a soldier with a little samurai....

[AndyH]

back again, eh? Havent seen you around much since your last 3d-fest...
Not bad, but I think this needs more work to be honest.
To make it easier for both of us, ill list the problem areas:

Skin is too luminous and bright compared to the rest of the model.
The eyes look bizzarre - too wide & wrong shape.
Shoulders and spine seem too far back - almost like hes leaning backwards.
Arms seem very long.

Keep at it methinks - it should look a lot better with a bit more work.
Best of luck!

[GoK]

3d fest.. heheh.. i like that thanks :) ill get onto it man thanks for the crits. at the moment the skin is 100% self illumination.. should i do that?? or bring it down a bit?! ill shorted the arms and sort out the spine thanks for pointing that out! i need to add some more details like buckles, creases and such... iv tried playing around with the eyes but cant seem to get it quite right.... :(

Thanks, Jody

[GoK]

ok quick update b4 bed yyaaawwwwwn im all pandad and i wanna sleep so gnit, not hade a chance to sort the crits yet but plenty time after work tomorrow :)

Jody

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