I was getting the photos I wanted, that why maybe in some building the perspective looks wrong or weird , but it is all I could do so far , yeah I really wanted to put some soldiers looking or watching trough the foreground tower I will do it later ,
thanks to all of you
RLyons
10-18-2004, 03:05 AM
fantastic, 5 stars from me.
xiaoyi
10-18-2004, 06:46 AM
very nice matte painting.is fantasy.This is personal suggestion.sorry.I think that if is I, I will plus in the distant place near the fortress a little more bird, thus a view will seem to be greatly.:)
SpaceTik
10-18-2004, 09:24 AM
I love this! And the light's definately from the left. My only crit is that the distant water level is a bit too high.
Rascal-VFX
10-18-2004, 12:24 PM
Superb matte, but i think mix b&w and color not so good in this option and i see different light dir.
Great evocative landscape. Waterfalls are really well done.
JJASSO
10-18-2004, 06:04 PM
thanks again for the comments and yes light is supposed to be from the left , but I guess it didn't work for some buildings.
neutronic
10-19-2004, 01:33 AM
frontpage!! the water is incredible !
Tilstrom
10-19-2004, 09:00 AM
Excellent job mate, very nice work. :)
JJASSO
10-20-2004, 02:06 AM
this are just a few of the main photosho I used to build this city
http://img49.exs.cx/img49/6474/fotosbye.jpg
Steveyola
11-09-2004, 06:15 AM
Beautiful.I can look at it for a long while man.Nice indeedy.:buttrock:
AMoN-AMoK
11-14-2004, 09:52 PM
http://img121.exs.cx/img121/9084/garfield10.jpggood work, nice comp.
subnurbs
12-16-2004, 06:31 AM
Very Inspiring... it might be interesting to do an evil/dark version of the compostion!
ZombieFrog
12-18-2004, 04:00 AM
WOW! sooo much detail!
clever_guy
01-28-2005, 05:26 AM
Great composition and imagination in pulling all the components together!!!
:applause:
-CG
vortex3010
03-08-2005, 09:20 PM
Wow... I want to visit there! well all those photos just seem to bleed into each other cause i can't spot even the smallest seem. Great job!
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