Ferdinand Terado - Animation Sessions 10 - dialogue 01

[Suricate]

Hi Ferdinand,

looks already very well! :thumbsup:

Some minor crits:

1. After 'See this ...' the character seems to freeze for a moment, maybe you can add some slight bidy movement there.

2. Maybe raise the camera (move up along Y-axis) and zoom out a little bit, so that in the final shot the viewer not only sees the muzzle, but also the barrel of the gun.

Keep going !

[s3ksee]

Hi Ferdinand,

looks already very well! :thumbsup:

Some minor crits:

1. After 'See this ...' the character seems to freeze for a moment, maybe you can add some slight bidy movement there.

2. Maybe raise the camera (move up along Y-axis) and zoom out a little bit, so that in the final shot the viewer not only sees the muzzle, but also the barrel of the gun.

Keep going !

Thanks dude...yeah, gotta do somethin' about that hold at "see this?"
I have to think about the "boom" part a bit - I intended the rifle to be really
in your face to emphasize the "boom" part. If i zoom out and show more of
the barrel, I'll lose the whole effect (this is also the reason why i used a ridiculously
narrow lense, to make the foreground objects really big).

Well, I got me another couple o' weeks to juice it up.

pea zout :buttrock:

[harmonic01]

I kind of like how it's in your face at the Boom and don't really care to see the rest of the barrel. I wonder if around frame 139 you can push that jumping pose a bit more. Like bending his spine back and his head back and his right leg a big more back. Kind of to exagerate that jump pose. I think that might give your final "Boom" pose more bang.

eh, just a thought. :-)

looking good, though.:thumbsup:

[s3ksee]

I kind of like how it's in your face at the Boom and don't really care to see the rest of the barrel. I wonder if around frame 139 you can push that jumping pose a bit more. Like bending his spine back and his head back and his right leg a big more back. Kind of to exagerate that jump pose. I think that might give your final "Boom" pose more bang.

eh, just a thought. :-)

looking good, though.:thumbsup:

And it's a damn good thought too. Thanks, I'll do as you suggest.
an animator can get tunnel vision after staring at the same animation for hours.
Good thing you spotted that. :applause:

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