Animation Reel

[Demilliac]

ok, there is an update, I have deleted some part who was not really appropriate.

there it is :
http://demilliac.free.fr/wip/DemilliacReel2004.02.1Mbps.zip

is it better or ... ?

[sinokgr]

Hi Demilliac! I've just saw your reel (the second).. Very good!! Well done! I loved that "egg" with the bell and the crowd!! :buttrock:

[joss3D]

yeah, you rock man....WOUUUU :thumbsup:

reste plus qu'a faire le tour des boite avec ta demo sous le bras!

[GameFace]

Ok i see some things you could work on. I think there needs to be more harsh crits throughout these forums cas i wouldnt want anyone to not crit mines to the full.

This is just what i think. the walk cycles i think should be one after the other because there is so many different perspectives on the screen its too busy to keep up and pay attention.
i really like the jump from mushroom shapes to mushroom shapes. how ever the jump into shot to the firs tmushroom felt too floaty. it didnt feel like a jump in. i think it should be tad bit slower and an arc in his entrance. Also offset his landings a bit i notice both feet land on the mushrooms at the same time. have one land slight earlier before the other stuff like that makes good animations.

I reallly reaaaaaly love the suttle reaction of his left hand right after hearing the phone ring. That was well done man!! . I think you could use a slight move in the torso too a slight rotation back or somen. you know like a stlight move back very slight in the torso right when the phone rings.

upon brining the phone to his ear it goes through the table naughty naughty lolol!
you have him reaching for the phone and grabbing the end of the table at the same exact time he should do one first then the other.. reach for the phone while its near to his ears and hes leaning back then grab the edge of the table with the left hand.. see what i mean?.

in yoru walk cycles. break your joints a lil bit dont know what i mean look it up in the richard williams survival kit breaking the elbow joins giving a more smooth flow in the arm swing. also your wrists need to have that delay sing in them like it follows the arm but late..

I think your stuff is real good man.. just stuff you gotta learn like all of us do I would love to trade crits and stories with you as an animator.

im ruel you can email me at ruel@ruelproductions.com keep animating alive man!

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