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[phaction3]

I'd say work on the textures and the lighting some more. Why is there a city scene for the reflection map? It doesn't really make sense to me when the watch is sitting on a blue cloth background. Think about the overall environment you're going for, then light and texture accordingly.

[raffael3d]

how would you improve the lighting? Make it brighter, Radiosity, HDRI, what do you think works best?
Are you student of the Savannah College? I also wanted to go there, but it was to expensive for me.

[moonman]

Isn't the face on the wrong way round? When you look at your watch the 12 should be at the top by the strap rather than on its side. Just a thought. Like it though!

[clifford]

I'm ok with the previous post ... the 12 must be rotated by 45 degrees.
Put your object on a floor/pillow/table/anything you want to cast some shadows and try to render it with HDRI/GI with a good and realistic reflection map.
Some work on the leather (or anything it is) with a little more specular could make it great.

Nice try anyway :)
Keep on trying .. always ;)

See u
Cliff.

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